| 48.48% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 32 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she offered more [more]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "he asked softly [softly]" | | 3 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 4 | "he said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 66 | | tagDensity | 0.485 | | leniency | 0.97 | | rawRatio | 0.156 | | effectiveRatio | 0.152 | |
| 67.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "comfortable" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "unwavering" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "tinged" | | 17 | "sense of" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but smile" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" | | 2 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "e with surprise" | | 1 | "d with disbelief" |
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| 86.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1079 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 29 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 842 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 6 | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | France | 1 | | Lucien | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.966 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "exhale that seemed to carry the weight of unspoken regrets" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.927 | | wordCount | 1079 | | matches | | 0 | "not Cardiff, but it's home" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 18.29 | | std | 12.9 | | cv | 0.706 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned casually against the doorframe, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — studying her with a mixture of amusement and something else she couldn't quite place." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 843 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03440094899169632 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01542111506524318 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 9.81 | | std | 5.86 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 68.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.42727272727272725 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't expected to see" | | 1 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 2 | "She swallowed, her heart doing" | | 3 | "she replied, trying to keep" | | 4 | "He straightened, the ivory-handled cane" | | 5 | "she admitted, glancing around at" | | 6 | "She couldn't help but smile," | | 7 | "He nodded, his expression softening." | | 8 | "she replied, a touch too" | | 9 | "she said, nodding" | | 10 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 11 | "she said, a little defensively" | | 12 | "she admitted, her voice softening" | | 13 | "he echoed, his tone thoughtful" | | 14 | "she offered, more to fill" | | 15 | "She turned, finding him closer" | | 16 | "he asked, his voice low" | | 17 | "She hesitated, the truth hovering" | | 18 | "she said finally" | | 19 | "she admitted, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.653 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva's flat" | | 1 | "She hadn't expected to see" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau leaned casually against" | | 3 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 4 | "She swallowed, her heart doing" | | 5 | "she replied, trying to keep" | | 6 | "He straightened, the ivory-handled cane" | | 7 | "Aurora stepped inside, closing the" | | 8 | "The familiar scent of spices" | | 9 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was" | | 10 | "she admitted, glancing around at" | | 11 | "Lucien chuckled, a low, rich" | | 12 | "She couldn't help but smile," | | 13 | "He nodded, his expression softening." | | 14 | "Aurora shifted her weight, tucking" | | 15 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 16 | "Lucien asked, his gaze lingering" | | 17 | "she replied, a touch too" | | 18 | "she said, nodding" | | 19 | "He tilted his head, studying" |
| | ratio | 0.96 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light, a reminder of a childhood accident and, perhaps, of the scars that couldn't be seen." | | 1 | "As the water boiled, she felt his presence behind her, a warmth that was both reassuring and unsettling." | | 2 | "She turned, finding him closer than she'd expected, his gaze unwavering." | | 3 | "The tension that had lingered between them began to ease, replaced by a sense of familiarity that was both comforting and bittersweet." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 32 | | uselessAdditionCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, trying to keep her voice steady" | | 1 | "Lucien asked, his gaze lingering on her face" | | 2 | "she replied, a touch too quickly" | | 3 | "she admitted, her voice softening" | | 4 | "he echoed, his tone thoughtful" | | 5 | "he asked, his voice low" | | 6 | "she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 7 | "she interrupted, her tone firm" | | 8 | "he said, his voice a little rougher than before" | | 9 | "she asked, a hint of skepticism in her voice" | | 10 | "he insisted, his gaze steady" | | 11 | "she said, her voice tentative" | | 12 | "he said, his voice steady" | | 13 | "she admitted, the confession slipping out before she could stop it" | | 14 | "she agreed, a tentative smile breaking through" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 29 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "she interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 5 | "he insisted (insist)" | | 6 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 7 | "he suggested (suggest)" | | 8 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 66 | | tagDensity | 0.439 | | leniency | 0.879 | | rawRatio | 0.31 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |