Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCPQ833NFRZ4ESZSJH5FR

Run Details

Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.001162

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of spices wafting through the air as she stirred a pot of simmering curry. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound around her ankles, purring softly, oblivious to the tension that had settled in her chest. She had just finished her shift at the Golden Empress, the rhythmic clatter of takeout containers still echoing in her mind, when a sudden knock shattered the evening's calm. She paused, wooden spoon hovering over the pot, heart racing. The knock came again, more insistent this time. It was late, too late for a delivery, and she felt a flicker of dread. Who could it be? She wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the door, her mind racing through a list of possibilities. With a deep breath, she approached the door, her pulse quickening with each step. She peered through the peephole, and her breath caught in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, his slicked-back platinum hair gleaming under the dim hallway light. The sight of him sent a rush of memories flooding back—his laughter, the way his amber and black eyes sparkled with mischief, the way he had once made her feel alive. But that was before. Before the arguments, the misunderstandings, the way they had parted with words left unspoken and wounds still fresh. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the doorknob. What could he possibly want? The last time they had spoken, it had ended in a heated exchange that left her feeling raw and exposed. But the knock came again, softer this time, almost tentative. “Rory,” he called, his voice smooth and rich, like dark chocolate. “I know you’re in there.” She swallowed hard, her heart thudding in her chest. “What do you want, Lucien?” she managed to call back, trying to keep her voice steady. “Can we talk?” The simplicity of his request sent a shiver down her spine. She opened the door a crack, just enough to see his face, the familiar features that had once brought her comfort now twisted with uncertainty. “Now? You just show up unannounced?” “I know it’s late, but I need to explain,” he said, his voice low, almost pleading. She hesitated, the weight of their shared history pressing down on her. “I don’t think there’s anything left to explain.” “Please,” he said, and the sincerity in his tone made her heart ache. “Just let me in.” Against her better judgment, she opened the door wider, stepping back to let him in. The moment he crossed the threshold, the air shifted, charged with an electric tension that made her skin prickle. Ptolemy, sensing the change, darted into the living room, tail flicking as he settled on a pile of books. Lucien looked around the flat, his gaze lingering on the clutter of scrolls and research notes that filled every surface. “You’ve really made yourself at home,” he remarked, a hint of a smile tugging at his lips. “Yeah, well, it’s not like I had much choice,” she replied, crossing her arms defensively. “What do you want, Lucien?” He turned to face her, his expression serious. “I came to apologize.” “Apologize?” The word felt foreign on her tongue, a bitter taste. “You think an apology is going to fix everything?” “I know it won’t,” he said, his voice steady. “But I need you to understand why I did what I did.” “Why you pushed me away?” she shot back, her anger flaring. “You had no right to treat me like that.” “I was trying to protect you,” he said, his eyes earnest. “You don’t know the dangers I deal with. I thought—” “You thought what?” she interrupted, her voice rising. “That I couldn’t handle it? That I was just some fragile human who needed saving?” “No, Rory, that’s not it at all.” He stepped closer, the space between them charged with unspoken words. “I didn’t want to drag you into my world. It’s dangerous, and I didn’t want you to get hurt.” “And yet here you are,” she said, her voice trembling. “You’re back in my life, uninvited, and I’m the one who’s supposed to feel safe?” He ran a hand through his hair, frustration etched on his face. “I know I messed up. I should have trusted you. I should have let you in.” “Trust?” she scoffed, shaking her head. “You shattered that the moment you decided to shut me out.” “I was scared,” he admitted, his voice dropping to a whisper. “Scared of losing you. Scared of what I am.” The vulnerability in his admission caught her off guard. She had always known there was more to Lucien than met the eye, a darkness lurking beneath his polished exterior. “What do you mean?” He hesitated, his gaze flickering to the floor. “I’m not just a fixer, Rory. I’m half-demon. My father is from Avaros, and that world is filled with dangers you can’t even begin to imagine.” She felt a chill run down her spine. “You think I can’t handle it?” “No, I think you’re too good for it,” he said, his eyes locking onto hers, fierce and unyielding. “I didn’t want to drag you into my mess. I thought I was doing the right thing.” “By pushing me away?” she challenged, her heart racing. “You thought that was the right thing?” “I was wrong,” he said, stepping closer, the heat radiating from him almost palpable. “I see that now. I should have fought for you, not against you.” The air between them thickened, the tension crackling like static electricity. She could feel the weight of his gaze, the intensity of his presence drawing her in despite the hurt that still lingered. “And what do you want now?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “I want a second chance,” he said, his voice low and earnest. “I want to show you that I can be better. That I can be the man you deserve.” Her heart raced at his words, a mix of hope and fear swirling within her. “You think it’s that easy? That I can just forget everything?” “No, I don’t expect you to forget,” he said, his voice steady. “But I want to try. I want to prove to you that I can be trusted.” She searched his eyes, looking for any hint of deception, but all she found was sincerity. The memories of their time together flooded her mind—the laughter, the stolen kisses, the way he had made her feel alive. But there was also the pain, the betrayal, the feeling of being cast aside. “I don’t know, Lucien,” she said, her voice trembling. “It’s complicated.” “Life is complicated,” he replied, his voice softening. “But I’m willing to navigate it with you. If you’ll let me.” The vulnerability in his eyes made her heart ache. She wanted to believe him, to trust him again, but the scars of their past still throbbed beneath the surface. “What if you hurt me again?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Then I’ll spend the rest of my life making it right,” he said, his gaze unwavering. “I promise you that.” For a moment, silence enveloped them, the weight of their shared history hanging in the air. Aurora felt the walls she had built around her heart begin to crack, the possibility of something new flickering to life within her. “Okay,” she said finally, her voice steady. “But it’s going to take time.” “I’m willing to wait,” he replied, a hint of relief washing over his features. “I’ll do whatever it takes.” As they stood there, the distance between them slowly closing, Aurora felt a spark of hope ignite within her. Perhaps this time, they could find a way to navigate the complexities of their lives together. Perhaps they could rewrite their story, one word at a time.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said, his voice low, almost pleading [almost]"
1"she replied, crossing her arms defensively [defensively]"
2"he said, stepping closer, the heat radiating from him almost palpable [almost]"
3"she said finally, her voice steady [finally]"
62.3210% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"simmering"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"unwavering"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count2
highlights
0"palpable"
1"throbbed"
2"simmering"
3"flicker"
4"gleaming"
5"unwavering"
6"unspoken"
7"weight"
8"echoing"
9"etched"
10"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
1"a spark of hope"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"shattered that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.4
std16.08
cv0.547
sampleLengths
075
157
281
322
443
516
625
73
842
916
1020
1117
1253
1337
1420
1512
1620
1721
1820
1921
2023
2137
2225
2328
2417
2520
2633
2734
2814
2935
3016
3127
3247
3330
3426
3528
3651
3711
3820
3943
4020
4139
4213
4319
4446
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
99.6465% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount891
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04040404040404041
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008978675645342313
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.84
std6.04
cv0.47
sampleLengths
026
120
229
310
48
515
64
720
814
912
1024
1131
124
1318
148
155
1620
1710
1811
195
209
2116
223
2311
2425
256
2616
2712
288
2913
304
3115
3219
3319
3420
3517
3615
375
388
394
4011
419
429
4312
4411
459
4611
4710
488
4915
52.4272% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.34951456310679613
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners36
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice low, almost pleading (say, plead)"
1"he said, and the sincerity in his tone made her heart ache (say, make)"
2"he remarked, a hint of a smile tugging at his lips (remark, tug)"
3"she replied, crossing her arms defensively (reply, cross)"
4"he admitted, his voice dropping to a whisper (admit, drop)"
5"he said, his eyes locking onto hers, fierce and unyielding (say, lock)"
6"he said, stepping closer, the heat radiating from him almost palpable (say, step radiate)"
7"he replied, his voice softening (reply, soften)"
8"he said, his gaze unwavering (say, unwaver)"
9"she said finally, her voice steady (say finally)"
84.1801%