| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She swallowed hard [hard]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 86.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "intricate" | | 3 | "chaotic" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "normalcy" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "disrupted" | | 13 | "leveraging" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1077 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 899 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 18 | | Quinn | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Market | 9 | | Veil | 3 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 10 | | Compass | 1 | | Agreeing | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.499 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed so thin" | | 1 | "as though sensing the energy in the air" | | 2 | "seemed subtly different one shimmering where the others lay dull—an anomaly that might speak if she listened closely enough" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.929 | | wordCount | 1077 | | matches | | 0 | "not revisit but duty, ever relentless, called her here again" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 69.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 46.83 | | std | 18.37 | | cv | 0.392 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 77 | | 22 | 54 |
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| 85.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "was sprawled" | | 1 | "was tinted" | | 2 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "Her presence here would not go unnoticed; her police badge, tucked discreetly into her jacket, felt heavier with the awareness that even this realm wasn’t beyond the law." | | 1 | "Harlow had called in a favor; Eva’s expertise in matters of the occult might offer insights where traditional policing failed." | | 2 | "His skin bore no marks of violence—an anomaly that set her instincts on edge." | | 3 | "Harlow nodded, pulling a small brass compass from her pocket—the Veil Compass she’d acquired on her last visit." | | 4 | "Each cobblestone seemed subtly different, one shimmering where the others lay dull—an anomaly that might speak if she listened closely enough." | | 5 | "“Someone wants the balance here disrupted, leveraging the Market’s chaos to cover their tracks.” Her gaze drifted beyond the crime scene, into the pulsing heart of the Market—it was a festering wound whose infection spread with every stall, every secret deal struck in its shadows." | | 6 | "She’d have to walk this dangerous path carefully—one misstep and the Market could close its ranks around them, exhibiting the very supernatural hostility she’d only glimpsed." | | 7 | "Through her years as a detective, Harlow had learned that truth often lay in anomalies—that the simple act of paying attention could reveal what others missed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03969128996692393 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018743109151047408 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 18.57 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 45 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 85.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5344827586206896 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the flesh was tinted" | | 1 | "Slowly, she pried the stone" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 1 | "It was a place she’d" | | 2 | "She produced a bone token" | | 3 | "Her presence here would not" | | 4 | "She found it in a" | | 5 | "She adjusted her round glasses" | | 6 | "His skin bore no marks" | | 7 | "Its face was etched with" | | 8 | "she repeated, considering" | | 9 | "Their eyes met briefly, an" | | 10 | "She swallowed hard" | | 11 | "Her gaze drifted beyond the" | | 12 | "She’d have to walk this" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn arrived at" | | 1 | "A dull hum of distant" | | 2 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 3 | "The Veil Market sprawled beneath" | | 4 | "A chaotic symphony of haggling" | | 5 | "Harlow had been here once" | | 6 | "It was a place she’d" | | 7 | "She produced a bone token" | | 8 | "The gatekeeper, a figure shrouded" | | 9 | "Her presence here would not" | | 10 | "The scene of the crime" | | 11 | "She found it in a" | | 12 | "Eva Kowalski stood within the" | | 13 | "Harlow had called in a" | | 14 | "Eva greeted, her voice carrying" | | 15 | "She adjusted her round glasses" | | 16 | "Harlow nodded, eyes narrowing as" | | 17 | "The victim was sprawled on" | | 18 | "His skin bore no marks" | | 19 | "Harlow asked, crouching down beside" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "If a shade artisan were" | | 1 | "Now, that skill was her" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She wrapped her fingers around the worn leather strap of her watch, feeling its familiar texture against her wrist as if it might ground her in this place where…" | | 1 | "The Veil Market sprawled beneath the station, an intricate web of stalls and shadowed nooks, its vendors hawking wares that should not exist." | | 2 | "As Harlow approached, Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, her fingers lingering there as if uncertain of their next move." | | 3 | "His skin bore no marks of violence—an anomaly that set her instincts on edge." | | 4 | "Its face was etched with intricate sigils, needle shivering as though sensing the energy in the air." | | 5 | "Each cobblestone seemed subtly different, one shimmering where the others lay dull—an anomaly that might speak if she listened closely enough." | | 6 | "Together, they began their hunt through the Market’s labyrinthine passageways, past stalls piled high with improbable wonders and impossibilities that whispered…" | | 7 | "Now, that skill was her compass in a sea of shadows where ordinary evidence was bent and fractured, demanding interpretation that challenged every rule she knew…" | | 8 | "Harlow felt each step resonate beneath her feet, felt the Market breathe around them, waiting patiently, as if it too had secrets to share, once the shadows wer…" |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva greeted, her voice carrying a blend of wariness and relief" | | 1 | "Eva declared, rising to stand at Harlow’s shoulder" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Eva declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |