Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE18CHP9HQMKKHHRV7JHP

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9.0s
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$0.000367

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the creaking lift, her worn leather boots echoing in the abandoned Tube station. The air was damp and heavy, laden with the scent of decay and something else—an acrid tang that prickled her nostrils. She adjusted her watch, the worn leather strap familiar under her fingers, and surveyed the scene. The Veil Market, hidden beneath Camden, was a labyrinth of stalls and alleyways, a supernatural black market that moved with the moon. Tonight, it was bathed in the cold glow of emergency lights, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to writhe with a life of their own. Quinn's partner, Detective Sergeant Thompson, was already there, his lanky frame hunched over a body sprawled on the grimy floor. He looked up as she approached, his glasses reflecting the harsh light. "Quinn," he acknowledged, straightening. "You're late." Quinn ignored the jab. She was never late, not really. But Thompson didn't know about her detour, the whispered conversation with an informant in a back alley, the exchange of a bone token for a tip about a body here. She stepped closer, her sharp jaw set in a grim line. The victim was a woman, her curly red hair fanned out around her like a halo. Her eyes were closed, her face peaceful, almost serene. Too peaceful, given the circumstances. Quinn crouched down, her military precision evident in her movements. She noted the round glasses askew on the bridge of the woman's nose, the worn leather satchel beside her, overflowing with books. She reached out, gently tucking a strand of hair behind the woman's left ear, revealing a freckled complexion. "Eva Kowalski," Quinn murmured, recognition dawning. "Aurora's friend." Thompson nodded. "Yeah. Know her?" Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping the area. "Not personally. But I've seen her with Aurora. She's a researcher, works at the British Museum." Thompson consulted his notebook. "Evie, according to her ID. Any idea what she was doing here?" Quinn didn't answer, her attention drawn to the woman's hands. They were clean, no signs of struggle. No defensive wounds, no bruising. She looked around again, her brow furrowing. Something was off. She could feel it, like a prickle at the back of her neck. She noticed it then, the faint glow emanating from Eva's satchel. She reached in, her fingers brushing against leather-bound books, a tattered map, and then, a small brass compass. It was old, the casing etched with protective sigils, the needle pointing not north, but towards a dark corner of the market. Towards a rift, according to the whispers she'd heard. "Quinn?" Thompson prompted, following her gaze. "What is it?" Quinn held up the compass, the patina of verdigris glinting under the lights. "This," she said, "is a Veil Compass. It's attuned to supernatural energy." Thompson scoffed. "Supernatural? Quinn, come on. We're talking about a murder here, not some ghost story." Quinn ignored him, her mind racing. She'd seen one of these before, three years ago, during the case that had taken Morris. The one she still couldn't explain. The one that had led her here, to the Veil Market, to Eva Kowalski's body. She stood, her gaze sweeping the area again. This time, she saw it—the faint shimmer in the air, the subtle distortion. A rift, barely visible, pulsating with energy. She stepped closer, the compass needle spinning wildly in her hand. "Quinn, what are you doing?" Thompson asked, concern etched on his face. "We should wait for backup." Quinn didn't respond. She couldn't. Not when she was so close. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the shimmer. It was cold, like ice, and it hummed under her touch. She could feel it, the energy pulsing, the otherworldly power. She looked back at Eva, her serene face, her unmarked body. She didn't struggle, Quinn thought. Because she didn't have to. Because she'd gone through the rift willingly. Quinn stepped back, her mind made up. "We're not dealing with a murder here, Thompson," she said, her voice steady. "We're dealing with a disappearance." Thompson stared at her, disbelief written all over his face. "A disappearance? Quinn, she's dead. We have a body." Quinn shook her head. "No, we don't. Not really. Not in the way you think." She looked at Eva again, her heart heavy. "She's not here, Thompson. She's gone. Through the rift." Thompson opened his mouth to argue, then closed it, his gaze flicking between Quinn and the rift. He sighed, running a hand through his hair. "Alright, Quinn. Let's say you're right. Let's say she went through willingly. Why? What's on the other side?" Quinn looked at the compass, the needle still spinning wildly. "I don't know," she admitted. "But I intend to find out." She took a deep breath, steeling herself. Then, before Thompson could protest, she stepped forward, into the shimmer. Into the rift. Into the unknown. The world around her shifted, the market dissolving into a kaleidoscope of colors and shapes. She felt a tug, a pull, like she was being stretched thin. Then, as suddenly as it had begun, it ended. Quinn stumbled, her boots sinking into soft earth. She looked around, her breath catching in her throat. She was in a forest, the trees ancient, their branches heavy with leaves that seemed to absorb the light. The air was thick with humidity, the scent of earth and something else—something sweet, almost intoxicating. She heard a rustle, a soft footstep. She turned, her hand going to her gun. But it wasn't Eva. It was a man, tall, his skin the color of moonlight. His eyes were black, bottomless, and he smiled at her, his teeth sharp. "Welcome, Detective," he said, his voice like velvet. "I've been waiting for you." Quinn's hand tightened on her gun, her heart pounding in her chest. "Where's Eva?" she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her gut. The man's smile widened. "Eva?" he echoed. "Ah, yes. The researcher. She's here, Detective. She's waiting for you." Quinn's heart pounded louder. She could feel it now, the energy pulsing around her, through her. She could feel Eva, too, her presence like a beacon. She took a step forward, then another, her gaze locked on the man. "Quinn," he warned, his smile fading. "You shouldn't—" But Quinn didn't stop. She couldn't. Not when she was so close. Not when she could feel Eva, so near, yet so far. She stepped forward, into the light. Into the unknown. Into the mystery that had led her here, to this place, to this moment. And she knew, as she took that final step, that her life would never be the same.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
64.0288% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.0791% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"furrowing"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"glinting"
2"otherworldly"
3"velvet"
4"furrowing"
5"dancing"
6"echoed"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
9"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean31.66
std16.73
cv0.528
sampleLengths
055
147
238
351
480
58
65
723
816
945
1060
119
1225
1316
1443
1539
1617
1741
1828
1925
2019
2132
2243
2321
2424
2536
2652
2743
2813
2926
3018
3139
328
3323
3440
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was bathed"
1"were closed"
2"being stretched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount943
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"against leather-bound books,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.036055143160127257
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009544008483563097
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean9.72
std5.73
cv0.589
sampleLengths
018
121
216
322
425
520
612
74
82
94
106
1130
1211
1316
149
155
1610
1722
1818
196
202
212
223
237
2416
254
2612
2710
287
295
307
313
3213
3311
3418
3522
369
376
383
3913
4012
412
4214
436
4416
456
4615
478
4813
497
39.4737% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners36
36.1111% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged, straightening (acknowledge, straighten)"
1"Quinn murmured, recognition dawning (murmur, dawn)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
3"demanded (demand)"
4"he warned, his smile fading (warn, fade)"
83.2172%