Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPD0N0SD70CG19FN8T7GBM

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Duration:
30.9s
Cost:
$0.002256
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped down from the rusty Tube station staircase, her worn leather watch glinting in the faint light that filtered through the grimy platform windows. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and decay. Beneath Camden, the abandoned station had been transformed into a makeshift crime scene. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she approached the assault team cordoning off the area. "What've we got, Gibbs?" Quinn asked, her military precision evident in her stride, as she flashed her badge at the young officer securing the perimeter. Officer Gibbs nodded, his eyes darting to the scene behind him. " Victim's ID is pending, but the uniforms found her near the old ticket booths. Looks like a mugging gone wrong, except... well, you'll see, ma'am." Quinn's gaze swept the platform, taking in the scattered, makeshift stalls – remnants of the Veil Market, which was rumored to operate out of this location last night. Her eyes narrowed. The market's itinerant nature and penchant for secrecy made it a law enforcement nightmare. She had been tracking its movements for months, searching for a connection to the unexplained circumstances surrounding her partner's death three years ago. As she ducked under the cordon, a figure in a crumpled suit turned from examining the victim. "Quinn, glad you're here. This one's got me stumped," said Dr. Henry Lee, the department's chief forensic pathologist, his normally affable face furrowed. Quinn's eyes adjusted to the brighter light of the crime scene lamps, illuminating the victim – a young woman, early twenties, with curly red hair and round glasses perched on her forehead. A worn leather satchel lay nearby, its contents spilling out: dog-eared books, a notebook, and a small, brass compass with a face etched in protective sigils. "Eva Kowalski," Quinn murmured, recognizing the victim from her research on the occult circles in London. "Research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives." Dr. Lee nodded. "That's what her ID says. Now, here's where it gets weird – no signs of forced entry or struggle, but the victim's got lacerations on her palms and soles, consistent with... well, I've never seen anything quite like it." Quinn's attention was drawn to the satchel's contents. She carefully plucked out the brass compass, its casing bearing a patina of verdigris. "A Veil Compass. These are crafted by Shade artisans, supposedly attuned to supernatural energy." Dr. Lee raised an eyebrow. "Supernatural? Quinn, I think we're looking at a very human perpetrator. Maybe our victim stumbled into something she shouldn't have, given her... interests." He gestured to the scattered books. Quinn's gaze lingered on the compass before she placed it in a evidence bag. "I'd like to see the security footage, Gibbs. All cameras, including any from nearby businesses." As Gibbs nodded and hurried off, Quinn began a meticulous survey of the platform. Her eyes scanned the walls, the ticket booths, and the stalls, searching for discrepancies. That was when she noticed it – a tiny, almost imperceptible symbol etched into the wall near the victim's head, partially obscured by a discarded market stall banner. It looked like a crude, inverted crescent moon. "Lee, come take a look at this," Quinn said, her voice low, her sharp jaw set in a determined line. Dr. Lee ambled over, peering at the symbol. "Means nothing to me. Maybe a gang tag?" Quinn's gaze never left the symbol. "I've seen this before – in the cold case files from three years ago. The ones surrounding DS Morris's... accident." The silence between them was palpable. Dr. Lee's expression turned thoughtful. "You think there's a connection between this victim and your partner's case?" Quinn's eyes locked onto the symbol, her mind racing. "I think we're looking at more than just a mugging or a robbery gone wrong. Eva Kowalski was researching something, and I aim to find out what. Get me everything you can on her background, Lee. I want to know what she was working on, who she was seeing... and what this symbol really means." As Quinn straightened, her watch glinting in the light, Dr. Lee nodded. "On it, Quinn. But be careful – if this does tie back to your partner's case... we don't know what we're dealing with." Quinn's sharp jaw clenched, her brown eyes burning with a mix of determination and a hint of the unknown. "I've been careful for three years, Lee. It's time to unsettle the status quo." Her gaze swept the platform once more, the symbol seared into her memory, a new lead in a case that had haunted her for far too long.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount760
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount760
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"glinting"
count2
1
word"jaw clenched"
count2
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"determined"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"jaw clenched"
2"furrowed"
3"etched"
4"eyebrow"
5"scanned"
6"determined"
7"silence"
8"palpable"
9"racing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences40
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords767
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
6.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount488
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tube1
Camden1
Officer1
Gibbs2
Veil1
Market1
Dr6
Henry1
Lee6
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Officer"
3"Gibbs"
4"Dr"
5"Henry"
6"Lee"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.066
windowScore0.167
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a crude, inverted crescent mo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount767
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
77.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean40.37
std16.99
cv0.421
sampleLengths
066
125
237
368
440
558
624
742
836
934
1029
1164
1220
1316
1426
1523
1664
1735
1860
78.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences40
matches
0"been transformed"
1"was rumored"
2"was drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs72
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences50
ratio0.06
matches
0"Quinn's gaze swept the platform, taking in the scattered, makeshift stalls – remnants of the Veil Market, which was rumored to operate out of this location last night."
1"Quinn's eyes adjusted to the brighter light of the crime scene lamps, illuminating the victim – a young woman, early twenties, with curly red hair and round glasses perched on her forehead."
2"That was when she noticed it – a tiny, almost imperceptible symbol etched into the wall near the victim's head, partially obscured by a discarded market stall banner."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount486
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.01646090534979424
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0102880658436214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean15.34
std11.33
cv0.738
sampleLengths
027
112
213
314
425
511
626
728
83
914
1023
1117
1211
1312
1432
1526
1616
178
181
192
2039
218
2214
2314
241
254
2629
2714
2815
2914
3014
3128
328
3320
341
357
368
376
3820
396
401
414
4212
439
4455
4510
462
4723
4819
4941
76.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.46
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences33
matches
0"Her eyes narrowed."
1"She had been tracking its"
2"She carefully plucked out the"
3"He gestured to the scattered"
4"Her eyes scanned the walls,"
5"It looked like a crude,"
6"Her gaze swept the platform"
ratio0.212
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences33
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped down"
1"The air was heavy with"
2"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
3"Quinn asked, her military precision"
4"Officer Gibbs nodded, his eyes"
5"Quinn's gaze swept the platform,"
6"Her eyes narrowed."
7"The market's itinerant nature and"
8"She had been tracking its"
9"Henry Lee, the department's chief"
10"Quinn's eyes adjusted to the"
11"A worn leather satchel lay"
12"Quinn murmured, recognizing the victim"
13"Quinn's attention was drawn to"
14"She carefully plucked out the"
15"Lee raised an eyebrow."
16"He gestured to the scattered"
17"Quinn's gaze lingered on the"
18"Her eyes scanned the walls,"
19"That was when she noticed"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped down from the rusty Tube station staircase, her worn leather watch glinting in the faint light that filtered through the grimy pl…"
1"Quinn's gaze swept the platform, taking in the scattered, makeshift stalls – remnants of the Veil Market, which was rumored to operate out of this location last…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.125
71.6064%