Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEF0T1Q3SS21H44AT157A

Run Details

Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.001126

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the cramped kitchen of her flat, the scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below mingling with the musty aroma of old books. She stirred a pot of lentil soup, her mind wandering as she watched the steam curl into the air. The flat was a chaotic sanctuary, every surface cluttered with research notes and tomes, remnants of her half-hearted attempts to escape the mundane life she had been thrust into. The sound of a key turning in the lock jolted her from her reverie. She frowned, glancing at the clock on the wall. Eva was supposed to be at work, and she had no plans to entertain anyone today. The door creaked open, and her heart skipped a beat as she turned to face the intruder. Lucien Moreau stood in the doorway, his presence filling the small space with an electric tension. He was impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, the fabric hugging his lean frame perfectly. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—seemed to pierce through the dim light of the flat. The ivory-handled cane he leaned on was a familiar sight, though she knew it concealed a blade sharp enough to cut through the thickest of lies. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret. “Rory,” he replied, his voice smooth and rich, laced with an accent that made her heart race. “I hope I’m not interrupting.” “Interrupting? You just barged in,” she shot back, crossing her arms defensively. The warmth of the soup simmered behind her, but the chill of their past hung heavy in the air. He stepped inside, closing the door with a soft click that echoed in the silence. “I thought you might appreciate a visit from an old friend.” “Old friend?” she echoed, her tone sharp. “Is that what we are now?” Lucien’s lips curled into a half-smile, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I see you haven’t changed much. Still quick to judge.” “And you’re still as insufferable as ever,” she retorted, her heart pounding in her chest. Memories of their last encounter flooded her mind—words exchanged in anger, the hurt that had lingered long after he had walked away. He moved further into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books that seemed to lean in closer, eavesdropping on their conversation. “You’ve made quite the little fortress here,” he remarked, his tone light, but she could sense the underlying tension. “Fortress? More like a prison,” she shot back, her voice rising. “I’m not the one who left, Lucien.” He paused, the smile fading from his lips. “I had my reasons.” “Right. You always have your reasons.” She turned away, stirring the soup with more force than necessary, the wooden spoon clattering against the pot. “What do you want, Lucien? I don’t have time for this.” “Is that really how you feel?” he asked, his voice low, almost vulnerable. “You don’t have time for me?” She met his gaze, the intensity of his eyes making her heart race. “You don’t get to play the victim here. You walked away when things got complicated.” “Complicated?” he echoed, his tone incredulous. “You think I wanted to leave? You think it was easy?” “Then why did you?” she challenged, her voice trembling with a mix of anger and hurt. “You could have fought for us.” “I was fighting for you,” he said, stepping closer, the space between them charged with unspoken words. “I thought I was protecting you.” “Protecting me?” she scoffed, shaking her head. “By abandoning me? By leaving me to pick up the pieces?” Lucien’s expression hardened, the mask of the charming fixer slipping for just a moment. “You don’t understand what I was up against, Rory. You don’t know the dangers I was trying to shield you from.” “Dangers?” she repeated, her voice rising again. “You mean the dangers you brought into my life? The secrets you kept?” He took another step forward, and she could feel the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite her anger. “I didn’t want to drag you into my world. I thought you’d be safer without me.” “Safer?” she laughed bitterly, the sound echoing in the small space. “You think I’m safer alone? You think I wanted to be alone?” The silence that followed was thick, heavy with the weight of their shared history. Aurora’s breath quickened as she searched his face for any sign of the man she once knew, the man who had made her laugh, who had ignited a fire within her that she had thought long extinguished. “Rory,” he said softly, his voice breaking through the tension. “I never stopped caring about you.” “Caring isn’t enough,” she replied, her voice barely above a whisper. “Not when you left me in the dark.” “I know,” he admitted, his gaze unwavering. “And I’m sorry. I should have fought harder. I should have been there.” The sincerity in his voice made her heart ache. She wanted to believe him, to let go of the hurt that had festered between them, but the scars ran deep. “And now? What do you want from me now?” “I want to make things right,” he said, his eyes searching hers. “I want to be in your life again, if you’ll let me.” Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. The idea of letting him back in was terrifying, yet the flicker of hope that ignited within her was undeniable. “You think it’s that easy?” “No,” he replied, shaking his head. “I know it’s not. But I’m willing to try. I’ll do whatever it takes.” She studied him, the man who had once been her confidant, her partner in crime, now standing before her with a vulnerability that was both foreign and familiar. “You don’t know what you’re asking for.” “Maybe not,” he admitted, his voice steady. “But I’m willing to learn. I want to understand what you need.” Aurora felt the walls she had built around her heart begin to crack. “And what if I can’t forgive you?” “Then I’ll spend the rest of my life trying to earn it,” he said, his gaze unwavering. “I’ll prove to you that I’m not the same man who walked away.” The air between them shimmered with possibility, the past and present colliding in a way that made her head spin. She wanted to scream, to push him away, but the truth was, she had missed him. The ache in her chest was a reminder of everything they had shared, the laughter, the late-night conversations, the way he had made her feel alive. “Lucien,” she began, her voice trembling. “I don’t know if I can trust you again.” “Then let me show you,” he said, his voice low and earnest. “Let me prove that I’m worth the risk.” Aurora’s heart raced as she weighed his words, the tension between them palpable. She could feel the heat of his presence, the way it wrapped around her like a warm embrace. The memories of their past flickered in her mind, and for the first time in a long while, she felt a glimmer of hope. “Okay,” she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. “But it won’t be easy.” “I wouldn’t want it any other way,” he replied, a smile breaking through the tension. As they stood there, the distance between them shrinking, Aurora felt the weight of the past begin to lift, replaced by the promise of something new. The journey ahead would be fraught with challenges, but for the first time, she was willing to take that leap of faith.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she shot back, crossing her arms defensively [defensively]"
1"he said softly, his voice breaking through the tension [softly]"
2"she replied, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
3"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper [finally, barely]"
61.3601% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"unwavering"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count3
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"sanctuary"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"shimmered"
5"unwavering"
6"unspoken"
7"magnetic"
8"weight"
9"echoed"
10"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
1"a glimmer of hope"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"prove that I’m"
1"take that leap"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29.93
std16.61
cv0.555
sampleLengths
076
156
281
312
422
531
626
713
822
937
1046
1118
1212
1335
1419
1528
1617
1722
1823
1918
2035
2120
2241
2323
2451
2516
2619
2720
2839
2924
3031
3120
3235
3319
3420
3530
3662
3715
3820
3955
4015
4115
4248
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was slicked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was willing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023333333333333334
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008888888888888889
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.84
std6.77
cv0.49
sampleLengths
028
119
229
314
49
516
617
716
816
923
1026
1112
1217
135
1412
1519
1615
1711
187
196
2012
2110
2215
2322
2427
2519
2611
277
288
294
3024
3111
3213
336
3413
3515
366
3711
3816
396
4017
416
427
4311
4414
4521
467
4713
4825
4916
54.1219% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34408602150537637
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret (breathe, slip like)"
1"he replied, his voice smooth and rich, laced with an accent that made her heart race (reply, lace make)"
2"she shot back, crossing her arms defensively (shoot back, cross)"
3"she retorted, her heart pounding in her chest (retort, pound)"
4"he remarked, his tone light, but she could sense the underlying tension (remark, sense)"
5"she shot back, her voice rising (shoot back, rise)"
6"he said, stepping closer, the space between them charged with unspoken words (say, step charge)"
7"laughed (laugh)"
8"he said softly, his voice breaking through the tension (say softly, break)"
9"he admitted, his gaze unwavering (admit, unwaver)"
10"he said, his eyes searching hers (say, search)"
11"he replied, shaking his head (reply, shake)"
12"he admitted, his voice steady (admit)"
13"he said, his gaze unwavering (say, unwaver)"
14"she began, her voice trembling (begin)"
15"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper (say finally)"
16"he replied, a smile breaking through the tension (reply, break)"
81.3029%