| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 832 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 832 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "determined" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "quivered" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "eyebrow" | | 9 | "intrigue" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "enigmatic" | | 12 | "constructed" | | 13 | "potential" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "unravel" | | 16 | "sinister" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of determination" |
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| 43.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 838 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 619 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 3.07 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 2 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Inspector | 1 | | Reed | 8 | | Compass | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Reed" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to shimmer in the faint light" | | 1 | "as if detecting a nearby supernatural rift, which only added to the unease settling in the pit of Quinn's stomach" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 838 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 39.9 | | std | 22.09 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 68 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn's eyes narrowed; something about the setup didn't sit right." | | 1 | "A small, ornate brass compass – a Veil Compass, if she wasn't mistaken – rested on the victim's chest, its face etched with protective sigils that seemed to shimmer in the faint light." | | 2 | "Her attention drifted to the surrounding area, taking in the scattered goods: rare, leather-bound tomes; peculiar, handcrafted artifacts; and an assortment of dried, exotic herbs." | | 3 | "Her eyes returned to the body, this time focusing on the victim's attire – a faded band T-shirt, frayed jeans, and scuffed combat boots." | | 4 | "Quinn's brow furrowed; she gently plucked a tissue from her pocket and collected the smudge for further analysis." | | 5 | "As she spoke, Quinn's eyes landed on a faint, almost imperceptible disturbance in the dust near the tunnel's edge – a sign of recent, hurried passage." | | 6 | "This was more than just a homicide – it was a labyrinthine puzzle, one that would require all her deductive prowess to unravel." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 617 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "rare, leather-bound tomes;" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03565640194489465 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014586709886547812 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 16.43 | | std | 9.26 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 81.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5098039215686274 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "He jerked a thumb toward" | | 1 | "He crouched, gesturing for Quinn" | | 2 | "She couldn't shake the feeling" | | 3 | "Her attention drifted to the" | | 4 | "Her eyes returned to the" | | 5 | "Her focus intensified, she approached" | | 6 | "Her sharp mind whirred, connecting" | | 7 | "Her quest for the truth" |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 41.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 1 | "The flickering fluorescent lights overhead" | | 2 | "A uniformed officer, stationed at" | | 3 | "He jerked a thumb toward" | | 4 | "Quinn's gaze followed the gesture," | | 5 | "The Veil Market, an underground" | | 6 | "The market's very existence was" | | 7 | "Quinn's colleague, Detective Inspector Reed," | | 8 | "Quinn's eyes narrowed; something about" | | 9 | "Quinn said, her voice even" | | 10 | "Reed nodded toward the body." | | 11 | "He crouched, gesturing for Quinn" | | 12 | "Quinn's eyes adjusted to the" | | 13 | "A small, ornate brass compass" | | 14 | "The compass's needle quivered, as" | | 15 | "Reed continued, He straightened, his" | | 16 | "Quinn's gaze lingered on the" | | 17 | "She couldn't shake the feeling" | | 18 | "Her attention drifted to the" | | 19 | "Her eyes returned to the" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, here she stood, surrounded" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A small, ornate brass compass – a Veil Compass, if she wasn't mistaken – rested on the victim's chest, its face etched with protective sigils that seemed to shi…" | | 1 | "The compass's needle quivered, as if detecting a nearby supernatural rift, which only added to the unease settling in the pit of Quinn's stomach." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she approached, a voice called out," |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Reed continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |