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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDD721MAYSE55AD9Y1KRD
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.001301
Provider:
Novita
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
81.66%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
75.40%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
23.81%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
90.88%
Name drop frequency
(details)
87.50%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
97.22%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
66.10%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
80.20%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
83.33%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
86.12%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.79%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
98.21%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
70.1074%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter felt the air
change the moment they stepped through the oak standing stones. The trees of Richmond Park,
familiar
and
comforting
, had given way to an
otherworldly
grove where wildflowers bloomed in vibrant hues year-round.
She glanced back at the
boundary, half-expecting to see it shimmer with the faint, ethereal distortion known as the Veil. But the only sign of change was the
sense of
time itself, as if the air itself had thickened and slowed.
Nyx, the Shade, drifted beside
her, their form a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that occasionally
flickered
and
wavered
.
They had insisted on this
journey, whispering of a vision they had gleaned from the shadows. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer, followed behind, her silver hair catching the light as she moved with a grace that seemed almost
otherworldly
. Rory's eyes
scanned
the clearing, the Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsing faintly with
warmth
.
She had worn it since
the day it had appeared on her doorstep, a gift from an unknown benefactor. The crimson gemstone glowed
softly
, a
reminder
of the unknown forces at play. "Be cautious,"
Isolde murmured, her voice like
the rustling of leaves. "This place is not fully of this world."
Rory nodded, her steps light
on the ground that left no footprints.
The air was thick with
the scent of honey and wildflowers, and a gentle hum
seemed to
emanate from the
very
earth.
They moved deeper into the
grove, the ancient oak standing stones growing smaller in their wake.
Nyx paused by a cluster
of mushrooms, their caps a deep, glowing blue. "Interesting,"
they whispered, their voice carrying
on the breeze. "These are not of this realm."
Rory leaned in, her curiosity
piqued.
The mushrooms glowed with an
inner light, casting a pale,
otherworldly
glow on the forest floor.
She reached out to touch
one, but Isolde's hand shot out, stopping her. "Do not touch,"
the seer warned
. "They are Fae-touched, and their magic is unpredictable."
Rory withdrew her hand, feeling
a shiver run
down her spine
. The grove was beautiful, but it held secrets and dangers she couldn't
begin to
understand.
They continued on, the path
winding through a
forest that seemed to shift and change with each step
. Shadows played at the edges of her vision, and the light
seemed to
dance
in ways that defied explanation. As they ventured deeper, the flora grew more exotic. Trees with leaves of silver and gold towered over them, their branches reaching towards a sky that was a warm, almost golden amber. The air
was filled
with the sound of flowing water, and Rory followed the sound until they reached a small,
crystal
-clear stream. The water was cool and clear, and the bottom
was littered
with smooth, polished stones. Isolde knelt by the stream, her reflection shimmering on the surface. "This is a place of power,"
she said, her voice hushed
. "The energies here are old and strong." Rory knelt beside her, feeling the water ripple against her fingers.
It was colder than she
expected, but invigorating.
She scooped some into her
palm and brought it to her lips, feeling a strange
sense of
rejuvenation as she drank. Nyx materialized beside them, their form solidifying as they knelt. "This water is pure,"
they said, their voice a
mere
whisper
. "It has the power to heal and cleanse." Isolde nodded, her eyes closing as she let the water wash over her hands. "But it can also be a test. Those who are pure of heart and intent will find it a source of strength. Those who are not... will find it a challenge." Rory felt
a ripple of unease
.
She had faced many challenges
in her short life, but this place was unlike anything she had ever encountered. The Fae Grove, with its timeless beauty and hidden dangers, was a world unto itself. They continued down the stream, following it as it wound through the grove. The further they went, the more the landscape shifted. The trees grew taller, their leaves becoming more vibrant, and the air
seemed to
thicken with an almost
tangible
energy. Rory noticed a small, intricately carved stone at the base of one of the trees.
She picked it up, feeling
the cool, smooth surface. The stone
was inscribed
with symbols she couldn't read, but they
seemed to
hum with a quiet power. "What's this?"
she asked, showing it to
Isolde and Nyx. Isolde took the stone, her pale lavender eyes studying it closely. "These are Fae runes,"
she said, her voice filled
with reverence. "They speak of ancient knowledge and hidden truths." Nyx nodded, their form shifting
slightly
as if absorbing the energy
. "This stone is a key," they whispered. "It holds the power to unlock doors that have long been closed." Rory felt
a surge of excitement
and
trepidation
. The stone was more than just an artifact; it was a piece of the Fae Courts themselves.
She slipped it into her
pocket, feeling its
weight
and the promise it held. As they moved deeper into the grove, the landscape became even more
surreal
. The trees twisted and intertwined, forming natural arches and canopies. The ground
was carpeted
with a soft, moss-like substance that glowed faintly in the twilight. The air
was filled
with the sound of distant, melodic chants, and Rory had the distinct feeling that they
were being
watched. Isolde stopped abruptly, her hand held out in a gesture of warning. "We are close,"
she said, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. "The heart of the grove lies just ahead. Be on guard." Nyx shifted into a more solid form, their dark eyes
scanning
the surroundings. "I feel a presence,"
they said, their voice echoing
softly
. "Something powerful is near." Rory's heart
raced
as they stepped through the final archway and into a clearing. The center of the grove was a circular space surrounded by ancient trees, their leaves shimmering in shades of silver and gold. At the center stood a large, stone altar, its surface smooth and polished. Etched into the stone were
intricate
patterns and symbols, and a faint, pulsing light emanated from its core. Rory approached the altar, feeling
a sense of awe
and reverence. The air around it
seemed to
shimmer, and the light grew brighter as she drew closer.
She placed her hand on
the stone, feeling a surge of energy that almost knocked her to the ground. Isolde and Nyx flanked her, their eyes wide with wonder and caution. "This is the source," Isolde said, her voice filled with a mix of fear and excitement. "The heart of the grove, the wellspring of its power." Nyx's form
flickered
, their voice a mere
whisper
on the wind. "A place of balance and clarity. Here, the lines between worlds are thin, and the truth lies within reach." Rory felt a
sense of
purpose wash over her. The Heartstone Pendant on her neck glowed brighter, and she
knew that this
was the place she had
been meant
to find. The visions, the cryptic messages, and the strange events that had led her here—all of it had a purpose. She reached into her pocket and pulled out the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her. The slender, leaf-shaped dagger was cold to the touch, and it glowed faintly in the moonlight. She placed it on the altar, feeling a
sense of
completion. "Whatever lies ahead," she said, her voice steady, "we will face it together." Isolde and Nyx nodded, their forms merging in a moment of silent agreement. The grove was a place of power and mystery, and it held the keys to a destiny that
was only beginning
to unfold. As they stood there, the air around the altar
shimmered
, and the light grew brighter, casting a warm, golden glow over the clearing. Rory closed her eyes and took a deep breath, feeling the energy of the grove fill her. She
knew that this
was just the beginning, but she was ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. The Fae Grove, with its timeless beauty and hidden truths, was a place where the boundaries between worlds blurred, and the impossible became possible.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:21:42.469533+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:21:42 AM
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cancelled
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moderation_latency
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generation_time
36705
tokens_prompt
1612
tokens_completion
2018
native_tokens_prompt
1568
native_tokens_completion
1763
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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"https://ncbench.com/"
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false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00130104
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
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"1e93b673-b247-46af-b688-bffac31a690f"
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200
is_byok
false
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208
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"a2a8a9fd-2784-448f-99b8-076fb6e1d8e5"
provider_name
"Novita"
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
api_type
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
24
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
81.66%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
2
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"very"
2
"slightly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1363
totalAiIsms
32
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"comforting"
count
1
2
word
"otherworldly"
count
3
3
word
"sense of"
count
5
4
word
"flickered"
count
2
5
word
"wavered"
count
1
6
word
"scanned"
count
1
7
word
"warmth"
count
1
8
word
"reminder"
count
1
9
word
"down her spine"
count
1
10
word
"dance"
count
1
11
word
"crystal"
count
1
12
word
"whisper"
count
3
13
word
"tangible"
count
1
14
word
"trepidation"
count
1
15
word
"weight"
count
1
16
word
"surreal"
count
1
17
word
"scanning"
count
1
18
word
"echoing"
count
1
19
word
"raced"
count
1
20
word
"etched"
count
1
21
word
"intricate"
count
1
22
word
"shimmered"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"comforting"
2
"otherworldly"
3
"sense of"
4
"flickered"
5
"wavered"
6
"scanned"
7
"warmth"
8
"reminder"
9
"down her spine"
10
"dance"
11
"crystal"
12
"whisper"
13
"tangible"
14
"trepidation"
15
"weight"
16
"surreal"
17
"scanning"
18
"echoing"
19
"raced"
20
"etched"
21
"intricate"
22
"shimmered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
75.40%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
5
narrationSentences
84
matches
0
"y with warmth"
1
"a ripple of unease"
2
"a surge of excitement"
3
"a sense of awe"
4
"e with wonder"
