| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "tapestry" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "resolving" | | 15 | "resolved" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1318 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1198 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 25 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 11 | | Ahead | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Through | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Through" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Half-Fae" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.457 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 20.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the light source" | | 1 | "felt like she was moving through syrup" | | 2 | "As if sensing their gaze, the figure looked up—directly at Aurora—and raised a goblet in salute" | | 3 | "something like pity" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.759 | | wordCount | 1318 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sky, but a starscape Aurora didn't recognize" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.62 | | std | 18.12 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals shifting from indigo to gold as she watched, their scent thick as honey." | | 1 | "She reached out—" | | 2 | "Time stretched and compressed—Aurora's watch hands spun lazily backward before stopping altogether." | | 3 | "Through the distortion, Aurora glimpsed impossible shapes—towers of living crystal, bridges spun from spider silk, things that moved in ways that defied physics." | | 4 | "From the corner of her eye, Aurora caught movement—shapes flitting between the trees, too fast to focus on." | | 5 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth—a sound like dry leaves, though nothing moved." | | 6 | "The vines twisted and knotted themselves as they watched, forming patterns that tugged at Aurora's mind, promising secrets if she'd just look a little longer—" | | 7 | "The stone pulsed once, twice, and the thorns shivered apart to reveal a new path—this one lined with mushrooms that glowed a sickly yellow." | | 8 | "As her reflection resolved, she didn't see her own face staring back, but a figure wreathed in shadow—their eyes twin points of violet light, their hands clawed and grasping." | | 9 | "From the depths rose a sound—low, resonant, vibrating in Aurora's bones." | | 10 | "As if sensing their gaze, the figure looked up—directly at Aurora—and raised a goblet in salute." | | 11 | "Behind them, the whispers rose to a crescendo—laughter now, cruel and bright and hungry." |
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| 86.55% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1216 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.04851973684210526 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013157894736842105 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 12.8 | | std | 6.89 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 53.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.34951456310679613 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the ever-shifting flowers froze" | | 1 | "Then came the whispers, just" | | 2 | "Then the trees opened up" | | 3 | "Even the air seemed to" | | 4 | "Then suddenly they were through," | | 5 | "Somewhere beyond the Veil, something" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots left no impression" | | 1 | "they whispered, the words curling" | | 2 | "She reached out—" | | 3 | "They moved deeper, the grove" | | 4 | "Their six-fingered hands carried a" | | 5 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 6 | "Her breath came in short" | | 7 | "She trailed her fingers through" | | 8 | "She recoiled, but the image" | | 9 | "They ran as the grove" | | 10 | "Her watch ticked normally again," | | 11 | "She looked at Aurora with" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered like heat" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 3 | "Aurora looked down." | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals" | | 5 | "Her boots left no impression" | | 6 | "The air tasted electric, like" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy" | | 8 | "they whispered, the words curling" | | 9 | "The bark pulsed with faint" | | 10 | "She reached out—" | | 11 | "Isolde caught her wrist, the" | | 12 | "Aurora pulled back just as" | | 13 | "The Fae-forged blade at her" | | 14 | "They moved deeper, the grove" | | 15 | "Time stretched and compressed—Aurora's watch" | | 16 | "The canopy overhead revealed a" | | 17 | "Nyx pointed to a clearing" | | 18 | "The scent of roasting meat" | | 19 | "Isolde's lavender eyes darkened." |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing their gaze," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pulled back just as the nearest trunk shuddered, the glowing patterns rearranging themselves into something that looked disturbingly like a face." | | 1 | "The canopy overhead revealed a sky that wasn't sky at all, but a swirling tapestry of colors too vivid to name, shot through with streaks of silver like comet t…" | | 2 | "Through the distortion, Aurora glimpsed impossible shapes—towers of living crystal, bridges spun from spider silk, things that moved in ways that defied physics…" | | 3 | "Their six-fingered hands carried a platter of fruits that glistened like jewels, their smile revealing too many teeth." | | 4 | "The Fae blade's glow intensified, casting sharp shadows that didn't quite match the light source." | | 5 | "The vines twisted and knotted themselves as they watched, forming patterns that tugged at Aurora's mind, promising secrets if she'd just look a little longer—" | | 6 | "The stone pulsed once, twice, and the thorns shivered apart to reveal a new path—this one lined with mushrooms that glowed a sickly yellow." | | 7 | "The trees groaned as if in pain, their bioluminescent veins dimming." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She trailed, and the stars rippled, forming new patterns" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |