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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDZ67RPSKWB364879M5SQ
Run Details
Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.000385
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
81.17%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
2.11%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
95.24%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
79.45%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
89.60%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
97.65%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
38.89%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
31.11%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
61.85%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
25.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.6001%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
In the heart of London, rain slashed down like silver needles, turning the city into a slick,
glistening
beast.
Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper
hair darkened by the downpour, pursued her suspect through the labyrinthine streets of Soho.
The man, Tomás Herrera, darted
around corners, his olive skin a
stark
contrast against the neon lights reflecting off the wet cobblestones.
Quinn's breath misted in the
chilly air, her worn leather
watch
ticking away the seconds on her left wrist.
She wasn't about to lose
him, not again. Quinn's sharp jaw was set, her brown
eyes narrowed
against the rain.
She'd been chasing Herrera for
blocks, ever since he'd bolted from The Raven's Nest, Silas' bar, where she'd been waiting for him.
The bar's distinctive green neon
sign had been a
beacon
in the storm, but now it was just a distant glow, swallowed by the night. She could still see Herrera, though, his dark form weaving through the crowds, his Saint Christopher medallion
glinting
under the streetlamps.
Herrera suddenly veered left, disappearing
down a narrow alley.
Quinn pushed herself harder, her
military precision driving her forward.
She rounded the corner, her
shoes slipping on the wet ground.
The alley was a dead
end, but Herrera was nowhere to be seen. Then she noticed the grate, half-hidden in the shadows.
It was open, revealing a
dark hole leading downwards.
Quinn hesitated, her heart pounding
in her chest.
She'd heard rumors about the
Veil Market, the supernatural black market that operated beneath the city.
It was said to move
locations every full moon, and tonight, the moon was full.
She glanced back at the
street, then down at the gaping hole.
Herrera was her key to
the clique, to understanding what had
happened to
her partner, DS Morris.
She couldn't let him slip
away.
She holstered her gun, grabbed
the edge of the grate, and swung herself down into the darkness. Her feet hit the cold, damp ground, and she found herself in a tunnel, the air heavy with the scent of earth and something else, something acrid and unfamiliar.
She could hear Herrera's footsteps
echoing
ahead, and she set off after him, her flashlight cutting through the
gloom
. The tunnel opened up into a vast cavern, and Quinn found herself staring at the Veil Market.
It was like nothing she'd
ever seen. Stalls made of bone and shadow sold everything from glowing potions to cages filled with writhing,
otherworldly
creatures. The air hummed with energy, and the chatter of the market-goers filled the space, a
cacophony
of languages and voices that grated against her ears. Quinn spotted Herrera up ahead, weaving through the crowd.
She followed, her heart pounding
in her chest.
She was out of her
depth, but she couldn't stop now. Not when she was so close. Herrera
suddenly
turned, disappearing behind a stall. Quinn
quickened
her pace, pushing past a group of hooded figures.
She rounded the stall, her
breath catching in her throat. Herrera
was gone
, but there was a door set into the rock face, a bone token inserted into a slot above the handle.
She reached out, her fingers
brushing the token.
It was warm to the
touch, pulsing with an
otherworldly
energy.
She looked around, her heart
pounding
.
She could hear voices on
the other side of the door, low and urgent. She could turn back, leave the market, forget she'd ever seen this place. But she thought of Morris, of the empty space in her life where he'd once been. She thought of the clique, of the secrets they hid. She couldn't turn back now. Quinn took a deep breath, pulled the bone token from the slot, and pushed open the door. The voices stopped, and she found herself in a small, dimly lit room. Herrera was there, along with two other men, their faces hard and cold. They were all looking at her, surprise
etched
on their faces. "Detective Quinn,"
Herrera said, his voice barely above a whisper
. "What are you doing here?" Quinn looked around the room, her eyes landing on a table in the corner. It was covered with files, photographs, evidence. Evidence of the clique, of their activities. She
felt a thrill
of triumph, but it was short-lived. She
was outnumbered
, and she was in their territory. "I could ask you the same thing, Herrera,"
she said, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach
. "But I think I already know the answer." Herrera sighed, running a hand through his short curly hair. "I'm afraid you do, Detective. And I'm afraid you've made a
very
big mistake." Quinn's hand inched towards her gun, but she knew it was too late. She'd made her choice, and now she had to face the consequences. But she
wasn't going
down without a fight. Not again. Not ever again. The room was silent, the
tension
palpable
.
Then, suddenly, one of the
men lunged at her, his face contorted with rage. Quinn reacted instinctively, her training kicking in. She dodged his attack, her hand finally reaching her gun. She fired, the sound
echoing
loudly in the small room. The man fell to the ground, clutching his leg, a look of shock on his face. Herrera and the other man exchanged a look, then turned to face her. Quinn backed up, her gun trained on them, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She
was outnumbered
, but she wasn't outmatched. Not yet. "Stay back,"
she warned, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins
. "I don't want to hurt anyone else, but I will if I have to." Herrera held up his hands, a sad smile on his face. "I believe you, Detective. But I'm afraid it's too late for that." Quinn
felt a chill
run
down her spine
,
a sense of unease
settling over her. She looked around the room, her eyes landing on a mirror in the corner. She could see her reflection, but it was distorted, warped. And behind her, in the reflection, she could see a figure, a figure that wasn't there. She spun around, her gun raised, but it was too late. The figure was already on her, its hands cold and clammy as they closed around her throat. She struggled, kicking and punching, but it
was like fighting
smoke. She
could feel
the life draining out of her, her vision starting to swim. And then, everything went black. When Quinn came to, she was back in the alley, the rain still pouring down around her. She gasped for breath, her hand going to her throat. It was sore, but there was no mark, no sign of the attack.
She looked around, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The grate
was closed
, the tunnel sealed. There was no sign of Herrera, no sign of the Veil Market. She stumbled to her feet, her body aching. She felt disoriented, confused. Had it all been a dream? No, she thought, her hand going to her pocket. Her fingers closed around the bone token, still warm, still pulsing with energy. It hadn't been a dream. It had been real. And now, she had proof. Quinn looked up at the sky, the rain still falling, the moon still full. She knew she should go back, report what she'd seen. But she also knew that no one would believe her. Not without more evidence. And she knew where to find it. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what was to come.
Then she turned, her eyes
on the grate, on the darkness below. She
wasn't going
to let this go. Not now. Not ever. She was going to find the truth, no matter what it took.
No matter where it led
her.
Even if it meant going
back into the darkness, back into the Veil Market. She was going to find her answers. And she was going to bring the clique to justice. No matter what the cost.
total_cost
0.00038475
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
8
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
81.17%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1328
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
3
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
2
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
2.11%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1328
totalAiIsms
26
found
0
word
"glistening"
count
1
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"beacon"
count
1
3
word
"glinting"
count
1
4
word
"pounding"
count
5
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"echoing"
count
2
7
word
"gloom"
count
1
8
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
9
word
"cacophony"
count
1
10
word
"quickened"
count
1
11
word
"etched"
count
1
12
word
"whisper"
count
1
13
word
"stomach"
count
1
14
word
"tension"
count
1
15
word
"palpable"
count
1
16
word
"chill"
count
1
17
word
"down her spine"
count
1
18
word
"sense of"
count
1
19
word
"could feel"
count
1
highlights
0
"glistening"
1
"stark"
2
"beacon"
3
"glinting"
4
"pounding"
5
"footsteps"
6
"echoing"
7
"gloom"
8
"otherworldly"
9
"cacophony"
10
"quickened"
11
"etched"
12
"whisper"
13
"stomach"
14
"tension"
15
"palpable"
16
"chill"
17
"down her spine"
18
"sense of"
19
"could feel"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"a sense of unease"
95.24%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
4
narrationSentences
112
matches
0
"felt a thrill"
1
"d with rage"
2
"a sense of unease"
3
"felt a chill"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
112
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"happened to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
117
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1328
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
50
wordCount
1255
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.27
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London
1
Harlow
1
Quinn
16
Soho
1
Tomás
1
Herrera
16
Raven
1
Nest
1
Saint
1
Christopher
1
Veil
4
Market
4
Morris
2
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Tomás"
3
"Herrera"
4
"Saint"
5
"Christopher"
6
"Market"
7
"Morris"
places
0
"London"
1
"Soho"
2
"Raven"
3
"Veil"
globalScore
0.863
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
99
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1328
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
117
matches
(empty)
79.45%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
49.19
std
21.06
cv
0.428
sampleLengths
0
87
1
80
2
61
3
74
4
65
5
67
6
34
7
70
8
64
9
54
10
15
11
47
12
28
13
24
14
38
15
64
16
36
17
28
18
23
19
55
20
53
21
5
22
68
23
54
24
45
25
67
26
22
89.60%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
112
matches
0
"was said"
1
"was gone"
2
"was outnumbered"
3
"was outnumbered"
4
"was closed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
219
matches
0
"wasn't going"
1
"was like fighting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
117
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
97.65%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
164
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
7
adverbRatio
0.042682926829268296
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.006097560975609756
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
117
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
117
mean
11.35
std
5.24
cv
0.462
sampleLengths
0
19
1
19
2
22
3
19
4
8
5
12
6
22
7
25
8
21
9
9
10
10
11
11
12
13
13
9
14
9
15
8
16
16
17
15
18
12
19
17
20
6
21
17
22
29
23
19
24
17
25
7
26
18
27
25
28
9
29
8
30
11
31
6
32
7
33
11
34
10
35
23
36
8
37
11
38
6
39
14
40
13
41
16
42
10
43
5
44
17
45
13
46
13
47
11
48
10
49
5
38.89%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.19658119658119658
totalSentences
117
uniqueOpeners
23
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"Then she noticed the grate,"
1
"Then, suddenly, one of the"
2
"Then she turned, her eyes"
ratio
0.028
31.11%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
51
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"She wasn't about to lose"
1
"She'd been chasing Herrera for"
2
"She could still see Herrera,"
3
"She rounded the corner, her"
4
"It was open, revealing a"
5
"She'd heard rumors about the"
6
"It was said to move"
7
"She glanced back at the"
8
"She couldn't let him slip"
9
"She holstered her gun, grabbed"
10
"Her feet hit the cold,"
11
"She could hear Herrera's footsteps"
12
"It was like nothing she'd"
13
"She followed, her heart pounding"
14
"She was out of her"
15
"She rounded the stall, her"
16
"She reached out, her fingers"
17
"It was warm to the"
18
"She looked around, her heart"
19
"She could hear voices on"
ratio
0.472
61.85%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
86
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper"
1
"The man, Tomás Herrera, darted"
2
"Quinn's breath misted in the"
3
"She wasn't about to lose"
4
"Quinn's sharp jaw was set,"
5
"She'd been chasing Herrera for"
6
"The bar's distinctive green neon"
7
"She could still see Herrera,"
8
"Herrera suddenly veered left, disappearing"
9
"Quinn pushed herself harder, her"
10
"She rounded the corner, her"
11
"The alley was a dead"
12
"It was open, revealing a"
13
"Quinn hesitated, her heart pounding"
14
"She'd heard rumors about the"
15
"It was said to move"
16
"She glanced back at the"
17
"Herrera was her key to"
18
"She couldn't let him slip"
19
"She holstered her gun, grabbed"
ratio
0.796
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
3
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"No matter where it led"
1
"Even if it meant going"
2
"No matter what the cost."
ratio
0.028
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
67
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"She'd heard rumors about the Veil Market, the supernatural black market that operated beneath the city."
1
"She could hear Herrera's footsteps echoing ahead, and she set off after him, her flashlight cutting through the gloom."
2
"She could feel the life draining out of her, her vision starting to swim."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"Herrera said, his voice barely above a whisper"
1
"she said, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
2
"she warned, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins"
25.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences
8
tagDensity
0.375
leniency
0.75
rawRatio
0.333
effectiveRatio
0.25
82.6001%