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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEVKWAQPNP6C4R8YRE51R
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Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.000384
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The deadbolts clicked into place, one after the other, each a small, decisive punctuation mark in the
symphony
of Rory's evening routine. She turned, her bright blue eyes reflecting the warm glow of the single bulb in the narrow hallway. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, twitched his tail, his green eyes watching her with lazy curiosity. The knock at the door
was unexpected
, a sharp rap that
echoed
through the cramped flat like a gunshot. Rory's heart leapt, her hand instinctively going to the small of her back where she kept a small knife tucked into her waistband. She
wasn't expecting
anyone, least of all the person standing on the other side of the door. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, his slicked-back platinum hair
glinting
under the harsh fluorescent light of the hallway. He
was dressed
in his usual impeccable tailored charcoal suit, the ivory handle of his cane peeking out from under his fingers. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers with a cool, assessing gaze. "Lucien," Rory said, her voice steady despite the sudden pounding of her heart. She leaned against the doorjamb, mirroring his casual pose. "What a surprise." "Impromptu visits are something of a specialty of mine," he replied, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. His accent, a soft French lilt, was as familiar to her as her own voice. "May I come in?" Rory hesitated for a moment, then stepped aside, allowing him to enter. The flat was a mess, as always - books and scrolls littered e
very
surface, research notes
were strewn
across the small kitchen table. Ptolemy wound his way around Lucien's legs, his purrs filling the sudden silence. Lucien looked around, his gaze taking in the chaos with an almost clinical detachment. "You've not changed much," he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome. "Some things are worth holding onto," Rory replied, her voice
barely above a whisper
. She cleared her throat, pushing away the sudden surge of memories that threatened to overwhelm her. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned to face her, his expression serious. "I have a proposition for you, Rory. A job, if you will." Rory raised an eyebrow. "A job? Since when do you need my help?" Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair. "This is... different. It's not something I can handle on my own. I need someone with your unique skills and knowledge." Rory crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. "And what makes you think I'd want to work with you again?" Lucien's gaze met hers, steady and unyielding. "Because we make a good team, Rory. Because you owe me." Rory flinched at the words, her arms dropping to her sides. She turned away, walking over to the small window that looked out onto the bustling street below. "I owe you nothing, Lucien," she said, her voice barely audible over the hum of traffic. Lucien followed her, his cane tapping a steady rhythm on the worn wooden floor. "You left me, Rory. Without a word, without an explanation. You disappeared, and I was left to clean up the mess." Rory's hands
clenched into fists
, her nails digging into her palms. "I had my reasons," she said, her voice tight. "Did you?" Lucien's voice was soft, dangerous. "Or did you run, Rory? Did you run because things were getting too complicated, too difficult?" Rory whirled around, her eyes flashing. "You have no idea what I was going through, Lucien. You have no idea what it was like for me, being with you, being a part of your world." Lucien's expression softened, a hint of regret in his eyes. "I know it was hard, Rory. I know it was dangerous. But we were in it together. We were a team." Rory shook her head, her hair falling in loose waves around her shoulders. "I couldn't do it, Lucien. I couldn't live like that, always looking over my shoulder, always waiting for the next threat." Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek. Rory stiffened, her breath catching in her throat. "And now?" he asked, his voice
barely above a whisper
. "Are you still running, Rory? Or are you ready to face the past?" Rory closed her eyes, leaning into his touch for a moment before stepping away. "I can't, Lucien," she said, her voice barely audible. "I can't go back to that life." Lucien's hand dropped to his side, his expression hardening. "Very well," he said, his voice cold. "I understand. I won't bother you again." Rory watched as he turned and walked away, his cane tapping a steady rhythm on the floor. She wanted to call out to him, to stop him, but the words refused to come. She stood there, frozen, until the sound of the front door closing
echoed
through the flat like a gunshot.
The silence was deafening
,
the weight of unsaid words
pressing down on her like a physical force. She walked over to the window, looking out at the cityscape below. The lights of London twinkled like stars, a constant reminder of the life she had chosen, the life she had left behind. She turned away from the window, her gaze falling on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A memento from a childhood accident, a reminder of a time when life was simple, when the worst of her worries was a scraped knee or a lost toy. Her hand went to the scar, her fingers tracing the smooth, raised skin. She thought of Lucien, of the life they had shared, of the love that had grown between them like a wild, untamed thing. She thought of the danger, of the fear, of the constant struggle to keep one step ahead of the darkness that threatened to consume them. She thought of the way Lucien had looked at her, his heterochromatic eyes filled with a mix of regret and longing. She thought of the way his fingers had brushed against her cheek, the gentle touch sending a shiver down her spine. She thought of the job he had offered her, of the chance to step back into that world, to face the demons that still haunted her dreams. She thought of the way she had felt when she was with him, strong and capable and alive. She thought of the past, of the hurt and the pain and the things left unsaid. She thought of the future, of the uncertainty and the danger and the chance to make things right. And she made her decision. She walked over to the door, her heart pounding in her chest. She opened it, stepping out into the hallway. She could see Lucien, his tall, lean figure silhouetted against the harsh fluorescent light. He
was walking
away, his cane tapping a steady rhythm on the floor. "Lucien," she called out, her voice
echoing
through the empty hallway. He stopped, turning to face her, his expression
unreadable
. "I'll do it," she said, her voice steady. "I'll take the job." Lucien's expression didn't change, but she could see the relief in his eyes. "I'm glad, Rory," he said, his voice soft. "I'm glad you're coming back." Rory nodded, her heart swelling with a mix of fear and excitement and something else, something she couldn't quite put her finger on. "I'll be there," she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "Tomorrow." Lucien nodded, turning and walking away, his cane tapping a steady rhythm on the floor. Rory watched him go, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned and walked back into the flat, closing the door behind her. She leaned against the door, her eyes closed, her heart racing. She thought of the past, of the hurt and the pain and the things left unsaid. She thought of the future, of the uncertainty and the danger and the chance to make things right. And she knew, with a certainty that filled her with both fear and excitement, that she
was doing
the right thing. She
was stepping
back into the world she had left behind, back into the life she had once shared with Lucien. She
was facing
the past, facing the demons that still haunted her dreams. And she was ready.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
30.7692%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"Rory replied, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1
"she said, her voice barely audible over the hum of traffic [barely]"
2
"she said, her voice barely audible [barely]"
3
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
71.0564%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1382
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
3
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
49.3488%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1382
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"symphony"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
4
word
"echoed"
count
2
5
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"symphony"
1
"glinting"
2
"unreadable"
3
"weight"
4
"echoed"
5
"echoing"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
1
label
"silence was deafening"
count
1
2
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenched into fists"
1
"The silence was deafening"
2
"the weight of unsaid words"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
100
matches
(empty)
70.9542%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
35.41
std
14.11
cv
0.398
sampleLengths
0
55
1
59
2
55
3
25
4
40
5
48
6
30
7
36
8
20
9
13
10
29
11
19
12
18
13
44
14
35
15
20
16
23
17
35
18
31
19
34
20
40
21
30
22
23
23
52
24
51
25
47
26
61
27
42
28
45
29
34
30
5
31
47
32
32
33
26
34
35
35
38
36
45
37
55
38
4
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"was unexpected"
1
"was dressed"
2
"were strewn"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
6
totalVerbs
186
matches
0
"wasn't expecting"
1
"was deafening"
2
"was walking"
3
"was doing"
4
"was stepping"
5
"was facing"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1111
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.025202520252025202
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0054005400540054005
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
100
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
100
mean
13.81
std
6.09
cv
0.441
sampleLengths
0
22
1
18
2
15
3
19
4
23
5
17
6
19
7
22
8
14
9
13
10
9
11
3
12
21
13
15
14
4
15
12
16
23
17
13
18
14
19
16
20
14
21
16
22
6
23
8
24
12
25
4
26
9
27
8
28
21
29
7
30
12
31
7
32
11
33
11
34
17
35
16
36
14
37
21
38
11
39
9
40
7
41
16
42
6
43
29
44
10
45
21
46
13
47
21
48
9
49
8
32.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
18
diversityRatio
0.23
totalSentences
100
uniqueOpeners
23
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome (comment, run)"
1
"she called out, her voice echoing through the empty hallway (call out, echo)"
81.2625%