| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "enigmatic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "intricate" | | 13 | "treacherous" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "flicked" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "carried the weight" | | 20 | "firmly" | | 21 | "peril" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1280 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Silas | 10 | | Shade | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Isolde | 11 | | Seer | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rift | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Ahead" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | globalScore | 0.835 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like one, echoed through the trees" | | 1 | "seemed benign little more than curious observers" | | 2 | "as if matching the rhythm of her heart" | | 3 | "as if seeing something in them that satisfied her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1280 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.69% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 36.57 | | std | 17.48 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 25 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "been caught" | | 1 | "being drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was almost reassuring" | | 1 | "were speaking" |
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| 85.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Their vibrant petals—royal blue, fiery red, and every shade in between—swayed as if touched by an invisible breeze." | | 1 | "The grove was alive with sound—whispered secrets in the rustle of leaves, a delicate melody in the trickle of a hidden stream." |
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| 97.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1059 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.042492917847025496 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0084985835694051 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.93 | | std | 6.34 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 77.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.48484848484848486 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 80.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, the soft trill" | | 1 | "Suddenly, the temperature dropped, the" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 99.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, almost to herself," | | 1 | "Their vibrant petals—royal blue, fiery" | | 2 | "he murmured, his voice gruff" | | 3 | "she reminded herself more than" | | 4 | "He had never understood her" | | 5 | "They passed clusters of mushrooms" | | 6 | "They approached the twin oaks," | | 7 | "He pointed to a cluster" | | 8 | "she guessed, bending down to" | | 9 | "They seemed benign, little more" | | 10 | "she advised, standing up and" | | 11 | "She kept a hand on" | | 12 | "she asked, glancing at Silas" | | 13 | "he replied, eyes narrowing" | | 14 | "Her pale lavender eyes watched" | | 15 | "She stood still, leaving no" | | 16 | "she stated, trying to sound" | | 17 | "She gestured to a small" | | 18 | "They followed her to the" | | 19 | "she said, meeting Rory’s gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.301 | |
| 38.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped over the" | | 1 | "The transition was seamless, like" | | 2 | "she whispered, almost to herself," | | 3 | "Their vibrant petals—royal blue, fiery" | | 4 | "Silas, her stalwart companion, stepped" | | 5 | "he murmured, his voice gruff" | | 6 | "The faint shimmer of the" | | 7 | "Rory led the way, her" | | 8 | "The grove was alive with" | | 9 | "The very air seemed to" | | 10 | "she reminded herself more than" | | 11 | "Silas grunted an acknowledgment, keeping" | | 12 | "He had never understood her" | | 13 | "The trees grew taller, their" | | 14 | "The ground underfoot was soft," | | 15 | "They passed clusters of mushrooms" | | 16 | "They approached the twin oaks," | | 17 | "Rory said, halting beside them" | | 18 | "The path diverged into two" | | 19 | "Silas asked, surveying the options" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her stretched the Fae" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 21.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped over the ancient oak standing stones, her breath catching in her throat." | | 1 | "Their vibrant petals—royal blue, fiery red, and every shade in between—swayed as if touched by an invisible breeze." | | 2 | "Silas, her stalwart companion, stepped in behind her, his rough-hewn features softening in the enchanting light that filtered down through the canopy of silver-…" | | 3 | "The faint shimmer of the Veil still played at the edge of his vision, a ripple in the air that reminded him how close they were to something profoundly other." | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes watched them with the intensity of someone who saw far beyond the present." | | 5 | "Rory stepped forward, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck." | | 6 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly, as if matching the rhythm of her heart." | | 7 | "Isolde watched them for a moment longer, then nodded, as if seeing something in them that satisfied her." |
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| 5.95% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, eyes narrowing" | | 1 | "she stated, trying to sound more confident than she felt" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her eyes twinkling with ancient knowledge" | | 3 | "Isolde clarified, a hint of a smile on her lips" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she guessed (guess)" | | 3 | "she advised (advise)" | | 4 | "she stated (state)" | | 5 | "Isolde clarified (clarify)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |