| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 44.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "hesitantly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "dance" | | 10 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 59.64% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "a jolt of unease" | | 3 | "felt a jolt" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 11 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 902 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 827 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Half-Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae | 5 | | Realms | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.593 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like she was holding her breath, w" | | 1 | "richness that seemed to vibrate through every cell in Rory's body" | | 2 | "felt like she was waking from a dream," | | 3 | "as if searching for something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 902 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that Nyx" | | 1 | "knew that she" | | 2 | "knew that she" |
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| 97.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 36.08 | | std | 17.75 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 11 |
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| 84.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "was tinged" | | 1 | "was filled" | | 2 | "being drawn" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "was shifting" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "was haunting" | | 3 | "was waking" | | 4 | "was watching" | | 5 | "was walking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.24% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 832 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "delicate, gemstone-encrusted vine." |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.040865384615384616 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018028846153846152 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 78.80% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 16.4 | | std | 5.69 | | cv | 0.347 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 44.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2727272727272727 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the air around them" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 1 | "She moved with an ethereal" | | 2 | "She had heard stories about" | | 3 | "It felt cool and smooth," | | 4 | "She looked up to see" | | 5 | "she whispered, her eyes darting" | | 6 | "Their voices were low and" | | 7 | "She saw visions of ancient" | | 8 | "She saw the Veil, shimmering" | | 9 | "she said finally, her voice" | | 10 | "She knew that she was" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, her bright blue eyes" | | 1 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 2 | "The Shade's usually impassive expression" | | 3 | "Isolde, the Half-Fae seer, led" | | 4 | "She moved with an ethereal" | | 5 | "The soft rustle of her" | | 6 | "The air was filled with" | | 7 | "Rory felt a sense of" | | 8 | "Nyx whispered, their voice barely" | | 9 | "The vine seemed to respond" | | 10 | "Rory watched, fascinated, as the" | | 11 | "Isolde paused, her gaze flicking" | | 12 | "Rory's eyes met Isolde's, and" | | 13 | "She had heard stories about" | | 14 | "Rory reached out a hand," | | 15 | "It felt cool and smooth," | | 16 | "Isolde warned, her voice low" | | 17 | "Rory's fingers jerked back, as" | | 18 | "She looked up to see" | | 19 | "Rory felt a jolt of" |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming wildflowers, which seemed to be scattered across the clearing with reckless abandon." | | 1 | "Rory felt a sense of enchantment wash over her, as if she had stumbled into a dream world." | | 2 | "Rory watched, fascinated, as the vine wrapped itself around Nyx's wrist, forming a glittering, crystalline cuff." | | 3 | "As they continued deeper into the grove, the trees grew stranger, their trunks thickening and twisting until they seemed to be made of a dark, liquid glass." | | 4 | "Rory felt a jolt of unease, as if the very fabric of reality was shifting and flowing around her." | | 5 | "Rory felt like she was holding her breath, waiting for something to happen, for the world to shudder back into motion." | | 6 | "Rory felt herself swaying, her feet moving in time with the music, as if she was being drawn into some ancient, primal dance." | | 7 | "The trees seemed to be calling to her, their voices weaving a spell of wonder and enchantment." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde warned, her voice low and melodious" | | 1 | "she whispered, her eyes darting toward Isolde" | | 2 | "the Half-Fae seer asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |