Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDPCF56758PW3RT96S7EX

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18.2s
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$0.018052
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Azure

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter hung back, the too-familiar weight of uncertainty pressing against her chest. She was fine with a lot of things: carrying awkward Chinese takeout orders up endless flights of stairs, navigating through London’s endless gray hustle, or even the odd scrape with mischievous synthetics. But this... her eyes danced over the ethereal landscape before her, feeling both a childlike thrill and a profound weight. Nyx strode noiselessly at the forefront, a darker shape amidst the palette of silver and gold. The threshold of the Fae Grove had flickered behind them like a glitch in reality, leaving them here — no, there — wherever and whenever this was. The Grove’s time-nature, tangled as it was, thumped with a muted heartbeat that Rory felt rather than heard. The Heartstone beneath her scarf lay unsettlingly warm against her collarbone, its pulse in strange harmony with the drumming of her own swift-beating heart. Behind her, Isolde Varga moved with a presence that defied the notion of presence, whisper-quiet and seamless among the otherworldly flora. Her eyes, pale lavender but dazedly focused, spoke volumes beyond human acumen. She seemed to melt into the Grove’s vibrant tapestry, almost as if both belonged intimately to the same story. “Mind the shadows,” Nyx’s voice came on a sidelong breeze, a mild night wind carrying hints of orange blossom and something heavier, darker. “Not all of them are mine.” Rory’s hand went to her left wrist, tracing absent-mindedly over the crescent scar as her gaze flicked uneasily from one swaying shadow to another. The ancient oak standing stones seemed to breathe, roots dancing beneath what passed here for earth — a surface that gleamed like wet ink under the evergreen blooms. The sky above them stretched vast and surreal, a weave of moving constellations swathed in luminescent mist, more breathtaking than any sky Rory had seen from her flat’s tiny window. Here, in this pocket between worlds, the celestial seemed to cycle in mere moments, nebulous clouds painting and unpainting themselves in a cosmic kaleidoscope. Isolde came by her side, offering a riddle of a smile. “The stars here love poetry,” she stated, a voice faint like twilight. “They deign not to be anchors but acts of verse.” Rory pinned her gaze upwards, heart catching. The twinkling sky didn’t just sparkle — it conversed. Deep constellations twisted, as if writing epic tales in their stellar language, emphasizing pronouncements that Rory could almost understand. “I'd wager something big is watching,” she breathed, voice a chord woven through night-harmonies. “A soft wager,” Isolde agreed, silver hair flowing like rivulets of moonlight as they ventured deeper, past luminous patches of wildflowers whose petals shifted color when touched by the smallest beam of starlight. Rory’s Fae-forged blade hung at her thigh, an icy reassurance as her fingers brushed against the hilt. Her breath fell rhythmic now, tuned to the Grove’s undulating beat. Occasionally, she felt a shimmer pass over her skin, like the veil of someone else’s dream grazing the edges of her reality. They came to a clearing where the earth appeared to cleave away in respectful terraces, leading into a wide basin thrummed by some unseen energy source. There, the landscape teemed with a chorus of sound, of rustling that wasn’t quite animal, wasn’t quite leaf. It was as if the earth sang, notes carried over the precise hum of what definitively made this place its own. “What’s below?” Rory inquired, peering over the incline. Its depths held mysteries — bundles of enchantment skimming the surface of understanding. “The Grove’s heart,” Nyx replied, phasing just past the tree line’s fold, their form shifting solid and mutable. “The soul of transition. A place between places.” The way Nyx said it, in whispers that tickled the mind's peripherals, made Rory shiver with a cocktail of anticipation and unease. Mystery was magnetic, drawing those curious enough to explore but wily enough to respect the unknown’s breadth. Time sang differently here, words of old stories breathing life under Rory's skin — tales remembered only in the glimmers of the Grove’s shifting myths. She could feel them there, layered beneath the present, a realm where light carried its own fables. As they pressed onward, Rory’s heart thundered not with fear, but the thrill of setting foot where lines of reality were painted freehand. Every step spoke to things ancient and unsaid, records unread by the limited eyes of her world. Nyx halted at a clearing's hem bordered by oaks older than memory, boughs aglow as if smudged with dream-glow phosphorescence. They turned to Rory, their violet eyes shadows with sparks beneath. “Fae never lie,” Nyx whispered, though their gaze remained fixed on Isolde who adorned an expression unreadable as twilight. “But truth hides between breaths.” “Wise words,” Isolde nodded, a faint wink of laughter echoing through the eternities dotted in her eyes. She angled her head, hair caught in the draft of her own ethereal presence. “Trust not the utterance but the pause.” Rory absently ran her thumb