| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 94.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 871 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 871 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "transfixed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "palpable" | | 8 | "glinting" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "affection" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "potential" | | 15 | "measured" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "solitary" | | 18 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of unspoken words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 34 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 874 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 753 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.77 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, seemingly bored with the tens" |
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| 85.58% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.144 | | wordCount | 874 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 48.56 | | std | 24.68 | | cv | 0.508 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 86 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 54 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The faint glow of the setting sun behind him cast an otherworldly aura, but it was the piercing contrast of his eyes – one amber, like warm sunset hues, the other black as the night – that truly held her transfixed." | | 1 | "Rory felt the familiar spark of unease, a reminder of why she had left Cardiff in the first place – to escape the shadows that lurked, unseen, in every corner of her life." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 752 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.031914893617021274 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013297872340425532 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 42 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 42 | | mean | 20.81 | | std | 9.54 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 38 |
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| 80.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 42 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "She set aside the papers," | | 1 | "He stepped inside, his movements" | | 2 | "She crossed her arms, a" | | 3 | "His tailored charcoal suit seemed" | | 4 | "He gestured towards the couch," | | 5 | "They had parted on complicated" | | 6 | "he interjected, his eyes glinting" | | 7 | "She moved to the armchair" | | 8 | "he replied, his voice measured" | | 9 | "she said finally, the word" |
| | ratio | 0.294 | |
| 18.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked, its hinges" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood poised, his" | | 2 | "The faint glow of the" | | 3 | "Rory acknowledged, her voice neutral," | | 4 | "She set aside the papers," | | 5 | "The bright blue of her" | | 6 | "Lucien's gaze, however, roamed freely," | | 7 | "He stepped inside, his movements" | | 8 | "She crossed her arms, a" | | 9 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 10 | "Lucien's voice was smooth, tinged" | | 11 | "His tailored charcoal suit seemed" | | 12 | "He gestured towards the couch," | | 13 | "Rory nodded curtly, her thoughts" | | 14 | "They had parted on complicated" | | 15 | "he interjected, his eyes glinting" | | 16 | "Ptolemy, seemingly bored with the" | | 17 | "Lucien's smile, as he reached" | | 18 | "Rory echoed, her curiosity piqued" | | 19 | "She moved to the armchair" |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's gaze, however, roamed freely, taking in the cluttered space of Eva's flat, his eyes lingering on the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who watched from the windowsil…" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit seemed out of place among the clutter of books and scrolls, yet he wore it with an ease that belied the discomfort his presence cause…" | | 2 | "Rory felt the familiar spark of unease, a reminder of why she had left Cardiff in the first place – to escape the shadows that lurked, unseen, in every corner o…" | | 3 | "Rory's heart thudded, a solitary beat, as she met Lucien's gaze, the unspoken understanding between them a spark ready to ignite into a fire that could either c…" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, his voice measured" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "he interjected (interject)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |