Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEYNFY0GTGC4VYDKP5E1C

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46.0s
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$0.016885
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OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The weathered wood of the door to Eva's flat groaned in protest as it swung open, revealing Rory standing in the threshold. Her bright blue eyes, sharp with the clarity of the ocean's surface, collided with an unexpected pair—heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black. Lucien Moreau, the half-demon she hadn’t seen since the early summer, lounged languidly against the doorframe, his tailored charcoal suit crisp against the casual disarray beyond. "Rory," he drawled, as if tasting her name for the first time in years. Plumes of jet black and molten gold swirled in his eyes, studying her with the calculating interest of a chess player at the start of a match. "Lucien," Rory replied, and from the simple retort slipped a melody of restrained ire and unresolved tension. His presence here, in Eva's flat of all places, lit the discomforting charge of an old fault line, their shared past humming beneath papered-over cracks in her heart. Before she could orchestrate a strategic retreat, Ptolemy the tabby cat chose that moment to clamber onto her shoulders with the fluid grace only a cat could muster. His dusty fur pricked at her neck, a grounding element amidst the swirling currents of emotion. "Who let you into Eva's flat? She didn’t mention you were crashing here," she said, trying to inject a note of mundane irritation into her voice even as heat flushed her cheeks. Lucien shifted, the smooth handle of his ivory cane pivoting lazily in his grip. "An opportunity presented itself," he responded cryptically, amber eye catching the sparse lights of the flat behind him. The room was tinged with the rich aroma of spices and old paper, a scent synonymous with the womb of relentless research that Eva called home. Rory followed him inside—a compulsion, a necessity, a reckless dive into deep waters. Behind the clutter of bound leather and faded parchment, the sounds of the street below barely infiltrated. "What do you want, Luc?" she asked, harsher than she intended, each word pried from the smooth surface of her facade. His gaze settled over her like a caress, his lips curling into a smile that held the promise of secrets. "Maybe I’m just here to see if you need any help finding that elusive thing that always seems to escape you." She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound. "You think you know what I need?" she retorted, irritably curious in spite of herself. "I know more than you think," he replied, voice dipped in that ever-present lilt of mystery that both fascinated and infuriated her. "And I'm here to help—whether you'll admit you need it or not." Ptolemy chose that moment to hop down, weaving around Rory's ankles before skittering off into the maze of books and ennui. The cat, at least, remained blissfully unconcerned with the fraught prelude to an argument now simmering beneath cordial debate. "What could you possibly offer that would help?" she asked, crossing her arms over her chest—a small fortification against the dark humor of his reply. Lucien paced towards the window, gazing out at the expanse of Brick Lane below, the street vibrant with the colorful tapestry of a waking city. "We both know that you're chasing shadows that evade you at every turn," he said, his voice almost swallowed by the street noise leaking through the glass. "Throwing accusations now? Seems below your usual style." Rory leaned against the nearest wall, the cool plaster a welcome contrast against her skin. He turned to face her, his eyes unsettlingly earnest. "Rory, there are doors you can't open alone. I know because I've seen them, and I know you—enough to know you'd never ask for the keys." She hesitated, the cadence of his words pulling at the tender spots she usually kept hidden beneath layers of determined self-sufficiency. "And you're offering me these keys out of the goodness of your heart?" she challenged, a quiet war playing out within her. Lucien chuckled—a soft, intimate sound that unfurled between them, binding them in familiarity once again. "Let's call it a shared interest," he conceded, a wry tilt to his mouth. "And perhaps a chance to make amends for past... entanglements." His eyes held hers, resurrecting memories of long nights spent unraveling secrets woven in darkness, of words exchanged under the shroud of shared spaces and hushed confidences. How had it become so tangled, their connection—a gossamer thread knotted by circumstances and fractured decisions? "It's dangerous," Rory said finally, a confession and a warning all wrapped in one. "You don't know what Eva has gotten herself into." Lucien approached her, his steps deliberate but vulpine in their stealth. "I've danced on the edges of peril before," he returned, his voice imbued with a severity that made her breath catch. Before she could forge a retort, he reached out, brushing a tentative finger along the line of that small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. An unspoken understanding passed between them, deeper than any spoken vow. It was a reminder—of vulnerability, of trust once given and stained but never fully withdrawn. "How do you imagine this ends, Lucien?" Rory's voice was soft now, nearly drowning under the tedium of what lay unsaid and waiting. "With you finding what you seek," he whispered, and in his words, simmered a promise, ephemeral and as ancient as they were enduring. "And maybe," he added, a grin playing where sincerity had just lain, "a tale to tell when the world is less dark." Rory tilted her head, a wry smile surfacing. "I thought you preferred tales for strangers rather than friends." "Perhaps I'm learning what happens when you swap secrets for silences," he mused, stepping back, offering her both space and allegiance. Ptolemy appeared again, skirting their feet with feline indifference to their tangled histories. Rory sighed, an acquiescent note held in its breathy closure. What choice, really, was there if the alternative was shadow chasing alone? “Fine, but remember, it’s strictly business. I’m not here to relive old stories or open old wounds," she asserted, though a slight tremor belied her firmly held conviction. Lucien regarded her with a gentleness unusual for a half-demon, his eyes unreadable save for the dance of colors caught in an eternal swirl. "Old stories never die, Rory. They merely wait for their next telling." For a moment, they stood together, two silhouettes framed against the teeming London night. A shared smile flickered to life, a fledgling flame amidst lurking shadows. In it lingered hope, or perhaps it was simple resignation to a need greater than sense or sanity. They turned back toward the heart of the flat, side by side, voyages unexpectedly aligned despite the uncharted seas ahead. And as they walked, the vast expanse of their shared history hung between them, a tapestry embellished by past missteps, buoyed and woven anew by the promise of seconds and redemptive whispers carried by the wind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he responded cryptically [cryptically]"
1"Rory said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.692
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
87.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"languidly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"languidly"
1"lazily"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"calculating"
count1
1
word"restrained"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"amidst"
count2
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"facade"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"simmering"
count1
8
word"tapestry"
count2
9
word"determined"
count1
10
word"unraveling"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"peril"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"ephemeral"
count1
16
word"firmly"
count1
17
word"unreadable"
count1
18
word"dance"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"calculating"
1"restrained"
2"tension"
3"amidst"
4"tinged"
5"facade"
6"lilt"
7"simmering"
8"tapestry"
9"determined"
10"unraveling"
11"fractured"
12"peril"
13"unspoken"
14"reminder"
15"ephemeral"
16"firmly"
17"unreadable"
18"dance"
19"flickered"
20"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount900
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Rory9
Moreau1
Plumes1
Ptolemy3
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if tasting her name for the first time in years"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1148
matches(empty)
57.38% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
52.62% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.03
std12.37
cv0.334
sampleLengths
070
141
245
344
432
558
630
721
841
920
1034
1140
1225
1352
1423
1535
1643
1739
1843
1923
2032
2151
2223
2345
2418
2521
2635
2728
2836
2944
3056
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences61
ratio0.115
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes, sharp with the clarity of the ocean's surface, collided with an unexpected pair—heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black."
1"Rory followed him inside—a compulsion, a necessity, a reckless dive into deep waters."
2"She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound."
3"\"What could you possibly offer that would help?\" she asked, crossing her arms over her chest—a small fortification against the dark humor of his reply."
4"Lucien chuckled—a soft, intimate sound that unfurled between them, binding them in familiarity once again."
5"How had it become so tangled, their connection—a gossamer thread knotted by circumstances and fractured decisions?"
6"It was a reminder—of vulnerability, of trust once given and stained but never fully withdrawn."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount913
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03614457831325301
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.018619934282584884
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
80.01% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean18.82
std6.59
cv0.35
sampleLengths
022
122
226
314
427
517
628
728
816
932
1014
1118
1226
1313
1417
1521
1620
1721
185
1915
2022
2112
2221
2319
2425
2525
2627
2723
289
2926
3021
3122
3215
3314
3410
3527
3616
3714
389
3911
4021
4125
4211
4315
4423
4523
4622
478
4810
4921
84.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5081967213114754
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes, sharp"
1"he drawled, as if tasting"
2"His presence here, in Eva's"
3"His dusty fur pricked at"
4"she said, trying to inject"
5"he responded cryptically, amber eye"
6"she asked, harsher than she"
7"His gaze settled over her"
8"She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound."
9"she retorted, irritably curious in"
10"he replied, voice dipped in"
11"she asked, crossing her arms"
12"he said, his voice almost"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"She hesitated, the cadence of"
15"she challenged, a quiet war"
16"he conceded, a wry tilt"
17"His eyes held hers, resurrecting"
18"he returned, his voice imbued"
19"It was a reminder—of vulnerability,"
ratio0.463
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The weathered wood of the"
1"Her bright blue eyes, sharp"
2"Lucien Moreau, the half-demon she"
3"he drawled, as if tasting"
4"Plumes of jet black and"
5"Rory replied, and from the"
6"His presence here, in Eva's"
7"His dusty fur pricked at"
8"she said, trying to inject"
9"Lucien shifted, the smooth handle"
10"he responded cryptically, amber eye"
11"The room was tinged with"
12"Rory followed him inside—a compulsion,"
13"she asked, harsher than she"
14"His gaze settled over her"
15"She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound."
16"she retorted, irritably curious in"
17"he replied, voice dipped in"
18"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
19"The cat, at least, remained"
ratio0.852
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Before she could orchestrate a"
1"Before she could forge a"
ratio0.037
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His gaze settled over her like a caress, his lips curling into a smile that held the promise of secrets."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he drawled, as if tasting her name for the first time in years"
1"she challenged, a quiet war playing out within her"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he drawled (drawl)"
1"he responded cryptically (respond)"
2"she retorted (retort)"
3"she challenged (challenge)"
4"he conceded (concede)"
5"he whispered (whisper)"
6"he added (add)"
7"she asserted (assert)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0.533
effectiveRatio0.533
76.0777%