| 59.65% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned away [away]" | | 1 | "she laughed bitterly [bitterly]" | | 2 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.456 | | leniency | 0.912 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |
| 80.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsms | 43 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chaotic" | | 1 | "sanctuary" | | 2 | "skipped a beat" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "race" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "encounter" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "magnetic" | | 18 | "echoing" | | 19 | "weight" | | 20 | "quickened" | | 21 | "whisper" | | 22 | "unwavering" | | 23 | "flicker" | | 24 | "shimmered" | | 25 | "reminder" | | 26 | "raced" | | 27 | "palpable" | | 28 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung heavy in the air" | | 1 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 98.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "d in anger" | | 1 | "the flicker of hope" |
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| 27.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1287 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 893 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | Memories | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "books that seemed to lean in closer, eavesdropping on their conversation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1287 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 29.93 | | std | 16.61 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 62 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 55 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 48 |
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| 93.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was slicked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 81.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—seemed to pierce through the dim light of the flat." | | 1 | "Memories of their last encounter flooded her mind—words exchanged in anger, the hurt that had lingered long after he had walked away." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 900 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.023333333333333334 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008888888888888889 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 13.84 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 54.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.34408602150537637 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She stirred a pot of" | | 1 | "She frowned, glancing at the" | | 2 | "He was impeccably dressed in" | | 3 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 4 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 5 | "he replied, his voice smooth" | | 6 | "she shot back, crossing her" | | 7 | "He stepped inside, closing the" | | 8 | "she echoed, her tone sharp" | | 9 | "she retorted, her heart pounding" | | 10 | "He moved further into the" | | 11 | "he remarked, his tone light," | | 12 | "she shot back, her voice" | | 13 | "He paused, the smile fading" | | 14 | "She turned away, stirring the" | | 15 | "he asked, his voice low," | | 16 | "She met his gaze, the" | | 17 | "he echoed, his tone incredulous" | | 18 | "she challenged, her voice trembling" | | 19 | "he said, stepping closer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.629 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood in the" | | 1 | "She stirred a pot of" | | 2 | "The flat was a chaotic" | | 3 | "The sound of a key" | | 4 | "She frowned, glancing at the" | | 5 | "Eva was supposed to be" | | 6 | "The door creaked open, and" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 8 | "He was impeccably dressed in" | | 9 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 10 | "The ivory-handled cane he leaned" | | 11 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 12 | "he replied, his voice smooth" | | 13 | "she shot back, crossing her" | | 14 | "The warmth of the soup" | | 15 | "He stepped inside, closing the" | | 16 | "she echoed, her tone sharp" | | 17 | "Lucien’s lips curled into a" | | 18 | "she retorted, her heart pounding" | | 19 | "Memories of their last encounter" |
| | ratio | 0.984 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Memories of their last encounter flooded her mind—words exchanged in anger, the hurt that had lingered long after he had walked away." | | 1 | "He moved further into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books that seemed to lean in closer, eavesdropping on their convers…" | | 2 | "He took another step forward, and she could feel the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite her anger." | | 3 | "The idea of letting him back in was terrifying, yet the flicker of hope that ignited within her was undeniable." | | 4 | "She studied him, the man who had once been her confidant, her partner in crime, now standing before her with a vulnerability that was both foreign and familiar." | | 5 | "The air between them shimmered with possibility, the past and present colliding in a way that made her head spin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 19 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret" | | 1 | "she echoed, her tone sharp" | | 2 | "she retorted, her heart pounding in her chest" | | 3 | "she shot back, her voice rising" | | 4 | "he asked, his voice low, almost vulnerable" | | 5 | "he echoed, his tone incredulous" | | 6 | "she challenged, her voice trembling with a mix of anger and hurt" | | 7 | "she repeated, her voice rising again" | | 8 | "she laughed bitterly, the sound echoing in the small space" | | 9 | "he said softly, his voice breaking through the tension" | | 10 | "she replied, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 11 | "he admitted, his gaze unwavering" | | 12 | "he said, his eyes searching hers" | | 13 | "he admitted, his voice steady" | | 14 | "he said, his gaze unwavering" | | 15 | "she began, her voice trembling" | | 16 | "he said, his voice low and earnest" | | 17 | "she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 18 | "he replied, a smile breaking through the tension" |
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| 27.19% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 3 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 4 | "she laughed bitterly (laugh)" | | 5 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "he admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.389 | | effectiveRatio | 0.246 | |