| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he responded cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "Rory said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.692 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 87.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "languidly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "calculating" | | 1 | "restrained" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "amidst" | | 4 | "tinged" | | 5 | "facade" | | 6 | "lilt" | | 7 | "simmering" | | 8 | "tapestry" | | 9 | "determined" | | 10 | "unraveling" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "peril" | | 13 | "unspoken" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "ephemeral" | | 16 | "firmly" | | 17 | "unreadable" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "flickered" | | 20 | "aligned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1148 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 900 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 9 | | Moreau | 1 | | Plumes | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 6 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if tasting her name for the first time in years" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.38% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "chose that moment" | | 1 | "chose that moment" |
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| 52.62% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 37.03 | | std | 12.37 | | cv | 0.334 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 56 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp with the clarity of the ocean's surface, collided with an unexpected pair—heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black." | | 1 | "Rory followed him inside—a compulsion, a necessity, a reckless dive into deep waters." | | 2 | "She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound." | | 3 | "\"What could you possibly offer that would help?\" she asked, crossing her arms over her chest—a small fortification against the dark humor of his reply." | | 4 | "Lucien chuckled—a soft, intimate sound that unfurled between them, binding them in familiarity once again." | | 5 | "How had it become so tangled, their connection—a gossamer thread knotted by circumstances and fractured decisions?" | | 6 | "It was a reminder—of vulnerability, of trust once given and stained but never fully withdrawn." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 913 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03614457831325301 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018619934282584884 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.01% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 18.82 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.35 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 84.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5081967213114754 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp" | | 1 | "he drawled, as if tasting" | | 2 | "His presence here, in Eva's" | | 3 | "His dusty fur pricked at" | | 4 | "she said, trying to inject" | | 5 | "he responded cryptically, amber eye" | | 6 | "she asked, harsher than she" | | 7 | "His gaze settled over her" | | 8 | "She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound." | | 9 | "she retorted, irritably curious in" | | 10 | "he replied, voice dipped in" | | 11 | "she asked, crossing her arms" | | 12 | "he said, his voice almost" | | 13 | "He turned to face her," | | 14 | "She hesitated, the cadence of" | | 15 | "she challenged, a quiet war" | | 16 | "he conceded, a wry tilt" | | 17 | "His eyes held hers, resurrecting" | | 18 | "he returned, his voice imbued" | | 19 | "It was a reminder—of vulnerability," |
| | ratio | 0.463 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The weathered wood of the" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau, the half-demon she" | | 3 | "he drawled, as if tasting" | | 4 | "Plumes of jet black and" | | 5 | "Rory replied, and from the" | | 6 | "His presence here, in Eva's" | | 7 | "His dusty fur pricked at" | | 8 | "she said, trying to inject" | | 9 | "Lucien shifted, the smooth handle" | | 10 | "he responded cryptically, amber eye" | | 11 | "The room was tinged with" | | 12 | "Rory followed him inside—a compulsion," | | 13 | "she asked, harsher than she" | | 14 | "His gaze settled over her" | | 15 | "She laughed—a breathy, incredulous sound." | | 16 | "she retorted, irritably curious in" | | 17 | "he replied, voice dipped in" | | 18 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to" | | 19 | "The cat, at least, remained" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could orchestrate a" | | 1 | "Before she could forge a" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His gaze settled over her like a caress, his lips curling into a smile that held the promise of secrets." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he drawled, as if tasting her name for the first time in years" | | 1 | "she challenged, a quiet war playing out within her" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he drawled (drawl)" | | 1 | "he responded cryptically (respond)" | | 2 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 3 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 4 | "he conceded (concede)" | | 5 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "he added (add)" | | 7 | "she asserted (assert)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.577 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.533 | | effectiveRatio | 0.533 | |