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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDMYRRC2VCVDM7VS0R2Y9
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.002412
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the creaky stairwell and onto the dusty platform of the abandoned Tube station, her eyes scanning the tension-thick air. The flickering fluorescent lights overhead cast eerie shadows on the walls, making the already unsettling atmosphere even more unnerving. A uniformed officer, stationed at the entrance, nodded curtly as Quinn flashed her badge. "Morning, Detective. Scene's down there." He jerked a thumb toward the tunnel. Quinn's gaze followed the gesture, her sharp jaw setting in a determined line. The Veil Market, an underground bazaar notorious for peddling illicit supernatural wares, was the last place she'd expected to investigate a homicide. The market's
very
existence was a topic of hushed speculation among the Metropolitan Police, with many doubting its reality. Yet, here she stood, surrounded by the unmistakable signs of a hastily abandoned gathering: scattered vendor stalls, overturned crates, and the acrid stench of smoke. As she approached the crime scene, a voice called out, "Harlow, over here." Quinn's colleague, Detective Inspector Reed, stood near the far wall, his expression a mask of thoughtful curiosity. Beside him, a body lay on the ground, partially shielded by a tattered awning. Quinn's
eyes narrowed
; something about the setup didn't sit right. "Morning, Jack," Quinn said, her voice even. "What've we got?" Reed nodded toward the body. "Victim's ID pending, but preliminary suggests a young adult, mid-twenties. No visible trauma, just...this." He crouched, gesturing for Quinn to join him. Quinn's eyes adjusted to the dim light as she examined the body. A small, ornate brass compass – a Veil Compass, if she wasn't mistaken – rested on the victim's chest, its face
etched
with protective sigils that
seemed to
shimmer in the faint light. The compass's needle
quivered
, as if detecting a nearby supernatural rift, which only added to the unease settling in the pit of Quinn's stomach. "No signs of struggle, no witnesses," Reed continued, "just a cryptic message near the vendor stalls: 'The rift walker's debt is paid.'" He straightened, his eyes locking onto Quinn's. "My take? This is an internal Veil Market dispute. We're looking at some sort of twisted, supernatural vigilantism." Quinn's gaze lingered on the compass, her mind whirring. She couldn't shake the feeling that Reed's interpretation, though plausible, only scratched the surface. Her attention drifted to the surrounding area, taking in the scattered goods: rare, leather-bound tomes; peculiar, handcrafted artifacts; and an assortment of dried, exotic herbs. Her eyes returned to the body, this time focusing on the victim's attire – a faded band T-shirt, frayed jeans, and scuffed combat boots. Not the typical attire of a Veil Market regular. A faint, crimson smudge on the victim's left sleeve caught her attention. Quinn's brow
furrowed
; she
gently
plucked a tissue from her pocket and collected the smudge for further analysis. "Evidence suggests our victim might've been an outsider," Quinn said, her voice measured, as she tucked the tissue away. "That message, the Veil Compass...I think we're dealing with misdirection. Someone wants us to believe this is an internal market affair." Reed raised an eyebrow. "You're not buying the rift walker angle?" Quinn's sharp jawline tilted as she met Reed's skeptical gaze. "I'm saying we should consider alternative motives. This setup feels...orchestrated. Our killer might've intentionally used the market's reputation to throw us off their scent." Reed's expression transformed from doubt to intrigue. "Go on." Quinn's gaze swept the area once more, her military-honed instincts on high alert. "Observe the vendor stalls – they're not just knocked over, they're strategically placed to conceal the surrounding areas. And the smoke smell? It's too localized, suggesting a contained, recent event. I think our killer used a diversion to create this crime scene, perhaps during the market's disassembly, when the crowd would've been distracted." As she spoke, Quinn's eyes landed on a faint, almost imperceptible disturbance in the dust near the tunnel's edge – a sign of recent, hurried passage. Her focus intensified, she approached the spot, her worn leather
watch
glinting
in the faint light. "Harlow, what've you got there?" Reed asked, following her. Quinn crouched, her fingers hovering above the disturbed dust. "Our killer might've made a mistake. This...this looks like a footprint, partially erased. If I'm right, our perpetrator might've been in a hurry to leave, but not hurried enough to cover their tracks
completely
." A glimmer of excitement sparked within Quinn. The game, as they say, was afoot. With each new disco
very
, the initially baffling crime scene
began to
yield its secrets. Her sharp mind whirred, connecting the dots: the
enigmatic
message, the Veil Compass, the
carefully
constructed misdirection, and now, the potential footprint. As she stood, a sense of determination settled over her. This was more than just a homicide – it was a labyrinthine puzzle, one that would require all her deductive prowess to
unravel
. The supernatural undercurrents only added to the complexity, but Quinn
was undaunted
. Her quest for the truth had just begun, and she would stop at nothing to uncover the hidden forces driving this
sinister
plot.
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2/17/2026, 2:21:45 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Quinn said, her voice measured, as she tucked the tissue away [away]"
52.1531%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
836
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"completely"
count
1
2
adverb
"gently"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"completely"
2
"gently"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
16.2679%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
836
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"quivered"
count
1
3
word
"sinister"
count
1
4
word
"furrowed"
count
1
5
word
"etched"
count
1
6
word
"unravel"
count
1
highlights
0
"enigmatic"
1
"glinting"
2
"quivered"
3
"sinister"
4
"furrowed"
5
"etched"
6
"unravel"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
43
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
43
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
51
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
21
mean
39.9
std
22.09
cv
0.554
sampleLengths
0
57
1
12
2
79
3
13
4
41
5
10
6
27
7
69
8
47
9
48
10
63
11
40
12
11
13
34
14
9
15
66
16
42
17
9
18
43
19
50
20
68
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
43
matches
0
"was undaunted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
106
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
617
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"rare, leather-bound tomes;"
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.03565640194489465
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.014586709886547812
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
51
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
51
mean
16.43
std
9.26
cv
0.564
sampleLengths
0
24
1
19
2
14
3
12
4
13
5
22
6
19
7
25
8
13
9
17
10
14
11
10
12
7
13
3
14
5
15
22
16
12
17
33
18
24
19
29
20
18
21
9
22
14
23
25
24
24
25
9
26
12
27
18
28
19
29
21
30
4
31
7
32
10
33
24
34
7
35
2
36
13
37
53
38
26
39
16
40
9
41
9
42
34
43
7
44
7
45
14
46
22
47
10
48
23
49
12
81.0458%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5098039215686274
totalSentences
51
uniqueOpeners
26
25.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"As she approached the crime scene, a voice called out, (approach call out)"
1
"Reed continued, He straightened, his eyes locking onto Quinn's (continue, straighten, lock)"
2
"Quinn said, her voice measured, as she tucked the tissue away (say, measure, tuck)"
84.4196%