| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she replied simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 90.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1026 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1026 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "enigma" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "glistening" | | 12 | "sanctuary" | | 13 | "tapestry" | | 14 | "footfall" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "resolve" | | 19 | "amidst" | | 20 | "apprehension" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "pulse" | | 23 | "echoes" | | 24 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 97.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "n with resolve" |
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| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1019 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 919 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Grove | 8 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 2 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Varga" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.684 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if echoing the rhythm of the place itself" | | 1 | "appeared beneath the stars mirrored on the pool, her lavender eyes holding an ancient wisdom sequestered in youthful features framed by silver hair like spun moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1019 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.37% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 42.46 | | std | 14 | | cv | 0.33 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 34 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx slipped in beside her, their presence a comforting enigma, and the rest followed—each step echoing in the sudden stillness." | | 1 | "Nyx chuckled—a sound that mingled with the rustling leaves." | | 2 | "At its heart, a still pool reflected the twilight sky—a celestial mirror cradled by the earth." | | 3 | "In the water’s reflection, they saw her—Isolde Varga, as if conjured by their collective thought." | | 4 | "Isolde's reflection smiled—a curious expression, knowing and unknowable." | | 5 | "It was a place of contradiction, where subtle danger lay nestled in beauty—like thorns in roses." | | 6 | "Behind them, the standing stones marked escape, but here was the threshold of their odyssey—a place woven with more than just the threads of time's tapestry." | | 7 | "Here lay the heart of their journey—a glade bathed in a different truth, the questions evolving even as they sought to uncover them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 927 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03128371089536138 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010787486515641856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.61% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 16.17 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.372 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6190476190476191 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Silently absorbing the wisdom granted" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the hair on" | | 1 | "Their form was a silhouette" | | 2 | "She nodded, glancing across their" | | 3 | "She knew better than to" | | 4 | "Their words lingered in the" | | 5 | "Its glassy surface was disturbed" | | 6 | "She dipped her hand beneath" | | 7 | "she spoke, her voice a" | | 8 | "she replied simply, holding steady" | | 9 | "It was a place of" | | 10 | "They remained, curled against the" | | 11 | "They had danced at the" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 93.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to most" | | 1 | "The standing stones, ancient oaks" | | 2 | "She felt the hair on" | | 3 | "Their form was a silhouette" | | 4 | "Nyx's voice, that perpetual whisper" | | 5 | "She nodded, glancing across their" | | 6 | "Each of them bore their" | | 7 | "Rory tucked a lock of" | | 8 | "Nyx slipped in beside her," | | 9 | "The moment Rory crossed the" | | 10 | "Here, within the Grove, reality" | | 11 | "Wildflowers lay in eternal bloom," | | 12 | "The air was dense with" | | 13 | "Nyx whispered, the sound weaving" | | 14 | "Rory couldn’t deny the allure," | | 15 | "Isolde Varga's sanctuary held beauty," | | 16 | "She knew better than to" | | 17 | "Trees twisted at unnatural angles," | | 18 | "Rory felt the thrum of" | | 19 | "Rory ventured, her voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.733 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, despite the wonder, each" | | 1 | "Before Rory could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers lay in eternal bloom, each petal vibrant and glistening with dew that shouldn’t exist this late in the day." | | 1 | "Trees twisted at unnatural angles, branches cradling nests of luminous moss that glowed a soft, pulsating green, casting ethereal shadows that danced across the…" | | 2 | "Drawn by something she could not name, Rory knelt beside the water’s edge, the Heartstone pulsing softly with warmth, as if echoing the rhythm of the place itse…" | | 3 | "In the water’s reflection, they saw her—Isolde Varga, as if conjured by their collective thought." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the sound weaving between the rustle of unseen leaves" | | 1 | "she spoke, her voice a melody threaded with prophesy," | | 2 | "Rory replied, her voice carrying certainty woven with resolve" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |