Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1109
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
45
adverbRatio
0.0405770964833183
lyAdverbCount
21
lyAdverbRatio
0.018935978358881875
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
71
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
98.2808%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
71
mean
16.62
std
6.58
cv
0.396
sampleLengths
0
13
1
32
2
2
3
18
4
16
5
27
6
18
7
24
8
21
9
12
10
19
11
23
12
6
13
24
14
28
15
30
16
24
17
11
18
12
19
10
20
7
21
9
22
19
23
14
24
33
25
17
26
11
27
22
28
26
29
18
30
21
31
8
32
13
33
18
34
8
35
22
36
17
37
25
38
17
39
23
40
17
41
20
42
11
43
19
44
5
45
17
46
14
47
7
48
22
49
9
69.0141%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.4647887323943662
totalSentences
71
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Nyx’s voice came on a sidelong breeze, a mild night wind carrying hints of orange blossom and something heavier, darker (come carry)"
1
"she stated, a voice faint like twilight (state, like)"
2
"she breathed, voice a chord woven through night-harmonies (breathe, voice weave)"
3
"Isolde agreed, silver hair flowing like rivulets of moonlight as they ventured deeper, past luminous patches of wildflowers whose petals shifted color when touched by the smallest beam of starlight (agree, like venture shift touch)"
4
"inquired (inquire)"
5
"Nyx replied, phasing just past the tree line’s fold, their form shifting solid and mutable (reply, just past shift)"
6
"Nyx whispered, though their gaze remained fixed on Isolde who adorned an expression unreadable as twilight (whisper, remain fix adorn)"
7
"Isolde nodded, a faint wink of laughter echoing through the eternities dotted in her eyes (nod, echo dot)"
8
"Isolde elaborated, motioning towards a nearby thicket there framing a path of forgotten magic (elaborate, motion frame)"
9
"Nyx prodded, their form flickering as if life were contingent, shadow-bound and free (prod, flicker be)"