| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.447 | | leniency | 0.894 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 49.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1298 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "slightly" | | 7 | "very" | | 8 | "suddenly" | | 9 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1298 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "fleeting" | | 11 | "otherworldly" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "cascading" | | 15 | "tapestry" | | 16 | "unravel" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "trembled" | | 20 | "loomed" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "silence" | | 23 | "grave" | | 24 | "peril" | | 25 | "weight" | | 26 | "pulse" | | 27 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 64.61% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "a rush of relief" | | 2 | "d with awe" | | 3 | "felt a chill" | | 4 | "g in panic" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 964 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.618 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "chorus that seemed to beckon her deeper into the grove" | | 1 | "trickle that seemed to weave through the grove like a melody" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 30.19 | | std | 18.93 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 73 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "“A stream, perhaps. Or a fountain. The Fae are known for their trickery; it could be a lure.”" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "clear, revealing smooth stones" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.031023784901758014 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015511892450879007 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.66 | | std | 7.06 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 65.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4105263157894737 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the ground beneath them" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 98.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She could hear the soft" | | 1 | "she murmured, glancing back at" | | 2 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 3 | "She felt a warmth radiating" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 5 | "She could hear the distant" | | 6 | "she said, halting in her" | | 7 | "They followed the sound, weaving" | | 8 | "She knelt at the edge," | | 9 | "they cautioned, their voice a" | | 10 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 11 | "she asked, her heart racing" | | 12 | "She turned, her heart pounding," | | 13 | "It was Isolde Varga, the" | | 14 | "She moved with an ethereal" | | 15 | "she breathed, standing to greet" | | 16 | "It stepped into the clearing," | | 17 | "it hissed, its voice a" | | 18 | "she shouted, her voice steady" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice trembling" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 32.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "The grove unfolded before her" | | 2 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush," | | 3 | "She could hear the soft" | | 4 | "she murmured, glancing back at" | | 5 | "Nyx, the Shade, drifted beside" | | 6 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 8 | "Rory nodded, her fingers brushing" | | 9 | "She felt a warmth radiating" | | 10 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 11 | "Nyx replied, their tone teasing" | | 12 | "The air thickened with the" | | 13 | "She could hear the distant" | | 14 | "she said, halting in her" | | 15 | "Nyx paused, their form solidifying" | | 16 | "Rory felt a shiver of" | | 17 | "They followed the sound, weaving" | | 18 | "The water was impossibly clear," | | 19 | "Rory breathed, stepping closer" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, a" | | 1 | "Before they could react, a" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint, iridescent glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart racing with a mix of trepidation and…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush, carpeted the ground in a riot of colors, their petals glistening with dew that sparkled like tiny stars." | | 2 | "Nyx, the Shade, drifted beside her, their form a fluid silhouette that flickered in and out of solidity." | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes surveyed the surroundings with an inscrutable expression, as if they were both part of the shadows and apart from them." | | 4 | "Rory nodded, her fingers brushing against the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck, its deep crimson glow pulsing gently in response to the grove’s ener…" | | 5 | "She felt a warmth radiating from it, a connection to something greater, something that thrummed beneath the surface of this enchanted place." | | 6 | "The air thickened with the scent of blooming flowers and damp earth, a heady perfume that made Rory’s senses tingle." | | 7 | "She reached out, her fingers just brushing the surface, and the water rippled in response, sending out concentric circles that distorted the reflection of the t…" | | 8 | "She turned, her heart pounding, and caught sight of a figure emerging from the shadows." | | 9 | "As she spoke, the air around them thickened, and Rory felt a strange sensation, as if the very fabric of reality was shifting." | | 10 | "It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares, its eyes glowing with a malevolent hunger." | | 11 | "She glanced at Nyx, who had solidified once more, their violet eyes reflecting the weight of their shared burden." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "they cautioned, their voice a soft murmur" | | 2 | "she asked, her heart racing" | | 3 | "Nyx suggested, their tone thoughtful" | | 4 | "Isolde spoke, her voice melodic and haunting" | | 5 | "she breathed, standing to greet the seer" | | 6 | "Rory asked, her voice rising in panic" | | 7 | "Isolde instructed, her voice steady" | | 8 | "Nyx warned, their voice urgent" | | 9 | "it hissed, its voice a guttural growl" | | 10 | "she shouted, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins" | | 11 | "she asked, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "Nyx suggested (suggest)" | | 5 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" | | 6 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 7 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 8 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 9 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 10 | "Rory vowed (vow)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.404 | | leniency | 0.809 | | rawRatio | 0.579 | | effectiveRatio | 0.468 | |