Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDK5SMWJPFVVNPQNKDQ9R

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Duration:
32.7s
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$0.001137

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shimmered with a faint, iridescent glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart racing with a mix of trepidation and exhilaration. The grove unfolded before her like a dream, a hidden sanctuary that felt both familiar and utterly alien. The wildflowers, vibrant and lush, carpeted the ground in a riot of colors, their petals glistening with dew that sparkled like tiny stars. She could hear the soft rustle of leaves, a whispering chorus that seemed to beckon her deeper into the grove. “Isolde’s grove,” she murmured, glancing back at her companions. Nyx, the Shade, hovered just behind her, their silhouette a dark contrast against the kaleidoscope of colors. The faintly glowing violet of their eyes flickered with curiosity, reflecting the wonder of the place. Beside them, Eva, her childhood friend, stepped forward, her eyes wide with awe. The air was thick with magic, a palpable energy that thrummed beneath their feet. “Do you feel that?” Eva breathed, her voice barely above a whisper. “It’s like the air is alive.” Aurora nodded, her fingers brushing against the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck. It pulsed gently, a warm reminder of the unknown benefactor who had gifted it to her. She had no idea what it truly meant, but in this place, it felt like a key to something greater. The pendant’s warmth seemed to resonate with the grove, as if it recognized the magic that thrived here. As they ventured further, the trees loomed tall and ancient, their gnarled branches twisting toward the sky like the fingers of forgotten giants. Sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled shadows on the ground, and the air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming flowers mingled with something earthy and rich. Aurora inhaled deeply, letting the fragrance wash over her, grounding her in the moment. “Look at that!” Eva exclaimed, pointing toward a cluster of trees where the bark shimmered with a silvery sheen. Aurora followed her gaze, her breath catching in her throat. The trees were unlike any she had ever seen, their trunks adorned with intricate patterns that seemed to shift and change as they moved. It was as if the trees were alive, telling stories of ages past. Nyx drifted closer, their form flickering like a candle flame. “These trees are ancient,” they whispered, their voice a soft caress in the wind. “They hold the memories of this grove, the echoes of those who have walked here before.” Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine. The grove was a tapestry of history, woven with threads of magic and time. She could almost hear the whispers of the past, the laughter of those who had come seeking Isolde’s prophecies. But there was something else, a lingering unease that curled at the edges of her mind. She glanced at Nyx, who seemed to sense her discomfort. “Stay close,” they murmured, their voice a soothing balm. “The grove is a sanctuary, but it is also a place of power. We must tread carefully.” As they moved deeper, the flora shifted, becoming more exotic and otherworldly. Flowers with luminescent petals opened and closed in a slow, rhythmic dance, their colors shifting from deep indigo to bright gold. Aurora reached out to touch one, and as her fingers brushed against the soft petals, a jolt of energy surged through her, leaving her breathless. “Did you see that?” she gasped, pulling her hand back. “It felt like… like it was alive.” Eva laughed, her eyes sparkling with delight. “Of course it is! This is the Fae Grove, Rory. Everything here is alive in ways we can’t even begin to understand.” But as they continued, the atmosphere shifted. The air grew heavier, thick with an unnameable tension. Aurora’s heart raced, and she exchanged a glance with Nyx, who had grown still, their form solidifying as they scanned the surroundings. The shadows deepened, and the once inviting grove now felt like a labyrinth of secrets. “Something’s not right,” Aurora said, her voice low. “I can feel it.” Nyx nodded, their violet eyes narrowing. “The Veil is thin here. We must be cautious. There are rifts that can lead to places we do not wish to go.” Just then, a soft rustling echoed through the trees, drawing their attention. Aurora turned, her pulse quickening as she caught sight of a figure emerging from the shadows. It was Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer, her silver hair cascading like a waterfall down her back. She moved with an ethereal grace, her pale lavender eyes shimmering with ancient wisdom. “Welcome, seekers,” Isolde spoke, her voice melodic yet laced with riddles. “You have come to the heart of the grove, where time bends and the past intertwines with the present.” Aurora felt a mix of relief and apprehension. “Isolde,” she said, stepping forward. “We seek your guidance.” The seer smiled, a knowing glint in her eyes. “Guidance comes at a price, dear one. What is it you wish to know?” Before Aurora could respond, a sudden chill swept through the grove, causing the flowers to tremble. The shadows deepened, and a low