| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory admitted softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 61.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "precisely" | | 5 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "surreal" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "dance" | | 9 | "cascading" | | 10 | "tapestry" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "otherworldly" | | 15 | "tinged" | | 16 | "tantalizing" | | 17 | "navigated" | | 18 | "potential" | | 19 | "testament" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1166 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 991 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Rory | 18 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Nearby | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.592 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed especially thick with magic" | | 1 | "oak that seemed to weave the threads of the grove overhead" | | 2 | "appeared more solid a peculiar juxtaposition to their usual wraith-like presence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.66% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.87 | | std | 12.45 | | cv | 0.32 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the cold—the kind that tickles at the base of the neck before spreading like the touch of an unseen fingers through the rest of the skin." | | 1 | "The wildflowers underfoot bloomed in defiant, vibrant hues—a riot against the onslaught of winter that lay beyond the stones." | | 2 | "Rory's fingers brushed against the petals, their texture atypical—softer, like silk woven from moonlight." | | 3 | "She found herself entranced by the subtle, sweet hum in the air—like a melody thrumming at the edge of consciousness." | | 4 | "Rory's fingertips brushed the handle of the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, feeling the chill seep into her skin—a reassuring reminder that she was more than a guest in this realm." | | 5 | "Rory stared hard at her reflection; it remained unnervingly honest, beyond the deceptive flickers of light." | | 6 | "There, beneath a slight rise dotted with bedstraw and cow parsley, lay a subtle, shimmering distortion in the air—a rift, a pulsing reminder of the tenuous boundary between realms that she navigated each day." | | 7 | "With a final, shared glance, the trio stepped back into the mundane world, returning with dreams and revelations nestled safely in their hearts—a testament to a brief sojourn: one weaving myth and magic within the web of the living earth." |
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| 93.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1001 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04595404595404595 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02097902097902098 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 18.51 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.401 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 64.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4126984126984127 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the cold—the kind" | | 1 | "It was the change in" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes, eternally" | | 3 | "They moved further in, weaving" | | 4 | "Its branches extended like an" | | 5 | "they remarked, catching Rory’s curious" | | 6 | "She found herself entranced by" | | 7 | "They reached a clearing where" | | 8 | "She tore herself away, focusing" | | 9 | "She gestured to an unseen" | | 10 | "They moved away from the" | | 11 | "She could see it now," |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 76.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The first step through the" | | 1 | "It wasn’t the cold—the kind" | | 2 | "It was the change in" | | 3 | "Aurora, or Rory as her" | | 4 | "The wildflowers underfoot bloomed in" | | 5 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 6 | "The wind wound through the" | | 7 | "Rory took another step, feeling" | | 8 | "Nyx's voice was soft, a" | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes, eternally" | | 10 | "Rory asked, keeping her voice" | | 11 | "Isolde replied, her tone edged" | | 12 | "They moved further in, weaving" | | 13 | "Rory's fingers brushed against the" | | 14 | "The Heartstone Pendant in her" | | 15 | "Rory paused beneath a sprawling" | | 16 | "Its branches extended like an" | | 17 | "Nyx's form rippled slightly, the" | | 18 | "they remarked, catching Rory’s curious" | | 19 | "Here, they appeared more solid," |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "To find herself within a" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The faint violet glow of their eyes brightened slightly, reflecting a kind of satisfaction or curiosity that was hard to place." | | 1 | "Rory took another step, feeling the earth pulse beneath her feet as if the grove itself acknowledged them." | | 2 | "Rory paused beneath a sprawling ancient oak that seemed to weave the threads of the grove overhead." | | 3 | "Here, the grove listened, it watched, each step across time-worn patterns awakening energies that thrummed and shifted." | | 4 | "Rory breathed deep, feeling the air buzz with fullness and a serenity that stole words from her lips." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "said Nyx, a hint of wonder tingling through their words" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory admitted softly (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |