| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 77.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "resonated" | | 4 | "complex" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "looming" | | 11 | "eyebrow" | | 12 | "amidst" | | 13 | "charged" | | 14 | "unwavering" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1093 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 933 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Atlas | 1 | | Improbable | 1 | | Realms | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.75 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed tailored to withstand any weather, any emotion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.915 | | wordCount | 1093 | | matches | | 0 | "not in explanations or apologies but in a shared understanding" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.15% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 36.43 | | std | 15.69 | | cv | 0.431 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory tasted the unspoken words hanging between them—a history of stolen glances, whispered confidences, fragments of a connection severed by circumstance and the weight of unshared burdens." | | 1 | "Rory considered him for a long moment, the tangled mess of their past—conversations entangled in probability and impossibility, always more than the sum of their parts—looming large between them." | | 2 | "Part of her—a piece buried deep and daring—wondered if the harmony could bloom beyond this room, like a melody searching for its refrain." | | 3 | "Each word forged not in explanations or apologies but in a shared understanding that was complicated, imperfect—yet theirs." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 947 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03167898627243928 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010559662090813094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 16.31 | | std | 7.46 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 94.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5671641791044776 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp" | | 1 | "she said, his name a" | | 2 | "Her voice, calm and unflinching" | | 3 | "He drew a breath, the" | | 4 | "His tailored charcoal suit seemed" | | 5 | "he greeted, his lips curling" | | 6 | "she said, the word a" | | 7 | "She folded her arms, leaning" | | 8 | "Their eyes met, an invisible" | | 9 | "She crossed the room, bypassing" | | 10 | "She handed one glass to" | | 11 | "she toasted, tipping her glass" | | 12 | "He inhaled softly, the admission" | | 13 | "he confessed, each word carefully" | | 14 | "He paused, gathering the loose" | | 15 | "she began, a quiet ache" | | 16 | "Their laughter mingled, a rare" | | 17 | "It was a sound full" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 24.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open with" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory to" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp" | | 3 | "she said, his name a" | | 4 | "Her voice, calm and unflinching" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau leaned easily on" | | 6 | "He drew a breath, the" | | 7 | "His tailored charcoal suit seemed" | | 8 | "he greeted, his lips curling" | | 9 | "Rory stepped back, allowing him" | | 10 | "The flat, tenebrous save for" | | 11 | "Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat," | | 12 | "Rory watched Ptolemy vanish into" | | 13 | "Lucien noted, eyeing the brittle-edged" | | 14 | "Rory shrugged, brushing an errant" | | 15 | "Lucien’s gaze shifted, the lined" | | 16 | "she said, the word a" | | 17 | "She folded her arms, leaning" | | 18 | "Lucien answered with deliberate vagueness," | | 19 | "Their eyes met, an invisible" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in this cramped one-bedroom" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat, rose from his recumbent posture atop a pile of weathered paperbacks, tossing a curious glance at Lucien before slinking away, a…" | | 1 | "Lucien’s gaze shifted, the lined planes of his face softening as he surveyed the room, letting it veil his scrutiny of Rory herself." | | 2 | "She handed one glass to Lucien, her fingers brushing briefly against his, a contact as fleeting and potent as lightning." | | 3 | "The night stretched around them, Ptolemy returning with a questioning meow, as if to inquire about the air newly charged with possibility." | | 4 | "Each word forged not in explanations or apologies but in a shared understanding that was complicated, imperfect—yet theirs." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, his name a hesitant invitation" | | 1 | "she said, the word a shield to a more complex truth" | | 2 | "he confessed, each word carefully weighed" | | 3 | "Rory said finally, her voice soft but unwavering" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien noted (note)" | | 1 | "he confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |