Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDKC1EMBAJBX6Y6GZ25B9

Run Details

Duration:
47.4s
Cost:
$0.000926
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came in short, staccato bursts as she sprinted down the rain-soaked streets of Soho. The neon lights flickered, casting an eerie glow on the wet cobblestones, and the air was thick with the smell of damp asphalt. Her eyes, sharp and focused, tracked the Blur of her quarry—a young man in a black hoodie, his movements quick and desperate. She could feel the adrenaline coursing through her veins, her muscles responding with the precision of a well-oiled machine. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair was plastered to her forehead, and raindrops mingled with sweat on her skin. The worn leather watch on her left wrist clicked with each stride, a constant reminder of the time she had lost and the time she was racing against. The suspect darted into an alleyway, and Quinn didn't hesitate. She followed, her boots splashing through puddles and echoing off the brick walls. The alley narrowed, and the only light came from a single flickering streetlamp above. She could hear the rapid footsteps of the suspect ahead, his breath coming in ragged gasps. "Stop right there!" she barked, her voice cutting through the night. But the man didn't stop. He turned a corner, and Quinn's heart sank as she saw the old, rusted metal door at the end of the alley. The entrance to The Veil Market. For a moment, she hesitated. The underground market was a place of rumors and whispers, a haven for the supernatural and the lawless. She knew the rules—all who entered needed a bone token, and once inside, there was no telling what horrors or treasures one might find. But she had a job to do. A duty. Her partner, DS Morris, had died under mysterious circumstances, and this chase was her chance to uncover the truth. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a bone token she had taken from a previous suspect. The token was cold and smooth, etched with ancient symbols that glowed faintly in the dim light. She took a deep breath and pushed open the door. The air inside was stifling and thick with the scent of stale tobacco and something darker, more primal. The door creaked shut behind her, and she was plunged into semi-darkness. The only light came from a few dim lanterns hanging from the ceiling, casting long, distorted shadows on the walls. The market was a labyrinth of narrow passageways and makeshift stalls. Vendors huddled in the corners, their faces obscured by hoods or masks. The air was filled with the whispers of deals being made and the occasional flash of a spell being cast. Quinn glanced around, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. She spotted the suspect a few meters ahead, his hoodie now pulled tight around his face. She moved swiftly, slipping through the crowded market, her military precision making her nearly silent. She could hear the murmur of the vendor's haggling and the distant sound of a chanting ritual. The market was alive with a dark energy that seemed to pulse through the very walls. Ahead, the suspect turned a corner, and Quinn quickened her pace. She rounded the corner and found herself in a larger, more open area. The walls here were lined with peculiar items—enchanted daggers, alchemical potions, and ancient tomes. In the center of the room, a small stage was set up, and a group of cloaked figures were gathered around it, engaged in some sort of ritual. The suspect was standing at the edge of the crowd, his hands trembling as he clutched something tightly in his fist. Quinn approached, her hand reaching for her holster, but she hesitated. The crowd's murmurs grew louder, and the air seemed to crackle with anticipation. Suddenly, a figure stepped forward from the crowd, a hooded woman with piercing green eyes. "What do we have here?" she asked, her voice smooth and dangerous. "A Metropolitan Police detective, no less. What brings you to our humble market?" Quinn's grip tightened on her token. "I'm looking for that man," she said, nodding toward the suspect. "He's wanted for questioning in a series of supernatural crimes." The woman chuckled, a sound that sent a chill down Quinn's spine. "Oh, you should know better than to come here looking for answers, Detective. The Veil Market is a place of secrets, and not all secrets are meant to be uncovered." Quinn's jaw set in determination. "I don't care about your market. I care about justice. Now, step aside." The woman's eyes narrowed, and for a moment, Quinn saw something inhuman in her gaze. "Very well," she said, stepping back. "But be warned, Detective. The deeper you delve into this world, the more you'll find that the lines between right and wrong are not as clear as you might think." Quinn nodded, her focus never leaving the suspect. She moved through the crowd, her eyes locked on her target. The suspect's hands were shaking, and he glanced around, his eyes wild with fear. Quinn reached out and grabbed his arm, spinning him around. "What are you doing here?" she demanded. "Who are you working for?" The suspect's eyes widened, and he tried to wrench free, but Quinn's grip was iron. "Please, let me go!" he pleaded. "They'll kill me if they find out I've been caught!" Quinn's eyes narrowed. "Who? Who will kill you?" The suspect swallowed hard, his gaze flickering over her shoulder. "The Coven," he whispered. "They control everything here. If you don't let me go, they'll come for both of us." Quinn's heart sank. The Coven was a powerful and shadowy organization, known for their ruthless methods and deep connections in the supernatural world. She had heard rumors, but never had any concrete evidence. Now, it seemed, she was about to find out just how deep the rabbit hole went. She tightened her grip on the suspect. "Come with me," she said, her voice firm. "We need to get out of here before they come for us." The suspect nodded, his face pale with fear. Quinn pushed through the crowd, her senses on high alert. She could feel the eyes of the market watching her, the