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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEVJJZSZF5S8X3TMM2Y95
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Model:
GPT-4o, Aug. 6th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.017225
Provider:
Azure
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Rain lashed against the city like a thousand tiny daggers, each drop a reminder of the chill that seeped through Detective Harlow Quinn's coat. Her breath came in sharp bursts, visible in the cold night air as she sprinted down the slick pavement. The suspect—a shadowy figure in a dark hoodie—was just ahead, darting through the maze of alleyways that twisted through Soho like veins. Quinn's
heart pounded in her chest
, a relentless drumbeat that matched the rhythm of her footfalls. Her eyes, sharp and unyielding, locked onto the figure as it slipped around a corner. She pushed herself harder, her military precision driving her forward despite the fatigue that clawed at her muscles. The streets were nearly deserted, the usual bustle of the city muted by the downpour. Neon lights from the bars and clubs bled into the puddles, creating a
kaleidoscope
of colors that danced across the wet asphalt. The Raven's Nest
loomed
ahead, its distinctive green neon sign casting an eerie glow over the entrance. Quinn barely spared it a glance as she raced past, her focus entirely on the chase. The suspect was fast, but Quinn was relentless. She had been on their trail for weeks, piecing together fragments of evidence that pointed to something far more
sinister
than petty crime. Her instincts, honed over eighteen years of service,
screamed that this
was connected
to the case that had haunted her since the loss of her partner, DS Morris. The supernatural whispers that had surrounded his death were never far from her mind. The suspect veered
suddenly
, disappearing into a narrow alley that led to an old, abandoned Tube station. Quinn hesitated for a fraction of a second, her mind racing. The Veil Market. She had heard rumors of the underground market that moved with the full moon, a place where the supernatural and the illicit mingled freely. It was dangerous territory, even for someone like her. But she couldn't let the suspect slip away. Not now. Not when she was so close. Quinn plunged into the alley, her boots splashing through the shallow streams of rainwater that flowed toward the station. The entrance
was hidden
behind a rusted gate, barely visible in the dim light. She pushed it open, the metal groaning in protest, and descended the stairs two at a time. The air grew colder as she descended, the sounds of the city fading into a distant hum. The station was a relic of another era, its tiled walls cracked and stained with age. Quinn's
footsteps
echoed
in the cavernous space, the only sound in the
oppressive
silence. Ahead, the suspect paused at a heavy wooden door, glancing back over their shoulder. Quinn caught a glimpse of their face—a flash of pale skin, eyes wide with fear or determination. They fumbled with something in their pocket, and a moment later, the door swung open. Quinn reached the door just as it
began to
close, her hand shooting out to catch it. She slipped inside, her senses on high alert. The Veil Market lay before her, a labyrinth of stalls and shadowy figures that stretched into the darkness. The market was a world unto itself, a place where the ordinary rules of society held no sway. Enchanted goods and alchemical substances lined the stalls, their sellers eyeing her with a mix of curiosity and suspicion.
The air was thick with
the scent of incense and something else—something metallic and sharp that set her nerves on edge. Quinn scanned the crowd, searching for the suspect. They were nowhere to be seen, lost among the throng of people that moved like a living tide. She cursed under her breath, frustration gnawing at her. She couldn't afford to lose them now. A hand touched her arm, and she spun around, her instincts ready for a fight. But it was only Tomás Herrera, his warm brown eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and concern. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice low and steady. "What are you doing here?" "Chasing a lead," she replied, her gaze flicking back to the crowd. "Have you seen anyone come through here in a hurry? Dark hoodie, about my height?" Tomás shook his head, his expression thoughtful. "No, but I can help you look. This place can be... overwhelming if you don't know your way around." Quinn hesitated. She knew Tomás from her investigations into the clique, his name cropping up more than once in connection with their activities. But he had always been more of a healer than a criminal, his past as a paramedic evident in the way he carried himself. "Alright," she said finally. "But we need to move fast." Together, they wove through the market, Tomás leading the way with the ease of someone who had spent years
navigating
its hidden paths. Quinn kept her eyes peeled, her senses attuned to any sign of the suspect. The market was a
cacophony
of sights and sounds, each stall offering something more bizarre than the last. A vendor hawked vials of shimmering liquid that promised eternal youth, while another displayed a collection of bones that
seemed to
hum with an unnatural energy. Quinn forced herself to ignore the distractions, her focus
unwavering
. They reached the far end of the market, where a narrow passage led deeper into the underground. Tomás paused, his gaze searching hers. "Are you sure about this?" he asked, his voice barely audible over the din. "The deeper you go, the more dangerous it gets." Quinn nodded, her jaw set with determination. "I have to see this through. I can't let them get away." Tomás nodded, his expression resigned. "Then let's go." They plunged into the passage, the walls closing in around them. The air was colder here, the darkness more
oppressive
. Quinn's heart raced, but she pushed the fear aside, focusing on the task at hand. The passage twisted and turned, leading them deeper into the bowels of the city.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she replied, her gaze flicking back to the crowd [back]"
1
"she said finally [finally]"
89.9800%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
998
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
998
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"cacophony"
count
1
1
word
"oppressive"
count
2
2
word
"sinister"
count
1
3
word
"loomed"
count
1
4
word
"unwavering"
count
1
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"echoed"
count
1
7
word
"navigating"
count
1
8
word
"kaleidoscope"
count
1
highlights
0
"cacophony"
1
"oppressive"
2
"sinister"
3
"loomed"
4
"unwavering"
5
"footsteps"
6
"echoed"
7
"navigating"
8
"kaleidoscope"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
64
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
64
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"screamed that this"
98.2013%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
26
mean
38.23
std
18.87
cv
0.494
sampleLengths
0
65
1
49
2
70
3
73
4
64
5
16
6
50
7
47
8
46
9
43
10
58
11
42
12
34
13
14
14
27
15
26
16
47
17
10
18
37
19
54
20
23
21
23
22
19
23
8
24
35
25
14
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"was connected"
1
"was hidden"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
133
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
918
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.029411764705882353
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.010893246187363835
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
71
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
71
mean
14
std
6.23
cv
0.445
sampleLengths
0
24
1
19
2
22
3
16
4
15
5
18
6
15
7
22
8
17
9
16
10
8
11
23
12
28
13
14
14
17
15
11
16
3
17
24
18
9
19
8
20
2
21
6
22
19
23
14
24
17
25
17
26
16
27
14
28
14
29
17
30
15
31
17
32
8
33
18
34
18
35
19
36
21
37
8
38
18
39
9
40
7
41
15
42
19
43
9
44
5
45
12
46
15
47
7
48
19
49
2
49.2958%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.3380281690140845
totalSentences
71
uniqueOpeners
24
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she replied, her gaze flicking back to the crowd (reply, flick)"
1
"she said finally (say finally)"
79.6555%