| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "navigating" | | 3 | "profound" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "tapestry" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "surreal" | | 14 | "kaleidoscope" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "anticipation" | | 18 | "magnetic" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "thundered" | | 21 | "unreadable" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "silk" | | 24 | "whimsical" | | 25 | "dance" | | 26 | "solace" | | 27 | "comforting" | | 28 | "fleeting" | | 29 | "echoes" | | 30 | "firmly" | | 31 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 56.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1180 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 10 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.779 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if writing epic tales in their stellar language, emphasizing pronouncements that Rory could almost understand" | | 1 | "quite leaf" | | 2 | "It was as if the earth sang, notes carried over the precise hum of what definitively made this place its own" | | 3 | "seemed distant punctuated by the Grove’s spellbook of sung realities" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.39 | | wordCount | 1180 | | matches | | 0 | "not to be anchors but acts of verse" | | 1 | "not with fear, but the thrill of setting foot" | | 2 | "not the utterance but the pause" | | 3 | "not simply a boundary, but an invitation" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.75% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 42.14 | | std | 15.28 | | cv | 0.363 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 62 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "The threshold of the Fae Grove had flickered behind them like a glitch in reality, leaving them here — no, there — wherever and whenever this was." | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones seemed to breathe, roots dancing beneath what passed here for earth — a surface that gleamed like wet ink under the evergreen blooms." | | 2 | "The twinkling sky didn’t just sparkle — it conversed." | | 3 | "Its depths held mysteries — bundles of enchantment skimming the surface of understanding." | | 4 | "Time sang differently here, words of old stories breathing life under Rory's skin — tales remembered only in the glimmers of the Grove’s shifting myths." | | 5 | "Rory absently ran her thumb over her own pulse, comfort emanating from the steady drumming of life — so real, so present." | | 6 | "Here in this sliver of timelessness, she saw the shimmer of the Veil for what it was — not simply a boundary, but an invitation." | | 7 | "The Fae Grove's melody had dug a niche within her — one not easily untangled from her heart." |
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| 99.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1109 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.0405770964833183 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018935978358881875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.28% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.62 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 69.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4647887323943662 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 51.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Occasionally, she felt a shimmer" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She was fine with a" | | 1 | "her eyes danced over the" | | 2 | "Her eyes, pale lavender but" | | 3 | "She seemed to melt into" | | 4 | "she stated, a voice faint" | | 5 | "she breathed, voice a chord" | | 6 | "Her breath fell rhythmic now," | | 7 | "They came to a clearing" | | 8 | "It was as if the" | | 9 | "Its depths held mysteries —" | | 10 | "She could feel them there," | | 11 | "They turned to Rory, their" | | 12 | "She angled her head, hair" | | 13 | "She shared a brief glance" | | 14 | "It wound sinuously, enticingly, a" | | 15 | "They had come far, yet" | | 16 | "Their voice, though edged in" |
| | ratio | 0.262 | |
| 13.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter hung back, the" | | 1 | "She was fine with a" | | 2 | "her eyes danced over the" | | 3 | "Nyx strode noiselessly at the" | | 4 | "The threshold of the Fae" | | 5 | "The Grove’s time-nature, tangled as" | | 6 | "The Heartstone beneath her scarf" | | 7 | "Her eyes, pale lavender but" | | 8 | "She seemed to melt into" | | 9 | "Nyx’s voice came on a" | | 10 | "Rory’s hand went to her" | | 11 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 12 | "The sky above them stretched" | | 13 | "Here, in this pocket between" | | 14 | "Isolde came by her side," | | 15 | "she stated, a voice faint" | | 16 | "Rory pinned her gaze upwards," | | 17 | "The twinkling sky didn’t just" | | 18 | "she breathed, voice a chord" | | 19 | "Isolde agreed, silver hair flowing" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Isolde Varga moved with a presence that defied the notion of presence, whisper-quiet and seamless among the otherworldly flora." | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones seemed to breathe, roots dancing beneath what passed here for earth — a surface that gleamed like wet ink under the evergreen bl…" | | 2 | "Deep constellations twisted, as if writing epic tales in their stellar language, emphasizing pronouncements that Rory could almost understand." | | 3 | "It was as if the earth sang, notes carried over the precise hum of what definitively made this place its own." | | 4 | "Nyx halted at a clearing's hem bordered by oaks older than memory, boughs aglow as if smudged with dream-glow phosphorescence." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, though their gaze remained fixed on Isolde who adorned an expression unreadable as twilight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she stated (state)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "Rory inquired (inquire)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Isolde elaborated (elaborate)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |