Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPETN04JGD63V35S8JB7X0

Run Details

Duration:
34.5s
Cost:
$0.001281

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of spices wafting through the air as she stirred a pot of simmering curry. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound around her ankles, purring softly, oblivious to the tension that had settled in her chest. She had just finished her shift at the Golden Empress, the rhythmic clatter of takeout containers still echoing in her mind, when a sudden knock shattered the evening's calm. She paused, wooden spoon hovering over the pot, heart racing. The knock came again, more insistent this time. It was late for deliveries, and Eva was out with friends, leaving Rory alone in the flat. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the door, her mind racing through a list of possibilities. Who could it be? With a deep breath, she approached the door, her pulse quickening with each step. She peered through the peephole, and her breath caught in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, his slicked-back platinum hair gleaming under the dim hallway light. The sight of him sent a rush of memories flooding back—his laughter, the way his amber and black eyes sparkled with mischief, the way he had once made her feel alive. But there was also the hurt, the unresolved tension that had lingered between them like a ghost. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the doorknob. What was he doing here? Another knock, this one softer, almost tentative. “Rory?” His voice was smooth, laced with an accent that made her heart flutter against her will. “I know you’re in there.” She opened the door, just a crack, enough to see his face fully. “Lucien,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “May I come in?” He didn’t wait for her to respond, stepping forward as she opened the door wider, his presence filling the small space. The air thickened with unspoken words as she stepped back, allowing him entry. He closed the door behind him, the sound echoing in the silence that followed. Ptolemy, sensing the shift in energy, darted under the couch, leaving them alone in the cramped flat, surrounded by stacks of books and scrolls that seemed to close in around them. “What are you doing here?” Rory asked, crossing her arms defensively. Lucien ran a hand through his hair, his expression unreadable. “I was in the neighborhood,” he said, his voice steady but lacking the usual confidence. “I thought I’d check in.” “Check in?” She scoffed, the bitterness creeping into her tone. “You just show up after months of silence, and you call that checking in?” He sighed, his eyes flickering with something she couldn’t quite place. “I know it’s unexpected. I didn’t plan this. I just… I needed to see you.” “Why now?” The question hung in the air, heavy with the weight of their past. “After everything?” Lucien stepped closer, the space between them charged with tension. “Because I’ve been thinking about you. About us. I didn’t handle things well before, and I’m sorry for that.” Rory’s heart raced, a mix of anger and longing swirling within her. “Sorry doesn’t change what happened, Lucien. You walked away when I needed you the most.” “I know,” he said, his voice low, almost pleading. “I was scared. I didn’t know how to deal with everything that was happening. I thought it was for the best.” “For you, maybe,” she shot back, her voice rising. “You left me to pick up the pieces. I had to figure everything out on my own.” He ran a hand over his face, frustration etched into his features. “I didn’t want to hurt you, Rory. I thought distancing myself would protect you.” “Protect me?” She laughed, a harsh sound that echoed in the small room. “You think leaving me alone was protecting me? You were the only one who understood what I was going through.” Lucien’s gaze softened, and for a moment, the walls between them seemed to crack. “I know I messed up. But I’m here now. Can we at least talk?” Rory hesitated, the anger bubbling beneath the surface battling with the undeniable pull she felt toward him. She wanted to scream, to push him away, but there was a part of her that craved his presence, that missed the way he made her feel—alive, seen, cherished. “Fine,” she said, her voice steadier now. “Talk.” He took a deep breath, his eyes searching hers. “I’ve been working in the supernatural underworld, gathering information, trying to make sense of my own heritage. It’s complicated, and I thought I could handle it alone. But I realized I can’t. Not without you.” Rory’s heart twisted at his words. “You think I want to be part of that world? You think I want to dive back into the chaos?” “I don’t want to drag you into anything,” he said quickly. “But I need you to understand that I’ve changed. I’m not the same man who walked away. I want to be better—for you, for us.” “Us?” The word felt foreign on her tongue, a ghost of what they once had. “You can’t just say that and expect everything to be okay.” “I know it’s not that simple,” he replied, his voice earnest. “But I’m willing to fight for it. For you. I’ve missed you, Rory. More than I can say.” The sincerity in his eyes made her heart ache. She wanted to believe him, to let go of the hurt and the anger, but the scars ran deep. “You hurt me, Lucien. You can’t just erase that.” “I don’t want to erase it,” he said, stepping closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. “I want to acknowledge it. I want to make it right.” Rory’s breath caught in her throat as he reached out, his fingers brushing against her arm, sending a jolt of electricity through her. She could feel the warmth radiating from him, the familiar pull that had always drawn her to him. “What if I can’t forgive you?” she asked, her voice trembling. “Then I’ll spend every day trying to earn it,” he replied, his gaze unwavering. “I’ll show you that I’m worth it.” The intensity of his stare made her heart race, and for a moment, the world outside faded away. She could see the vulnerability in his eyes, the weight of his regrets, and the hope that flickered there. It was intoxicating, and she felt herself leaning closer, drawn in by the gravity of their shared history. But just as she was about to close the distance, the sound of a key turning in the lock jolted her back to reality. The door swung open, and Eva stepped inside, her laughter trailing behind her as she entered the flat. “Rory! You won’t believe the—” She stopped short, her eyes darting between Rory and Lucien, the atmosphere thick with unspoken tension. Rory’s heart sank, the moment shattered. She stepped back, breaking the connection, the warmth of Lucien’s presence suddenly feeling like a distant memory. “Eva,” she said, forcing a smile, her voice strained. “You’re back early.” Eva raised an eyebrow, a knowing smile creeping onto her face. “Looks like I interrupted something. Should I come back later?” “No,” Rory said quickly, her cheeks flushing. “It’s fine. We were just… talking.” Lucien cleared his throat, his expression shifting to one of guarded neutrality. “I should go,” he said, his voice steady but laced with disappointment. “I didn’t mean to intrude.” “Wait,” Rory said, her heart racing as she turned to him. “Can we… can we talk again? Soon?” He hesitated, his eyes searching hers for a moment before he nodded. “I’d like that.” With that, he turned and walked toward the door, leaving Rory standing in the middle of the flat, her heart a tumult of emotions. As the door clicked shut behind him, she felt the weight of everything unsaid hanging in the air, the promise of what could be lingering just out of reach. Eva stepped closer, her expression shifting from playful to concerned. “What was that about?” Rory sighed, running a hand through her hair, the reality of the moment crashing down around her. “Just… old wounds, I guess.” “Looks like there’s still something there,” Eva said, her tone teasing but her eyes serious. “You should talk to him. You deserve to be happy, Rory.” Rory nodded, but the uncertainty gnawed at her. She had spent so long building walls, protecting herself from the pain of the past. Could she really let him back in? As she turned back to the simmering pot, the spices filling the air, she couldn’t shake the feeling that this was only the beginning of a much larger story—one that would force her to confront her past and decide what she truly wanted for her future.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
54.9020% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1"he said, his voice low, almost pleading [almost]"
2"he said quickly [quickly]"
3"Rory said quickly, her cheeks flushing [quickly]"
52.7984% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"really"
5"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"simmering"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"unwavering"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"simmering"
1"flickered"
2"gleaming"
3"unwavering"
4"unspoken"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
8"echoing"
9"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"call that checking"
1"understand that I’ve"
95.4825% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.13
std15.56
cv0.484
sampleLengths
075
159
281
330
429
522
625
758
811
930
1024
1126
1217
1329
1427
1530
1626
1726
1833
1928
2046
218
2244
2326
2436
2526
2629
2737
2827
2952
3021
3155
3242
3321
3435
3521
3613
3729
3818
3915
4053
4114
4222
4326
4430
4546
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs199
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03336510962821735
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010486177311725452
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.08
std7.62
cv0.541
sampleLengths
026
120
229
310
48
517
620
74
814
912
1024
1131
1217
138
145
157
1617
175
1813
199
2025
2113
2214
2331
2411
2510
2615
275
2810
2914
3011
3115
3215
332
3410
3519
3612
3715
389
3921
409
4117
4212
4314
4413
4520
4614
4714
4817
4929
49.8413% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners35
13.2353% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice steady but lacking the usual confidence (say, lack)"
1"he said, his voice low, almost pleading (say, plead)"
2"she shot back, her voice rising (shoot back, rise)"
3"laughed (laugh)"
4"he said quickly (say quickly)"
5"he said, stepping closer, his voice dropping to a whisper (say, step drop)"
6"he replied, his gaze unwavering (reply, unwaver)"
7"she said, forcing a smile, her voice strained (say, force strain)"
8"Rory said quickly, her cheeks flushing (say quickly, flush)"
9"he said, his voice steady but laced with disappointment (say, lace)"
10"Rory said, her heart racing as she turned to him (say, race turn)"
80.3682%