| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "trepidation" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "sanctuary" | | 10 | "lilt" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "comforting" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "charged" | | 16 | "wavering" | | 17 | "glint" | | 18 | "tapestry" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "scanning" | | 22 | "dance" | | 23 | "pulsed" | | 24 | "apprehension" | | 25 | "tinged" | | 26 | "unreadable" | | 27 | "racing" | | 28 | "tangible" | | 29 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 9.62% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 9 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "y with warmth" | | 2 | "d with awe" | | 3 | "a spark of determination" | | 4 | "d with warmth" | | 5 | "a thrill of excitement" | | 6 | "felt a thrill" | | 7 | "d with apprehension" | | 8 | "felt a shiver" |
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| 76.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1122 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 946 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Despite | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb the ambient light" | | 1 | "lilt that seemed to harmonize with the rustling leaves" | | 2 | "seemed equally affected their form flickering like a candle in the wind" | | 3 | "It was as if the very trees were watching, their branches swaying in a silent dance" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 84.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.07 | | std | 17.81 | | cv | 0.444 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 56 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was examining" | | 1 | "were watching" |
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| 67.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, she saw herself as she was—a young woman with straight shoulder-length black hair and eyes that held a spark of determination." | | 1 | "The flora was unlike anything Aurora had seen before—flowers that sang when touched, trees that whispered stories of ancient times, and vines that glowed with an inner light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 951 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.015772870662460567 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008412197686645636 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 91.61% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.76 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.379 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 62.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3815789473684211 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 1 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 2 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 3 | "She moved with an ethereal" | | 4 | "she said, her voice a" | | 5 | "It was a comforting presence," | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 7 | "she replied, her voice hushed" | | 8 | "she said, gesturing to the" | | 9 | "she murmured, entranced by the" | | 10 | "they said, their voice a" | | 11 | "They continued their exploration, the" | | 12 | "It was a place of" | | 13 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 14 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 15 | "It was as if the" | | 16 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 17 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 18 | "she asked, her voice tinged" | | 19 | "they replied, their voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.349 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 2 | "The grove was a hidden" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue" | | 6 | "The grove was alive with" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous hues," | | 8 | "The air was thick with" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga, the Seer, glided" | | 10 | "She moved with an ethereal" | | 11 | "she said, her voice a" | | 12 | "Aurora's hand brushed against the" | | 13 | "It was a comforting presence," | | 14 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 15 | "Nyx asked, their voice barely" | | 16 | "Aurora nodded, her fingers tracing" | | 17 | "she replied, her voice hushed" | | 18 | "The path wound through a" | | 19 | "The air was cooler here," |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the beauty, there" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint, otherworldly glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx moved with a fluid grace, their form a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb the ambient light." | | 2 | "It was a comforting presence, a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had entrusted it to her." | | 3 | "She glanced at Nyx, who was examining a cluster of luminescent mushrooms that glowed softly in the shade of a gnarled oak." | | 4 | "The flora was unlike anything Aurora had seen before—flowers that sang when touched, trees that whispered stories of ancient times, and vines that glowed with a…" | | 5 | "It was as if the very trees were watching, their branches swaying in a silent dance." | | 6 | "Aurora recognized it as a rift point, a tear in the Veil that separated Earth from the realms beyond." | | 7 | "She glanced at Nyx, who stood at the edge of the clearing, their form a silhouette against the shimmering light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "Nyx asked, their voice barely more than a breath" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a soft caress" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "they replied, their voice a whisper of memory" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |