Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDD60Y0P34R8A5QTPCZTT

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Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.000492

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
In the hushed embrace of Richmond Park, Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood before the ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled roots stretching like welcoming arms. The air here was different, charged with a subtle energy that prickled Rory's skin. She glanced at Nyx, their violet eyes reflecting the dappled sunlight filtering through the canopy. The Shade's form shimmered, solidifying into a tall, humanoid figure, their cloak billowing despite the absence of wind. Isolde, ethereal and ageless, stepped forward. Her silver hair whispered around her like a waterfall of moonlight. "Welcome, mortals and shade, to the Fae Grove," she said, her voice a soft rustle of leaves. "Time moves differently here. Tread carefully." Rory nodded, her hand instinctively going to the Heartstone Pendant hanging around her neck. It pulsed faintly, warmth spreading from the deep crimson gemstone. Nyx noticed her movement, their gaze flicking to the pendant before returning to Rory's face. "Let us begin," Isolde said, leading them deeper into the grove. Wildflowers bloomed year-round, their colors vibrant and clashing, yet somehow harmonious. Bees hummed, their wings beating a steady rhythm against the quiet symphony of birdsong. As they ventured further, the air grew cooler, damp with the scent of earth and old magic. The standing stones loomed larger, their ancient faces carved with symbols that seemed to dance at the edge of Rory's perception. She reached out to touch one, her fingers tracing the cool, rough surface. A shiver ran down her spine, not of fear, but of awe. Nyx drifted closer, their form wavering like a mirage. "These stones... they're not from this world," they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. "They're Fae-touched." Isolde glanced back, her pale lavender eyes gleaming. "Indeed," she said. "The Fae left them here as a marker, a doorway between realms." Rory's breath hitched as she noticed something moving among the shadows cast by the stones. She squinted, trying to make out the shape. It was small, no larger than a cat, with fur as black as Nyx's cloak. It darted between the stones, disappearing into the undergrowth. "What was that?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx's form solidified, their gaze following the creature's path. "A shadowling," they said. "A creature of the spaces between realms. They're harmless, usually curious." Rory let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. She followed Isolde and Nyx deeper into the grove, her heart pounding with a mix of unease and exhilaration. The grove opened up into a clearing, and Rory gasped. Before them stood a tree unlike any she'd ever seen. Its trunk twisted like a serpent, its bark shimmering like metal. Its branches stretched wide, leaves of iridescent green rustling softly, casting dappled light onto the mossy ground. "The World Tree," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "The heart of the Fae Grove." Rory approached the tree, her footsteps silent on the soft moss. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the cool, smooth bark. It hummed under her touch, a vibration that resonated deep within her chest. She felt a sudden, profound connection to everything around her - the grove, the tree, the creatures hidden in the undergrowth. It was overwhelming, yet comforting. Nyx joined her, their form flickering as they reached out to touch the tree. "It's alive," they said, wonder coloring their voice. "Not just alive... aware." A sudden chill swept through the grove, and the leaves of the World Tree rustled loudly, their iridescence dimming. Rory's breath misted in the air, and she rubbed her arms, trying to ward off the sudden cold. Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "We've lingered too long," she said. "The grove is reacting to our presence. We should leave." Rory nodded, her gaze lingering on the World Tree. As they turned to leave, she noticed something glinting at the base of the tree. She bent down, her fingers closing around a small, cold object. It was a dagger, its blade slender and leaf-shaped, made of a material she'd never seen before. It glowed faintly in the dim light, like moonlight captured in metal. "Rory," Nyx warned, their voice a low growl. "We should go." Rory hesitated, then tucked the dagger into her belt. "I'll just be a moment," she said, her eyes fixed on the tree. She felt a strange pull, a tugging at the edges of her consciousness. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the bark again. This time, she felt something - a pulse, a beat, like a heartbeat. It echoed through her, resonating with the Heartstone Pendant. Suddenly, the grove seemed to hold its breath. The rustling leaves stilled, the birdsong fell silent. Then, as if released from an invisible hold, the grove erupted into chaos. The temperature plummeted, and the World Tree's branches whipped wildly, its leaves scattering like confetti. Rory stumbled back, her heart pounding in her chest. Nyx was by her side in an instant, their form solid, their hand gripping her arm. "Rory, we need to go. Now." Isolde was already moving, her silver hair billowing behind her like a banner. Rory followed, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. They ran through the grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like silent sentinels. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her skin, its warmth a beacon in the sudden cold. As they reached the edge of the grove, Rory glanced back. The World Tree stood tall, its branches still, its leaves glowing softly. The grove was quiet again, as if nothing had happened. But Rory knew better. She could still feel the echo of the tree's heartbeat, the cold of its anger. They stepped out of the grove, the air around them shifting, warming. Rory leaned against a tree, her breath coming in ragged gasps. Nyx stood beside her, their form flickering as they watched her, concern etched on their shadowy face. Isolde turned to them, her pale lavender eyes serious. "The grove does not take kindly to trespassers," she said. "Especially those who take without asking." Rory reached up, her fingers closing around the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. She felt a pang of guilt, of unease. She had taken something from the grove, from the World Tree. She had taken something that wasn't hers to take. "I'm sorry," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I didn't mean to cause any harm." Isolde's expression softened. "Apologies are not enough, Rory Carter," she said. "But perhaps, in time, the grove will forgive you. Until then, be careful with the blade. It is a gift, yes, but it is also a responsibility." Rory nodded, her gaze fixed on the blade. She felt a sudden, profound sense of purpose, of duty. She would protect this blade, she vowed. She would use it to protect those she cared about. As they left the Fae Grove, Rory couldn't shake the feeling of unease. She had experienced something wondrous, something otherworldly. She had felt the pulse of ancient magic, the heartbeat of a tree that was more than just a tree. She had taken something from it, something powerful. And she knew, with a certainty that filled her with both excitement and dread, that her life would never be the same.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
50.4950% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"pang"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"looming"
count1
13
word"profound"
count2
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"echo"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"symphony"
2"beacon"
3"sentinels"
4"pang"
5"resonated"
6"shimmered"
7"gleaming"
8"glinting"
9"wavering"
10"otherworldly"
11"loomed"
12"looming"
13"profound"
14"dance"
15"footsteps"
16"echo"
17"echoed"
18"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"let out a breath"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"a pang of guilt"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"was that?\" she"
84.4924% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean39.03
std17.4
cv0.446
sampleLengths
072
140
239
336
463
528
623
747
811
924
1030
1148
1216
1361
1426
1537
1623
1764
1811
1967
2053
2122
2251
2352
2440
2525
2641
2717
2838
2935
3070
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.032196969696969696
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010416666666666666
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.42
std4.69
cv0.411
sampleLengths
025
114
215
318
46
511
617
76
814
910
1015
1111
1211
1314
1417
1521
1613
1712
189
1917
202
218
223
2312
2415
258
2615
279
2811
299
304
3111
3211
3319
3410
3510
3611
3717
3810
396
4011
4111
4213
4321
445
4514
468
474
4819
4918
36.7925% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.29245283018867924
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners31
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she said, her voice a soft rustle of leaves (say, voice)"
1"Isolde said, leading them deeper into the grove (say, lead)"
2"they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind (murmur, carry on)"
3"Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence (say, fill)"
4"they said, wonder coloring their voice (say, coloring)"
5"Nyx warned, their voice a low growl (warn)"
6"she said, her eyes fixed on the tree (say, fix)"
81.6733%