over her own pulse, comfort emanating from the steady drumming of life — so real, so present. She shared a brief glance with the Grove's seer. The connection with Isolde felt profound, a web of understanding spun lighter than silk yet strong enough to tether sky and earth. A sudden breeze rifled through the leaves, the Grove reacting as one harmonious entity. A whisper from a leafless branch brushed Rory’s senses with a tale of elegance stitched into the natural order. The beauty within the chaos caused her chest to swell. “Here, purpose disguises as destiny,” Isolde elaborated, motioning towards a nearby thicket there framing a path of forgotten magic. It wound sinuously, enticingly, a question mark cut out from reality questioning its own existence. Rory stepped closer, ever the explorer despite the whispers of restraint coursing through her. The moment stretched, an eternity reduced to a heartbeat. Here in this sliver of timelessness, she saw the shimmer of the Veil for what it was — not simply a boundary, but an invitation. But just as quickly, that shine dimmed, sweeping back into shadow. Rory blinked, grounded among the Grove’s whimsical dance of flora and magic. They had come far, yet scarcity felt infinite, offering both solace and fear. A return seemed distant, punctuated by the Grove’s spellbook of sung realities. “We should move,” Nyx prodded, their form flickering as if life were contingent, shadow-bound and free. Their voice, though edged in shadow, carried the comforting cadence of familiarity. Rory glanced back one last time, the vistas behind imbued with a fleeting wistfulness only found in dreams. The Fae Grove's melody had dug a niche within her — one not easily untangled from her heart. Together, they began the trek back, echoes of alien beauty tender yet embedded firmly where imagination dared tread lightly. Silence rippled like a prayer, ignored by presence’s gentle commandment. Here chronologies overlapped, worlds brushed close, worlds both ends and beginnings. And writ upon the remaining twilight was the journey itself, unspooling along a thread of paths danced across by shadows and stars.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx replied, phasing just past the tree line’s fold, their form shifting solid and mutable [just]"
83.0508% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"quickly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"ethereal"
count2
1
word"luminous"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"surreal"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"profound"
count2
10
word"whimsical"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"solace"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"dance"
count1
16
word"dancing"
count1
17
word"amidst"
count1
18
word"echoes"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"navigating"
count1
21
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"luminous"
2"tapestry"
3"flickered"
4"flicked"
5"otherworldly"
6"surreal"
7"silk"
8"unreadable"
9"profound"
10"whimsical"
11"magnetic"
12"solace"
13"anticipation"
14"weight"
15"dance"
16"dancing"
17"amidst"
18"echoes"
19"echoing"
20"navigating"
21"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
60.7522% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean42.14
std15.28
cv0.363
sampleLengths
065
185
252
329
452
554
633
735
814
933
1050
1165
1221
1326
1439
1542
1640
1731
1824
1938
2053
2143
2234
2348
2448
2528
2636
2762
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was, thumped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
99.4950% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1109
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.0405770964833183
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.018935978358881875
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.2808% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.62
std6.58
cv0.396
sampleLengths
013
132
22
318
416
527
618
724
821
912
1019
1123
126
1324
1428
1530
1624
1711
1812
1910
207
219
2219
2314
2433
2517
2611
2722
2826
2918
3021
318
3213
3318
348
3522
3617
3725
3817
3923
4017
4120
4211
4319
445
4517
4614
477
4822
499
69.0141% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4647887323943662
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Nyx’s voice came on a sidelong breeze, a mild night wind carrying hints of orange blossom and something heavier, darker (come carry)"
1"she stated, a voice faint like twilight (state, like)"
2"she breathed, voice a chord woven through night-harmonies (breathe, voice weave)"
3"Isolde agreed, silver hair flowing like rivulets of moonlight as they ventured deeper, past luminous patches of wildflowers whose petals shifted color when touched by the smallest beam of starlight (agree, like venture shift touch)"
4"inquired (inquire)"
5"Nyx replied, phasing just past the tree line’s fold, their form shifting solid and mutable (reply, just past shift)"
6"Nyx whispered, though their gaze remained fixed on Isolde who adorned an expression unreadable as twilight (whisper, remain fix adorn)"
7"Isolde nodded, a faint wink of laughter echoing through the eternities dotted in her eyes (nod, echo dot)"
8"Isolde elaborated, motioning towards a nearby thicket there framing a path of forgotten magic (elaborate, motion frame)"
9"Nyx prodded, their form flickering as if life were contingent, shadow-bound and free (prod, flicker be)"
82.9761%