whispers growing louder. The exit was just ahead, but as they neared the door, a group of figures stepped forward, blocking their path. The woman from before was at the forefront, her eyes glowing with a malevolent light. "I told you, Detective," she said, her voice silky and dangerous. "You shouldn't have come here." Quinn's hand went to her holster, but she hesitated. The market was a dangerous place, and she was outnumbered. She needed to think fast. "Step aside," she said, her voice steady but firm. "I don't want to hurt you, but I will if I have to." The woman's lips curled into a smile. "You're brave, Detective. I'll give you that. But bravery alone won't save you here." Before Quinn could react, the woman raised her hand, and a surge of dark energy shot through the air. Quinn felt a searing pain in her side and stumbled, her vision blurring. The suspect cried out and tried to break free, but Quinn's grip held firm. The world spun around her, and for a moment, everything went black. When she regained her senses, the woman and the other figures were gone, and the market was eerily quiet. The suspect was still in her grasp, his body trembling. "We need to go," Quinn said, her voice hoarse. "Now." She dragged the suspect through the market, her mind racing. The bone token in her hand felt heavy, a tangible reminder of the danger they were in. They reached the door, and Quinn pushed it open, the cold night air hitting her like a slap in the face. They emerged onto the street, the rain still pouring down. Quinn glanced around, her eyes scanning for any signs of pursuit. The market was hidden once more, and the streets were empty. She dragged the suspect to her car, her mind racing with questions. "Who are you working for?" she demanded again, her voice leaving no room for lies. The suspect hesitated, his eyes darting around. "I work for the Coven," he finally said. "They told me to bring them the amulet. I didn't know it was stolen from the Metropolitan Museum of Magic. I swear, I didn't know." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "Where's the amulet now?" The suspect reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, ornate amulet. It was made of dark metal and encrusted with glowing gemstones. Quinn's eyes widened as she recognized the sigils etched into the metal. It was an artifact of immense power, one that could summon dark forces. "Hand it over," she said, her voice low and dangerous. The suspect hesitated, his face pale with fear. "Please, Detective. They'll kill me if you take it." Quinn's jaw tightened. "They'll kill you either way. Hand it over." The suspect's hand trembled as he placed the amulet in Quinn's outstretched palm. She tucked it into her jacket, her mind racing with the implications. The Coven was more dangerous than she had imagined, and the amulet was just the tip of the iceberg. "Get in the car," she said, her voice leaving no room for argument. The suspect climbed into the back seat, his body still shaking. Quinn got behind the wheel and started the engine, her mind already formulating a plan. She needed to get the amulet to someone who could identify its true nature and, more importantly, figure out why the Coven wanted it so badly. As she drove through the rain-soaked streets, the weight of the amulet in her pocket felt like a heavy stone. She knew that this was just the beginning of a much larger and more dangerous game. But she was a detective, and she was determined to uncover the truth, no matter the cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.7143% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said, stepping back [back]"
1"he finally said [finally]"
75.9036% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"tightly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.7349% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"anticipation"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"delve"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"tangible"
1"searing"
2"flickered"
3"trembled"
4"anticipation"
5"weight"
6"footsteps"
7"delve"
8"echoing"
9"etched"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches7
maxInWindow6
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count5
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"the air was thick with"
3"sent a chill down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"find that the"
1"knew that this"
92.8936% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean37.52
std17.83
cv0.475
sampleLengths
063
165
253
344
447
563
660
769
848
966
1045
1140
1227
1342
1418
1551
1643
1712
1831
198
2030
2149
2227
2352
2431
2524
2622
2721
2846
2941
3010
3148
3244
3315
3440
357
3649
3710
3817
3911
4044
4113
4252
4353
73.2733% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences111
matches
0"was plastered"
1"was plunged"
2"was filled being made"
3"were lined"
4"were gathered"
5"was outnumbered"
6"were gone"
7"was hidden"
8"was made"
9"was determined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs234
matches
0"was racing"
1"was stifling"
2"was standing"
3"were shaking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1381
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03041274438812455
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008689355539464157
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean12.8
std5.97
cv0.466
sampleLengths
018
123
222
319
418
528
610
713
814
916
1011
115
1222
136
145
1518
1624
177
182
1919
2018
2117
2210
2318
2412
2520
2611
2712
2820
2910
3016
3115
3217
3316
3411
3513
3614
3728
3821
3911
4013
4115
4212
4313
446
4511
4610
4712
4830
495
42.2481% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2558139534883721
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners33
32.1429% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she said, nodding toward the suspect (say, nod)"
1"she said, stepping back (say, step)"
2"demanded (demand)"
3"pleaded (plead)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
5"demanded (demand)"
6"he finally said (finally say)"
7"she said, her voice leaving no room for argument (say, leave)"
78.5830%