| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 74.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "nervously" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "raced" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "intricate" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "navigate" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "flicker" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1173 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil is thin here." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 921 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.28 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | English | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Eva | 13 | | Kowalski | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Blake | 1 | | Compass | 3 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Blake" | | 6 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.36 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite make sense" | | 1 | "as if pointing her toward an unseen destination" | | 2 | "felt like she might be close to the tru" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 35.55 | | std | 21.77 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 55 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "were clawed" | | 2 | "were filled" | | 3 | "was disheveled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the scent of damp concrete and something metallic—iron, maybe blood." | | 1 | "She knelt beside the body, her gaze sweeping over the figure—a man in his thirties, dressed in a dark suit that seemed too elaborate for this place." | | 2 | "His fingers were clawed, the nails broken and caked with something dark—soil, maybe." | | 3 | "The pages were filled with strange symbols—runes, perhaps—interspersed with hastily scribbled notes in English." | | 4 | "The notebook belonged to Eva Kowalski—she recognized the name instantly." | | 5 | "The man’s terrified expression, the strange markings on his hands, the notebook’s cryptic notes—none of it added up." | | 6 | "She’d heard whispers of these artifacts—tools used to navigate the supernatural." | | 7 | "Eva hesitated, tucking a stray strand of hair behind her ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed before." | | 8 | "But there was something different this time—a genuine fear in her green eyes that Quinn hadn’t seen before." | | 9 | "Eva’s presence here, the Veil Compass, the body—it was all connected." | | 10 | "The man’s clawed hands, the terror in his eyes—it suggested something unnatural." | | 11 | "And now, standing in this abandoned Tube station, with Eva’s words hanging in the air, she felt a flicker of something she hadn’t felt in years—hope." |
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| 92.58% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 937 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, leather-bound notebook" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.0416221985058698 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017075773745997867 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 11.5 | | std | 7.41 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 56.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.35294117647058826 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the odd metallic smell" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 93.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 1 | "Her sharp jaw tightened as" | | 2 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 3 | "His skin was pale, almost" | | 4 | "She noted the lack of" | | 5 | "His fingers were clawed, the" | | 6 | "She frowned, pulling a pair" | | 7 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 8 | "He paused, glancing nervously at" | | 9 | "She crouched to examine the" | | 10 | "She flipped through the pages," | | 11 | "She tucked the notebook into" | | 12 | "She stepped closer to the" | | 13 | "She leaned in closer, careful" | | 14 | "She reached for it with" | | 15 | "It was a compass, its" | | 16 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 17 | "She’d heard whispers of these" | | 18 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 19 | "She clutched a worn leather" |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 33.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 2 | "The beam of her flashlight" | | 3 | "The station had been closed" | | 4 | "Tonight, it was a crime" | | 5 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 6 | "Her sharp jaw tightened as" | | 7 | "Quinn’s brown eyes narrowed as" | | 8 | "Quinn echoed, her tone clipped" | | 9 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 10 | "His skin was pale, almost" | | 11 | "She noted the lack of" | | 12 | "the officer continued" | | 13 | "Quinn shifted her flashlight to" | | 14 | "His fingers were clawed, the" | | 15 | "She frowned, pulling a pair" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 17 | "the officer replied" | | 18 | "He paused, glancing nervously at" | | 19 | "Quinn straightened, her bearing military-straight" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She knelt beside the body, her gaze sweeping over the figure—a man in his thirties, dressed in a dark suit that seemed too elaborate for this place." | | 1 | "She crouched to examine the notebook, her flashlight illuminating the scrawled handwriting." | | 2 | "She thought of DS Morris, her partner who had vanished without a trace three years ago." | | 3 | "And now, standing in this abandoned Tube station, with Eva’s words hanging in the air, she felt a flicker of something she hadn’t felt in years—hope." | | 4 | "Quinn looked down at the Veil Compass in her hand, its needle quivering as if pointing her toward an unseen destination." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "the officers greeted, his voice tight" | | 1 | "Quinn echoed, her tone clipped" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 3 | "Quinn said, her voice sharp" | | 4 | "Eva said softly, her voice trembling" | | 5 | "Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the officer continued (continue)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "the officer admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "she stammered (stammer)" | | 4 | "Quinn interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "Eva admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "Quinn pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.438 | |