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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPER1Q6AFWJC4A9Z8QHT48
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Model:
GPT-4o, Aug. 6th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
16.6s
Cost:
$0.017393
Provider:
Azure
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The air
shimmered
with a faint,
otherworldly
glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. Her breath caught in her throat, the sight before her both alien and wondrous. Wildflowers of every imaginable hue carpeted the ground, their petals
glistening
with dew that
seemed to
catch the light in a way that defied earthly logic. The grove was alive with a
symphony
of sounds — the gentle rustle of leaves, the distant call of a bird that might never have existed outside this place, and the soft, almost musical hum of the air itself. Rory, as her friends called her, paused to take it all in, her bright blue eyes wide with a mixture of awe and
trepidation
. She felt the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, its faint warmth a comforting presence. The pendant pulsed
gently
, as if in rhythm with the heartbeat of the grove itself. She glanced at her companions, seeking reassurance in their presence. Nyx, the Shade, moved with an
ethereal
grace beside her, their form a silhouette of living shadow that
seemed to
blend seamlessly with the dappled light filtering through the canopy. Their faintly glowing violet eyes
flickered
with a curiosity that mirrored Rory's own. "This place," Nyx whispered, their voice like a breeze through the leaves, "it exists between the beats of time." Rory nodded, feeling the truth of Nyx's words in her bones. Time here was a fluid thing, slipping and sliding in ways that made her head spin if she thought about it too much. She turned her gaze to Isolde Varga, the Seer, who walked ahead of them, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight down her back. Isolde moved with a lightness that left no trace upon the earth, her pale lavender eyes scanning the grove with an expression of serene knowing. "The Grove welcomes us," Isolde said, her voice carrying the
weight
of ages. "But tread
carefully
, for it is a place of both wonder and peril." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine at the Seer's words. She adjusted the strap of the satchel slung over her shoulder, feeling the reassuring
weight
of the Fae-Forged Blade within. The dagger, a gift from Isolde, was cold to the touch even through the fabric, its moonsilver blade a silent promise of protection. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the air grew cooler, the light shifting to a softer, more muted glow. The path beneath their feet was a winding ribbon of moss and earth, leading them through a landscape that
seemed to
shift and change with every step. Trees twisted into fantastical shapes, their branches arching overhead like the vaulted ceiling of a cathedral. The scent of earth and growing things filled the air, rich and intoxicating. Rory's senses were alive, every sound and sight heightened in this place that felt both familiar and
utterly
alien. She reached out to touch the bark of a nearby tree, its surface smooth and warm beneath her fingers, as if the tree itself was a living, breathing entity. She felt a connection, a thread of understanding that tied her to this place in a way she couldn't quite explain. "Do you feel it?" Nyx asked, their voice a soft murmur at her side. "The pulse of the grove, the life that thrums beneath the surface?" Rory nodded, her heart beating in time with the rhythm of the grove. "It's like... like being part of something greater," she said, struggling to find the words. "Like the world is singing, and we're just one note in the melody." Isolde turned to them, a faint smile playing on her lips. "The Fae Grove is a place of magic and mystery," she said, her voice carrying the cadence of a riddle. "It reveals itself to those who seek with open hearts and minds." They continued on, the path leading them to a clearing where the light pooled like liquid gold. In the center stood a stone altar, ancient and weathered, its surface
etched
with runes that glowed faintly in the dim light. Rory felt a pull towards it, an inexplicable urge to reach out and touch the cool stone. As she approached, the Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, its glow intensifying. She hesitated, a
flicker
of unease threading through her. The pendant's reaction was both a warning and an invitation, a reminder of the thin veil that separated this world from others. "Be cautious," Isolde warned, her voice gentle but firm. "The altar holds secrets, and not all are meant to be uncovered." Rory nodded, her fingers brushing the pendant as if seeking gui
dance
. She took a deep breath, centering herself before stepping closer. The runes
seemed to
shift and
dance
beneath her gaze, their meaning just out of reach. She felt a presence, a whisper of something ancient and powerful, watching from the shadows. Nyx moved to her side, their form solidifying as they reached out to touch the altar. "There is knowledge here," they said, their voice a low murmur. "But it is veiled, hidden beneath layers of time and memory." Rory felt a thrill of discovery, tempered by the
weight
of responsibility. She
knew that whatever
secrets the grove held, they were not to be taken
lightly
. She glanced at Isolde, seeking the Seer's wisdom. Isolde met her gaze, her eyes filled with a depth of understanding that transcended words. "The grove offers its gifts to those who seek with pure intent," she said, her voice a gentle
echo
in the stillness. "But remember, every gift comes with a price." Rory nodded, the truth of Isolde's words resonating within her. She stepped back from the altar, the pendant's glow dimming as she retreated. The grove
seemed to
sigh around them, the air shifting as if in approval. They lingered in the clearing, the
weight
of the grove's magic settling around them like a cloak. Rory felt a sense of peace, a connection to the world that was both grounding and uplifting. She
knew that this
place, with its wonders and mysteries, would stay with her long after they left. As they turned to leave, the path winding back through the grove, Rory felt a sense of gratitude for the experience. The Fae Grove had opened its secrets to them, if only for a moment, and she
knew that the
memory of this place would linger in her heart, a reminder of the magic that existed just beyond the veil of the everyday world.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
63.3364%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1091
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"gently"
2
"lightly"
3
"utterly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1091
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"flicker"
count
1
4
word
"shimmered"
count
1
5
word
"glistening"
count
1
6
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
7
word
"trepidation"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
4
9
word
"dance"
count
1
10
word
"echo"
count
1
11
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"symphony"
2
"flickered"
3
"flicker"
4
"shimmered"
5
"glistening"
6
"otherworldly"
7
"trepidation"
8
"weight"
9
"dance"
10
"echo"
11
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
57
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"knew that whatever"
1
"knew that this"
2
"knew that the"
67.1268%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
21
mean
51.95
std
20
cv
0.385
sampleLengths
0
105
1
63
2
62
3
83
4
26
5
55
6
76
7
69
8
26
9
41
10
43
11
56
12
42
13
21
14
52
15
38
16
35
17
45
18
37
19
52
20
64
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
155
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
957
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.018808777429467086
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.009404388714733543
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
17.05
std
6.92
cv
0.406
sampleLengths
0
26
1
14
2
26
3
39
4
24
5
14
6
15
7
10
8
30
9
13
10
19
11
11
12
23
13
24
14
25
15
13
16
13
17
12
18
20
19
23
20
20
21
27
22
16
23
13
24
19
25
29
26
21
27
14
28
12
29
13
30
15
31
13
32
11
33
20
34
12
35
17
36
22
37
17
38
11
39
9
40
22
41
9
42
12
43
11
44
10
45
16
46
15
47
16
48
11
49
11
48.9583%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.3125
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
20
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Nyx whispered, their voice like a breeze through the leaves (whisper, like)"
1
"Isolde said, her voice carrying the weight of ages (say, carry)"
2
"she said, struggling to find the words (say, struggle find)"
3
"she said, her voice carrying the cadence of a riddle (say, carry)"
4
"Isolde warned, her voice gentle but firm (warn)"
5
"she said, her voice a gentle echo in the stillness (say, voice)"
81.1424%