Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPD45KM15Q82J421SWZEKD

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Duration:
44.1s
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$0.001127
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The heavy thud of knocking echoed through the flat, reverberating off the walls and books that lined every surface. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, had been lost in the pages of a worn leather-bound tome, her fingers tracing the faded ink as she silently mouthed the words. She hadn't expected any visitors on this damp, grey Tuesday evening, and the interruption pulled her from her concentration like a sharp tug on a fishing line. Reluctantly, she marked her place and stood, her joints stiff from hours of sitting. The flat's small size made the journey to the door quick, and by the time she reached it, the knocking had resumed, more insistent this time. She grabbed the edge of the door, her fingers curling around the cool wood, and took a deep breath before turning the lock and pulling it open. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, his tall frame filling the doorway. His slicked-back platinum blond hair gleamed under the dim streetlight, and his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—seemed to burn into hers. He was dressed in his usual impeccable charcoal suit, the lapels crisp and the seams perfectly pressed. In his hand, he held the ivory-handled cane that Rory knew concealed a thin, deadly blade. For a moment, they just stared at each other, the air thick with unspoken words and unresolved tensions. Rory's heart thudded in her chest, a strange mix of excitement and apprehension curling in her stomach. Lucien's presence always brought a storm of emotions, and she wasn't sure if she was ready to weather it again. "Lucien," she finally managed, her voice steady but tinged with caution. "What are you doing here?" He raised an eyebrow, a small smile playing at the corners of his lips. "Is it such a surprise, Rory? I thought we were friends, or at least, something close to it." Rory's grip on the door tightened. "We haven't spoken in months. You disappeared without a word." "I had my reasons," Lucien said, his voice smooth and disarming. "But I owe you an explanation, and I thought it best to do that in person." She studied him for a moment, her mind racing. She knew better than to let her guard down with Lucien. He was a half-demon, a man of many secrets, and his sudden reappearance was bound to bring trouble. But there was something in his eyes, a vulnerability she hadn't seen before, that made her curiosity get the better of her. "Fine," she said, stepping aside to let him in. "Come in, but make it quick. I have work in the morning." Lucien nodded, his smile widening slightly as he stepped into the flat. The scent of curry from the restaurant below wafted up, mingling with the musty smell of old books. He glanced around the cramped space, his eyes lingering on the stacks of books and scrolls that cluttered every available surface. The flat was a chaotic mess, but it was home to Rory, and she had made it her own. Rory closed the door and leaned against it, her eyes never leaving Lucien's face. "So, what's this all about?" Lucien moved gracefully to the small couch, settling into the cushions with a practiced ease. He ran a hand through his hair, a gesture that seemed almost nervous, and met her gaze. "I owe you an apology, Rory. Leaving the way I did was unforgivable, and I'm here to make amends." Rory's brow furrowed. "You don't do apologies, Lucien. What's really going on?" He sighed, his expression softening. "I know I don't, and that's part of the problem. I've been running from my past, from the things that make me who I am. I needed space, time to think, but I realize now that I pushed you away in the process. I didn't mean to hurt you." Rory's heart skipped a beat. She had always known that Lucien was a complex person, but hearing him admit his flaws was something entirely new. She crossed her arms, her defenses still up, but her curiosity piqued. "What changed your mind?" Lucien's gaze dropped to his hands, which he folded in his lap. "I had a conversation with someone who helped me see things from a different perspective. They reminded me that running from my problems doesn't make them go away, and that the people who care about me are the ones who can help me face them." Rory's eyes narrowed. "Who was this person?" Lucien's lips curved into a soft smile. "It was Silas. He has a way of cutting through the noise and getting to the heart of things." Rory's surprise was evident. Silas, the owner of the bar where she lived, was a no-nonsense kind of man, but he had a way of making people see the truth, even when they didn't want to. "I see. So, what are you going to do now?" Lucien's eyes met hers, his expression serious. "I want to stay, Rory. I want to face my demons and be the person you deserve. I know I've messed up before, but I'm asking for another chance. To be there for you, to be the ally you need in this city." Rory's heart ached at the sincerity in his voice. She had always been drawn to Lucien, despite the danger he posed. His quick wit, his charm, and the way he made her feel alive were hard to resist. But she needed more than just words. She needed actions, proof that he was in this for the long haul. "It's not just about me, Lucien," she said, her voice soft but firm. "It's about us. About the trust that's been broken and the pain that's been inflicted. I need to know that you're serious this time, that you're not just going to disappear again." Lucien reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a small, intricately carved box. He set it on the coffee table between them, his eyes never leaving hers. "This is a gift from my mother. She always told me that it holds the key to understanding my true self. I want you to have it, as a symbol of my commitment to you and to us." Rory's eyes widened as she looked at the box. It was beautiful, made of dark wood with inlaid gold filigree. She hesitated for a moment before reaching out and lifting the lid. Inside, there was a small, folded piece of parchment and a delicate silver pendant shaped like a key. She unfolded the parchment, her hands trembling slightly as she read the words. It was a poem, written in elegant, flowing script. The words spoke of love, of acceptance, and of the strength found in facing one's fears. Her eyes welled with tears as she read the last line: "For in the heart of the storm, we find our truest selves." Lucien's voice was gentle as he spoke. "My mother wrote that for me, but I believe it applies to us as well. We can weather any storm together, Rory. I promise to be your anchor, to be the person you can trust, no matter what." Rory's heart swelled with a mix of emotions—hope, fear, and a deep, undeniable love. She looked up at Lucien, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "I want to believe you, Lucien. I do. But it won't be easy. We have a lot of work to do, and I need you to be honest with me. No more secrets, no more disappearing acts." Lucien's expression was earnest. "I understand, and I'm willing to do whatever it takes. I love you, Rory. More than I've ever loved anyone. I promise to prove it to you, every day, for as long as you'll have me." Rory's hands trembled as she placed the box and the poem back on the table. She stood and walked to where Lucien was sitting, her heart beating wildly in her chest. She knelt in front of him, her eyes searching his face for any sign of doubt. Finding none, she took a deep breath and touched his cheek, her fingers brushing against the soft skin. "I love you too, Lucien," she whispered, her voice thick with emotion. "But this isn't just about love. It's about trust, and respect, and the willingness to face our demons together. Can you do that for me?" Lucien's gaze intensified, and he reached out to take her hand. "I can, and I will. I'm in this for the long haul, Rory. No more running, no more hiding. Just us, facing everything together." Rory's heart soared, and she leaned in, pressing her lips to his. The kiss was gentle at first, but it quickly deepened, fueled by the pent-up emotions and the promise of a new beginning. Lucien's arms wrapped around her, pulling her closer, and she melted into his embrace, her body fitting perfectly against his. When they finally broke apart, they were both breathless, their foreheads touching as they caught their breath. Lucien's eyes were bright, his smile warm and genuine. "Thank you, Rory. For giving me another chance." Rory's heart was full, but she knew the road ahead would be challenging. "We'll take it one step at a time. But for tonight, let's just be us. No past, no future, just the present." Lucien's smile widened, and he stood, pulling her to her feet. "I like the sound of that." They held each other close, the weight of the world momentarily forgotten in the embrace. The flat was small and cluttered, but it felt like home, a sanctuary where they could start anew, one step at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she finally managed, her voice steady but tinged with caution [finally]"
1"she said, stepping aside to let him in [aside]"
56.8168% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1621
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"quickly"
2"reluctantly"
3"slightly"
4"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.6477% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1621
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"apprehension"
count1
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"tinged"
2"trembled"
3"unspoken"
4"apprehension"
5"furrowed"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"see"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"scrolls that cluttered"
1"know that you're"
76.9604% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean43.57
std18.27
cv0.419
sampleLengths
077
167
266
355
416
532
616
727
860
921
1070
1119
1251
1312
1454
1541
1657
177
1826
1946
2050
2158
2245
2366
2450
2561
2645
2762
2840
2965
3037
3135
3254
3334
3435
3517
3638
97.7778% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences75
matches
0"been lost"
1"was dressed"
2"was bound"
3"been drawn"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was sitting"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1058
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"worn leather-bound tome,"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02930056710775047
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014177693761814745
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean16.12
std9.39
cv0.583
sampleLengths
019
131
227
314
426
527
613
720
817
916
1018
1117
1220
1311
145
1514
1618
176
1810
1911
2016
219
2211
2318
2422
259
2612
2712
2818
2921
3019
3114
325
3315
3417
3519
363
379
385
3949
405
4120
4212
434
4412
4545
463
474
487
4919
45.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners30
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she finally managed, her voice steady but tinged with caution (finally manage, tinged)"
1"she said, stepping aside to let him in (say, step aside let)"
2"she whispered, her voice thick with emotion (whisper)"
77.2276%