Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE845VXYGD9G6S7ETC5K1

Run Details

Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.001145

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, the stale air heavy with layers of dust and long-abandoned secrets. The dim light flickered overhead, struggling to break through the gloom that clung to the cracked walls like a shroud. The Market was rumored to have moved into this forgotten underworld, an unholy realm where the lines between the mundane and the supernatural blurred. Today, it was a crime scene, and Quinn’s senses tingled with a mix of dread and curiosity. Her brown eyes flickered over the scene—the body lay crumpled near a faded “Mind the Gap” sign, an unsettling juxtaposition against the romantic decay of old transport. The victim, a twenty-something they had tentatively identified as a low-level dealer in enchanted goods, was sprawled awkwardly, limbs askew in a way that suggested a struggle. Blood pooled beneath him, dark and thick, soaking into the cracks of the tiled floor, reminiscent of spilled ink on parchment. “Quinn! Over here!” a familiar voice called out, rousing her from her thoughts. It was Detective Jamie Chen, his face taut with concern. The tension between them was palpable, a current coursing through the air. Despite their shared years of service, the circumstances of her past had driven a wedge between them—a wall Quinn had no interest in scaling. “What do they say about our victim?” she asked, her voice clipped, eyes narrowing as they darted over his features. “Name’s Aaron Graves. Small-time operator, just a cog in the wheel of the Veil Market,” Chen replied, crouching over the body. He drew an ungloved hand across his brow, the sterile touch of latex sparking a memory of what they both lost three years prior. DS Morris. She could feel the weight of the past suffocating her resolve, but she pushed it aside, focusing instead on the present horror that surrounded them. “Then why the hell is he out here?” Quinn mused, her voice lowering as she examined the area around the body with a meticulous eye. “This isn’t typical turf for an enchanter. It doesn’t make sense.” Chen shifted, a hint of discomfort flushing in his cheeks. “He might’ve been meeting someone. Someone who didn’t take kindly to his... business practices.” Quinn shook her head. “No. Look at the way he fell—no sign of struggle. Whoever did this wanted him to die here, in this place. Why not in the Market? It’s essentially a cemetery of deals gone sideways; no one notices yet another ghost wandering through the shadows. There should be plenty of evidence if he was an important player in their dark games.” To her surprise, Chen distractedly rifled through the leather satchel that lay half-open near the victim. “Maybe you’re overthinking it. There’s no crime like a mundane murder when you can find a good supernatural angle.” She watched him pull out an assortment of trinkets, eyes narrowing as she noticed something glint among the motley collection. It was a small brass compass, dully gleaming beneath the flooded lights. Quinn’s breath caught in her throat; the needle spun lazily in circles, as though caught in a dream. “The Veil Compass,” she breathed, moving closer. “It shouldn’t be here.” “Good catch, Detective,” Chen said, voice tentative. Quinn single-mindedly focused on the needle’s erratic movement. The compass was no ordinary tool; it was a vessel of knowledge, designed to point toward supernatural disturbances. Only someone intricately tied to the Market would carry such an item. The implications swirled like smoke before her—Graves might have been a bigger player than they first assumed. “How did he get this?” she asked, snapping her gaze back to Chen. He grimaced but remained silent. “It’s a crucial piece of evidence.” “Or just a trinket. It might explain his death if you think it was some cleaner wanting to settle a score,” he suggested. She detected a nervous edge lacing his words, and Quinn felt her heart harden. “And yet it tells me something more. If it was just a simple feud, he wouldn’t have been killed here without any sign of a struggle or chases through the Market. Chains of power run deep beneath the surface, and we’re just scratching the veneer.” She glanced at the walls, whose once-vibrant advertisements faded into nothingness. “Look around. This place is forgotten, yet it’s packed with potential for all kinds of crime.” Chen straightened, hands on his hips. “I’m not sure it changes the case’s direction, if I’m honest. We don’t have anything concrete; it could just as easily be a drug deal gone wrong.” Quinn caught a flicker of movement from the far corner of the station. Something shifted beneath a tangle of shadows—a figure almost imperceptibly slinking away, a flash of color against the barren landscape. Her instincts prickled, urgent and demanding. “Stay here,” she commanded, before darting toward the shadows, adrenaline spurring her into motion. She closed the distance quickly, relying on her training, her body moving with practiced precision through the debris of the derelict space. Dust motes danced in the narrow beams of light, her gaze locking on the figure that was slowly revealing itself. It was a girl, perhaps no older than sixteen, her curly red hair popping against the grim surroundings. Fear flickered in her green eyes, and Quinn softened instinctively; she knew the allure of the Market could ensnare anyone desperate enough. “Wait!” Quinn called out, her voice softer this time. The girl hesitated, eyes darting towards Chen standing awkwardly by the body. “I’m not here to hurt you. I need to ask you something,” Quinn added, stepping closer. The girl took a step back, posture taut, clearly torn between fleeing and submitting to Quinn’s quiet authority. “Who are you?” she croaked, a quiver in her voice. “Detective Harlow Quinn. I’m investigating what happened here. I know you saw something.” “Why would I tell you anything?” she retorted, a spark of defiance igniting. “Because, whatever you’re caught up in, it will only become worse. You know that.” Quinn’s gaze was steady, the desperation evident in the girl’s attitude. After a long pause, the girl lowered her guard slightly, her brow furrowing. “I… I saw him with a group. They seemed off, like they were hiding something important. They had strange things with them. The Veil Compass—it belonged to them.” Quinn felt the pieces sliding into place, realization dawning. “Do you know who they met?” “N-no,” the girl stammered. “But I heard them talk about the rifts. They’re moving goods across from one to another.” The weight of the revelation hung taut in the air, as Quinn stepped back, her mind racing with implications that spiraled outward like the compass’s needle. She exchanged a quick glance with Chen, who approached, curiosity piqued. “The rifts?” he echoed, concern blending with the intrigue. “Things are more entangled than we thought,” Quinn replied, a fire igniting within her. The crime scene, the fallen body, the compass—it all pointed toward something far more treacherous than she had suspected. “This could spiral out of control, Quinn. We’re talking about a criminal network that stretches beyond this case.” “I know,” she replied, determination hardening her features. “But we’re going to find the heart of this. We owe it to those who lost their lives under the weight of it, and to those who might lose more.” Quinn’s resolve hardened as they turned back toward the shadows of the marketplace. The darkness felt less like an abyss and more like a puzzle waiting to be solved. The smell of decay in the air was pungent, but somewhere within the scent of iron and dust, she could sense the faintest trace of something extraordinary stirring. They were only beginning to scratch the surface, and Quinn intended to dive deep, wherever it may lead.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
69.3721% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.1164% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"gleaming"
4"glint"
5"furrowing"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"know that.” Quinn’s"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean36.91
std20.1
cv0.544
sampleLengths
081
175
259
320
472
536
624
764
835
950
1011
117
1255
1324
1437
1572
1633
1753
1842
1940
2037
2128
2213
2313
2425
2541
2615
2720
2837
299
3033
3118
3238
3357
3418
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"was rumored"
1"was sprawled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
99.4648% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount872
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03669724770642202
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.020642201834862386
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean16.78
std9.58
cv0.571
sampleLengths
020
120
224
317
427
527
621
713
810
912
1024
1120
1221
1324
142
1525
1625
1711
1810
1914
204
2160
2216
2319
2420
2512
2618
277
284
297
308
3118
3212
3317
3413
355
366
3723
3814
3956
4016
416
4227
4313
4420
456
4614
4722
4820
4918
83.9827% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5194805194805194
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners40
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"Chen replied, crouching over the body (reply, crouch)"
1"she breathed, moving closer (breathe, move)"
2"Chen said, voice tentative (say, voice)"
3"he suggested (suggest)"
4"she commanded, before darting toward the shadows, adrenaline spurring her into motion (command, dart spur)"
5"Quinn added, stepping closer (add, step)"
6"croaked (croak)"
7"retorted (retort)"
8"the girl stammered (stammer)"
9"Quinn replied, a fire igniting within her (reply, ignite)"
10"she replied, determination hardening her features (reply, harden)"
84.7609%