Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCPWH5KE48SKND6CZY8ZV

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Duration:
8.8s
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$0.000366

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked open in quick succession, the final one echoing through the narrow hallway like a gunshot. Rory stood in the doorway, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the unexpected visitor. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, leaned against the doorframe, his heterochromatic gaze steady on her. One hand rested casually on the ivory handle of his cane, the other held a bouquet of black roses, their petals as dark as a starless night. "Lucien," Rory breathed, her voice barely above a whisper. She hadn't seen him since that night, the one where she'd walked away, leaving him with nothing but questions and a shattered glass on the floor. Her heart pounded in her chest, a rhythm that echoed the memories of their past. "Rory," he replied, his voice as smooth as velvet, a stark contrast to the tension that hummed between them. He pushed off from the doorframe, his tailored charcoal suit shifting with the movement. "I apologize for the unannounced visit. I thought it best to... surprise you." Rory raised an eyebrow, stepping aside to let him in. "You always did have a flair for the dramatic, Luc." As he passed, she caught a whiff of his cologne, the scent of sandalwood and something else, something uniquely Lucien. It sent a shiver down her spine, a reminder of the nights they'd spent tangled together, of the laughter and the secrets they'd shared. The flat was a mess, as always. Books were stacked haphazardly on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the worn-out couch, and research notes littered the floor. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, looked up from his perch on the windowsill, his eyes narrowing at the intruder before he yawned and went back to his sunbathing. Lucien took it all in, his gaze lingering on the books, the notes, the cat. "You haven't changed a bit, Rory," he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Still the same chaos, the same... charm." Rory rolled her eyes, but she felt a warmth spread through her at the compliment. "And you're still the same neat freak, I see." She gestured to the bouquet in his hand. "What's with the roses? They're not exactly... conventional." Lucien looked down at the flowers, as if he'd forgotten he was holding them. "They reminded me of you," he said, his voice soft. "Dark, beautiful, a little dangerous." He held them out to her, his fingers brushing against hers as she took them. A jolt of electricity shot through her at the contact, a reminder of the connection that still hummed between them. Rory placed the roses in a vase, her fingers trembling slightly as she arranged them. "Why are you here, Luc?" she asked, turning to face him. "After all this time, why now?" Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the soft light from the window, his black eye unreadable. "I have a proposition for you, Rory," he said, his voice serious. "A job. One that could... benefit us both." Rory crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. "And what makes you think I'm interested in working with you again?" Lucien smiled, a slow, dangerous smile that sent a shiver down Rory's spine. "Because, my dear Rory, you've always been interested in the things I have to offer." Rory felt her cheeks flush at the innuendo, but she held his gaze, refusing to back down. "And what makes you think I haven't moved on? That I haven't found someone else to... offer me things?" Lucien's smile faded, his expression turning serious. "Because I know you, Rory. I know that you're not the type to settle for less than what you deserve. And I know that you're still hurting, still searching for something more." Rory looked away, her gaze falling on the stack of books by the couch. She thought of Evan, of the hurt and the fear he'd left behind. She thought of the nights she'd spent alone, the nights she'd spent wondering what could have been. And she thought of Lucien, of the way he made her feel alive, of the way he challenged her, pushed her, made her want to be more. She turned back to him, her expression guarded. "What's the job, Luc?" Lucien reached into his pocket, pulling out a small envelope. He held it out to her, his fingers brushing against hers again as she took it. "A client of mine has... lost something valuable. Something that needs to be found. I think you're the best person for the job." Rory opened the envelope, pulling out a photograph. It was a painting, a portrait of a woman with fiery red hair and eyes that seemed to burn with an otherworldly light. "Who is she?" Rory asked, her gaze drawn to the painting. "Her name is Morrigan," Lucien said, his voice low. "She's a... creature from my world. A powerful one. And she's gone missing." Rory looked up at him, her eyes meeting his. "And why do you need me to find her?" Lucien hesitated, his gaze flicking away from hers. "Because, Rory, she's not the only one who's gone missing. There are others, humans with... abilities. They've disappeared, and I think it's connected. I think Morrigan is the key to finding them." Rory looked back at the painting, her mind racing. She thought of the nights she'd spent researching, the nights she'd spent trying to understand the world beyond her own. She thought of the things she'd seen, the things she'd experienced, the things she still didn't understand. And she thought of Lucien, of the way he made her feel, of the way he challenged her, pushed her, made her want to be more. She looked up at him, her expression determined. "I'll do it," she said, her voice steady. "I'll find her, Luc. I'll find Morrigan." Lucien smiled, a genuine smile that lit up his eyes and sent a warmth spreading through Rory. "I knew you would, Rory," he said, his voice soft. "I knew you wouldn't be able to resist the challenge." Rory rolled her eyes, but she felt a smile tugging at her lips. "And what do I get out of this, Luc? Besides the satisfaction of a job well done?" Lucien's smile turned predatory, his gaze holding hers. "Whatever you want, Rory," he said, his voice low. "Whatever you want, I'll give it to you." Rory felt her heart pound in her chest, her breath coming faster as she held his gaze. She thought of the nights they'd spent together, of the way he'd made her feel, of the way he'd challenged her, pushed her, made her want to be more. She thought of the things she still wanted, the things she still needed, the things she still hadn't found. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Alright, Luc," she said, her voice steady. "Let's find Morrigan." As Lucien reached out to shake her hand, his fingers brushing against hers, Rory felt a spark ignite between them, a promise of things to come. She knew it wouldn't be easy, she knew there would be challenges, obstacles, dangers. But she also knew that with Lucien by her side, she could face anything. She could be anything. She could be more. And as she looked into his heterochromatic eyes, she knew that this was only the beginning. The beginning of a new journey, a new adventure, a new chapter in their story. And she couldn't wait to see what came next.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory breathed, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
84.0128% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.0384% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"velvet"
2"unreadable"
3"stark"
4"echoed"
5"echoing"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"on? That I"
1"know that you'reknow that you're"
2"knew that this"
77.8537% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean41.67
std17.6
cv0.422
sampleLengths
077
150
246
364
453
539
640
764
832
937
1019
1128
1236
1339
1471
1512
1649
1742
1822
1918
2040
2172
2223
2337
2430
2525
2665
2718
2862
2940
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"were stacked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was holding"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount935
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025668449197860963
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0074866310160427805
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean14.37
std6.85
cv0.477
sampleLengths
019
117
214
327
49
526
615
719
814
913
1010
1130
1224
137
1419
1527
1615
1717
187
1915
2017
218
2214
2310
2420
2520
2615
2711
286
2917
3012
318
327
3312
3413
3515
3617
3719
387
3932
4014
4113
4217
4327
448
454
4610
4716
4823
498
42.5287% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3103448275862069
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners27
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed, her voice barely above a whisper (breathe)"
1"he replied, his voice as smooth as velvet, a stark contrast to the tension that hummed between them (reply, hum)"
2"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips (say, play)"
87.6333%