growl reverberated through the air, sending a shiver down her spine. Nyx’s form flickered, their voice urgent. “We must leave. Now.” Isolde’s expression shifted, her gaze piercing. “The grove is a sanctuary, but it is also a battleground. The rifts are restless, and something stirs within the shadows.” Aurora’s heart raced as she turned to Eva, who looked equally alarmed. “What do we do?” she asked, her voice trembling. “Follow me,” Nyx commanded, their silhouette shifting as they led the way back toward the standing stones. The air crackled with tension, and Aurora could feel the weight of unseen eyes watching them from the depths of the grove. As they retraced their steps, the once vibrant colors of the flowers dulled, and the whispers of the trees grew frantic, as if warning them of the encroaching darkness. Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth a small comfort against the chill that enveloped them. “Stay close,” Nyx urged, their voice barely above a whisper. “Do not stray from the path.” The shadows seemed to stretch and twist, reaching for them as they hurried through the grove. Aurora’s breath quickened, and she could feel the pulse of magic thrumming in the air, a chaotic energy that threatened to overwhelm her senses. The standing stones loomed ahead, a beacon of safety, but the growl echoed again, closer this time, a primal sound that sent a jolt of fear through her. With one final push, they burst through the standing stones, the grove’s magic receding behind them like a tide. Aurora stumbled, her heart racing as she turned to look back. The trees stood silent, their secrets hidden once more, but the sense of unease lingered, a reminder of the power that lay just beyond the Veil. “Isolde,” she called, but the grove remained still, the whispers fading into the distance. The world outside felt stark and cold, a sharp contrast to the warmth of the grove. Aurora took a deep breath, grounding herself in the moment, but the thrill of discovery was tinged with the knowledge that they had only scratched the surface of the mysteries that lay within. “Let’s go,” Nyx said, their voice steady. “We have much to discuss, and the shadows are not far behind.” As they turned to leave, Aurora felt the weight of the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, a reminder of the journey ahead. The grove had revealed its wonders, but it had also shown her the darkness that lurked just beyond the light. And she knew, deep down, that this was only the beginning.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.0513% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she murmured, glancing back at her companions [back]"
1"Nyx urged, their voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
53.3800% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"utterly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count3
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"reverberated"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"shimmered"
count2
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"cascading"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count2
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"trepidation"
count1
17
word"apprehension"
count1
18
word"weight"
count2
19
word"dance"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count2
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"tapestry"
3"beacon"
4"sanctuary"
5"tinged"
6"reverberated"
7"flickered"
8"shimmered"
9"glistening"
10"glint"
11"cascading"
12"otherworldly"
13"loomed"
14"intricate"
15"stark"
16"trepidation"
17"apprehension"
18"weight"
19"dance"
20"echoed"
21"echoes"
22"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"a jolt of fear"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"feel that?” Eva"
1"see that?” she"
96.8866% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean42.87
std20.97
cv0.489
sampleLengths
089
169
218
368
466
566
640
767
826
958
1017
1129
1253
1312
1429
1559
1630
1717
1823
1943
2027
2121
2239
2345
2416
2568
2656
2763
2819
2953
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"was filled"
1"was tinged"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1076
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03066914498141264
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010223048327137546
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.95
std6.62
cv0.443
sampleLengths
028
118
223
320
49
517
616
713
814
912
106
1114
1216
1320
1418
1523
1629
1714
1819
1910
2024
2113
2210
2314
2416
258
2614
2719
2816
2910
309
3117
3212
3321
3425
3510
367
377
3822
397
409
4122
4215
438
444
456
4623
4712
4816
4917
59.6899% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she murmured, glancing back at her companions (murmur, glance)"
1"exclaimed (exclaim)"
2"they whispered, their voice a soft caress in the wind (whisper)"
3"they murmured, their voice a soothing balm (murmur)"
4"gasped (gasp)"
5"Isolde spoke, her voice melodic yet laced with riddles (speak, lace)"
6"she said, stepping forward (say, step)"
7"Nyx commanded, their silhouette shifting as they led the way back toward the standing stones (command, shift lead)"
8"Nyx urged, their voice barely above a whisper (urge)"
9"she called, but the grove remained still, the whispers fading into the distance (call, remain fade)"
81.8828%