23.81%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
7
narrationSentences
84
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"begin to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
96
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
31
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1362
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
90.88%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
55
wordCount
1184
uniqueNames
16
maxNameDensity
1.18
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Richmond
1
Park
1
Veil
1
Shade
1
Varga
1
Half-Fae
1
Heartstone
2
Pendant
2
Rory
14
Isolde
12
Fae
5
Grove
2
Nyx
9
Courts
1
Fae-forged
1
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Shade"
2
"Rory"
3
"Isolde"
4
"Nyx"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"Fae"
3
"Grove"
globalScore
0.909
windowScore
1
87.50%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
80
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"forest that seemed to shift and change with each step"
1
"as if absorbing the energy"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1362
matches
(empty)
97.22%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"knew that this"
1
"knew that this"
66.10%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
33
mean
41.27
std
15.74
cv
0.381
sampleLengths
0
78
1
58
2
47
3
19
4
50
5
28
6
35
7
14
8
63
9
54
10
44
11
40
12
29
13
45
14
40
15
42
16
42
17
10
18
30
19
30
20
39
21
60
22
34
23
27
24
67
25
46
26
38
27
30
28
50
29
42
30
13
31
59
32
59
80.20%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"was filled"
1
"was littered"
2
"was inscribed"
3
"was carpeted"
4
"was filled"
5
"been meant"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
207
matches
0
"were being"
1
"was only beginning"
83.33%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
1
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
2
totalSentences
96
ratio
0.021
matches
0
"The stone was more than just an artifact; it was a piece of the Fae Courts themselves."
1
"The visions, the cryptic messages, and the strange events that had led her here—all of it had a purpose."
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1191
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small, crystal-clear stream."
1
"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.02686817800167926
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.01343408900083963
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
86.12%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
14.19
std
5.18
cv
0.365
sampleLengths
0
15
1
22
2
20
3
21
4
19
5
16
6
23
7
15
8
19
9
13
10
11
11
8
12
12
13
22
14
16
15
13
16
9
17
6
18
6
19
16
20
13
21
6
22
8
23
11
24
15
25
18
26
19
27
9
28
23
29
22
30
15
31
11
32
11
33
7
34
11
35
8
36
21
37
10
38
11
39
8
40
14
41
31
42
6
43
19
44
15
45
13
46
9
47
20
48
15
49
9
44.79%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.2604166666666667
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
25
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
24
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"She glanced back at the"
1
"They had insisted on this"
2
"She had worn it since"
3
"They moved deeper into the"
4
"they whispered, their voice carrying"
5
"She reached out to touch"
6
"They continued on, the path"
7
"she said, her voice hushed"
8
"It was colder than she"
9
"She scooped some into her"
10
"they said, their voice a"
11
"She had faced many challenges"
12
"They continued down the stream,"
13
"She picked it up, feeling"
14
"she asked, showing it to"
15
"she said, her voice filled"
16
"She slipped it into her"
17
"she said, her voice barely"
18
"they said, their voice echoing"
19
"She placed her hand on"
ratio
0.289
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
77
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Aurora Carter felt the air"
1
"The trees of Richmond Park,"
2
"She glanced back at the"
3
"Nyx, the Shade, drifted beside"
4
"They had insisted on this"
5
"Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer,"
6
"Rory's eyes scanned the clearing,"
7
"She had worn it since"
8
"The crimson gemstone glowed softly,"
9
"Isolde murmured, her voice like"
10
"Rory nodded, her steps light"
11
"The air was thick with"
12
"They moved deeper into the"
13
"Nyx paused by a cluster"
14
"they whispered, their voice carrying"
15
"Rory leaned in, her curiosity"
16
"The mushrooms glowed with an"
17
"She reached out to touch"
18
"the seer warned"
19
"Rory withdrew her hand, feeling"
ratio
0.928
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
98.21%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
64
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"But the only sign of change was the sense of time itself, as if the air itself had thickened and slowed."
1
"Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer, followed behind, her silver hair catching the light as she moved with a grace that seemed almost otherworldly."
2
"Trees with leaves of silver and gold towered over them, their branches reaching towards a sky that was a warm, almost golden amber."
3
"Nyx nodded, their form shifting slightly as if absorbing the energy."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
12
uselessAdditionCount
6
matches
0
"they whispered, their voice carrying on the breeze"
1
"she said, her voice hushed"
2
"they said, their voice a mere whisper"
3
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4
"they said, their voice echoing softly"
5
"she said, her voice steady,"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1
"they whispered (whisper)"
2
"the seer warned (warn)"
3
"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
24
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.333
effectiveRatio
0.333
70.1074%