| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.559 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1299 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1299 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "resolve" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "potential" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "furrowing" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "intrigue" | | 16 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1292 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 861 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.21 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Tube | 1 | | Market | 3 | | Detective | 2 | | Jamie | 1 | | Chen | 9 | | Morris | 1 | | Graves | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Detective" | | 4 | "Jamie" | | 5 | "Chen" | | 6 | "Morris" | | 7 | "Graves" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.397 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1292 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 36.91 | | std | 20.1 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 57 | | 34 | 18 |
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| 94.12% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "was rumored" | | 1 | "was sprawled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "was slowly revealing" | | 1 | "were only beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "Her brown eyes flickered over the scene—the body lay crumpled near a faded “Mind the Gap” sign, an unsettling juxtaposition against the romantic decay of old transport." | | 1 | "Despite their shared years of service, the circumstances of her past had driven a wedge between them—a wall Quinn had no interest in scaling." | | 2 | "“No. Look at the way he fell—no sign of struggle. Whoever did this wanted him to die here, in this place. Why not in the Market? It’s essentially a cemetery of deals gone sideways; no one notices yet another ghost wandering through the shadows. There should be plenty of evidence if he was an important player in their dark games.”" | | 3 | "Quinn’s breath caught in her throat; the needle spun lazily in circles, as though caught in a dream." | | 4 | "The compass was no ordinary tool; it was a vessel of knowledge, designed to point toward supernatural disturbances." | | 5 | "The implications swirled like smoke before her—Graves might have been a bigger player than they first assumed." | | 6 | "“I’m not sure it changes the case’s direction, if I’m honest. We don’t have anything concrete; it could just as easily be a drug deal gone wrong.”" | | 7 | "Something shifted beneath a tangle of shadows—a figure almost imperceptibly slinking away, a flash of color against the barren landscape." | | 8 | "Fear flickered in her green eyes, and Quinn softened instinctively; she knew the allure of the Market could ensnare anyone desperate enough." | | 9 | "The crime scene, the fallen body, the compass—it all pointed toward something far more treacherous than she had suspected." |
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| 99.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 872 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03669724770642202 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020642201834862386 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 16.78 | | std | 9.58 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 56 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 83.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5194805194805194 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Only someone intricately tied to" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 75.74% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her brown eyes flickered over" | | 1 | "It was Detective Jamie Chen," | | 2 | "she asked, her voice clipped," | | 3 | "He drew an ungloved hand" | | 4 | "She could feel the weight" | | 5 | "She watched him pull out" | | 6 | "It was a small brass" | | 7 | "she breathed, moving closer" | | 8 | "she asked, snapping her gaze" | | 9 | "He grimaced but remained silent." | | 10 | "She detected a nervous edge" | | 11 | "She glanced at the walls," | | 12 | "Her instincts prickled, urgent and" | | 13 | "she commanded, before darting toward" | | 14 | "She closed the distance quickly," | | 15 | "It was a girl, perhaps" | | 16 | "she croaked, a quiver in" | | 17 | "she retorted, a spark of" | | 18 | "She exchanged a quick glance" | | 19 | "he echoed, concern blending with" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 0.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 1 | "The dim light flickered overhead," | | 2 | "The Market was rumored to" | | 3 | "Her brown eyes flickered over" | | 4 | "The victim, a twenty-something they" | | 5 | "Blood pooled beneath him, dark" | | 6 | "a familiar voice called out," | | 7 | "It was Detective Jamie Chen," | | 8 | "The tension between them was" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice clipped," | | 10 | "Chen replied, crouching over the" | | 11 | "He drew an ungloved hand" | | 12 | "She could feel the weight" | | 13 | "Quinn mused, her voice lowering" | | 14 | "Chen shifted, a hint of" | | 15 | "Quinn shook her head." | | 16 | "She watched him pull out" | | 17 | "It was a small brass" | | 18 | "Quinn’s breath caught in her" | | 19 | "she breathed, moving closer" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "To her surprise, Chen distractedly" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim light flickered overhead, struggling to break through the gloom that clung to the cracked walls like a shroud." | | 1 | "She could feel the weight of the past suffocating her resolve, but she pushed it aside, focusing instead on the present horror that surrounded them." | | 2 | "She closed the distance quickly, relying on her training, her body moving with practiced precision through the debris of the derelict space." | | 3 | "Dust motes danced in the narrow beams of light, her gaze locking on the figure that was slowly revealing itself." | | 4 | "The weight of the revelation hung taut in the air, as Quinn stepped back, her mind racing with implications that spiraled outward like the compass’s needle." | | 5 | "She exchanged a quick glance with Chen, who approached, curiosity piqued." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Chen said, voice tentative" | | 1 | "Quinn called out, her voice softer this time" | | 2 | "she retorted, a spark of defiance igniting" | | 3 | "Quinn replied, a fire igniting within her" | | 4 | "she replied, determination hardening her features" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a familiar voice called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "he suggested (suggest)" | | 3 | "Quinn called out (call out)" | | 4 | "Quinn added (add)" | | 5 | "she croaked (croak)" | | 6 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 7 | "the girl stammered (stammer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.471 | |