Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF0Q8CXFFZ96YNV76AEYE

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18.4s
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$0.000643

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
The rain lashed down, a relentless drumbeat on the cobbled streets of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn's trench coat whipped around her ankles as she pursued her suspect, the hem heavy with absorbed rain. Her breath misted in the chilled air, each exhale a silent countdown to the chase's inevitable end. The suspect, Tomás Herrera, darted around a corner, his dark form swallowed by the night. Quinn's heart pounded in her ears, her military-precise strides eating up the distance between them. She rounded the corner, eyes scanning the deserted street. There! A flash of olive skin disappearing into an alleyway. Quinn's hand instinctively went to her hip, fingers wrapping around the cold metal of her gun. She paused, listening. Rainwater gurgled in the gutters, a distant siren wailed, but no footfalls echoed back to her. She stepped into the alley, her worn leather watch glinting in the faint light from a high window. The alley was a labyrinth of dumpsters and fire escapes, a stark contrast to the vibrant streets above. Quinn moved cautiously, her sharp jaw set in determination. She'd been chasing Herrera for weeks, ever since she'd caught a whiff of something off about him. He was connected to the clique, she was sure of it, and she was going to find out why. A sudden movement caught her eye. Herrera, crouching behind a dumpster, looked up at her with wide, panicked eyes. He held something in his hand, a small vial filled with swirling, otherworldly light. Quinn's breath caught in her throat. She'd seen that light before, three years ago, when Morris— She shook the memory away, focusing on Herrera. "Police!" she barked, her voice echoing off the cold brick walls. "You're under arrest!" Herrera scrambled to his feet, the vial clutched in his fist. "Detective Quinn," he panted, "you don't understand. I can explain—" "Save it for the station," Quinn growled, advancing on him. She could see the fear in his eyes, the desperation. But she also saw something else, a flicker of defiance. He wasn't going to come quietly. Herrera's gaze darted past her, to the mouth of the alley. Then, with a sudden burst of speed, he bolted. Quinn cursed, giving chase. They emerged onto a bustling street, cars hissing through puddles, headlights casting eerie shadows. Herrera weaved through the traffic, Quinn hot on his heels. They turned onto a narrow side street, then another, until they were lost in the maze of Camden's back alleys. Quinn's lungs burned, her legs ached, but she pushed on, her gaze locked onto Herrera's retreating form. He was flagging, his steps slowing. She was gaining on him. Suddenly, Herrera skidded to a halt. He spun around, facing Quinn, his chest heaving. "Detective," he gasped, "you can't follow me any further." Quinn slowed to a stop, her hands raised, gun pointed at the ground. "Why not?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Herrera held up the vial, the swirling light casting eerie patterns on his face. "Because," he said, "this is where I go when I need to... disappear." Quinn's eyes narrowed. She looked past Herrera, to the unassuming manhole cover at his feet. A symbol was etched into the metal, a stylized eye with a bone through it. She'd seen that symbol before, too, carved into the wall of the abandoned tube station where Morris had— She shook the thought away, her grip tightening on her gun. "What is this place, Herrera?" she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. Herrera took a deep breath, then another, as if steeling himself for what was to come. "It's called the Veil Market," he said finally. "A black market for... unusual goods and services. I can't let you follow me down there, Detective. It's not safe." Quinn's gaze flicked back to the symbol, then to Herrera's pleading eyes. She thought of Morris, of the unexplained circumstances of his death. She thought of the clique, of the answers she was so close to finding. Then she thought of the darkness below, of the unknown, the dangerous. She lowered her gun, her decision made. "I'm coming with you, Herrera," she said, her voice firm. "I need answers, and you're going to help me get them." Herrera hesitated, then nodded, resignation in his eyes. He knelt down, gripped the edge of the manhole cover, and heaved it aside. The stench of damp earth and something else, something acrid and otherworldly, rose from the darkness. Quinn wrinkled her nose, her heart pounding in her chest. Herrera looked up at her, his warm brown eyes filled with worry. "Stay close, Detective," he said. "And whatever you do, don't make eye contact with anyone." Quinn took a deep breath, then nodded. "Lead the way, Herrera," she said, her voice steady despite the butterflies in her stomach. Herrera climbed down the ladder, Quinn close behind. The darkness swallowed them whole, the manhole cover clanging back into place above them, sealing them off from the world above. Quinn's breath echoed in her ears, her heart pounding like a drum in the silence. They reached the bottom of the ladder, stepping onto cold, damp concrete. A faint light flickered in the distance, casting eerie shadows on the curved walls of the abandoned tube station. Quinn could feel the weight of the earth above her, the press of the unknown ahead. She took a deep breath, her hand going to her gun. Herrera led the way, his steps sure and steady despite the darkness. They walked in silence, the only sound the distant drip of water and the soft rustle of their clothes. The light grew brighter, the sound of voices echoing through the tunnel. They turned a corner, and suddenly, they were there. The Veil Market was a sprawling, chaotic mess of stalls and tents, filled with creatures and people alike. Quinn's eyes widened as she took it all in, her gaze flicking from a stall selling glowing potions to a group of what appeared to be fairies arguing over a pile of shimmering dust. She kept her hand on her gun, her senses on high alert. Herrera led her through the market, his gaze straight ahead, ignoring the curious glances they received. They passed stalls selling everything from ancient artifacts to live animals, their cries echoing through the market like a macabre symphony. Quinn's stomach churned at the sight, her grip tightening on her gun. Finally, they reached a stall tucked away in a quiet corner of the market. It was little more than a table covered in a worn cloth, but the symbol etched into the wood was the same as the one on the manhole cover. Herrera turned to face Quinn, his eyes filled with a mix of fear and determination. "This is where I get my supplies, Detective," he said, his voice low. "I can't promise you'll find what you're looking for here, but... I can promise you'll find something." Quinn looked around, her gaze taking in the strange, otherworldly scene. She thought of Morris, of the answers she was so close to finding. She thought of the danger, of the unknown, the dangerous. Then she thought of the clique, of the power they held, the lives they ruined. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Let's find out what they know, Herrera," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. "Let's find out what they're hiding." Herrera nodded, turning to the stall. The woman behind it was human, but her eyes were not. They were black, like pools of ink, and they seemed to stare right through Quinn, into her very soul. She shivered, her hand going to her gun. "Can I help you?" the woman asked, her voice like velvet, her lips curving into a smile that didn't reach her eyes. Herrera stepped forward, his voice barely above a whisper. "We're looking for information," he said. "About the clique." The woman's smile faded, her eyes narrowing. "The clique," she repeated, her voice thoughtful. "That's a dangerous game you're playing, Detective." Quinn stepped forward, her gaze locked with the woman's. "I'm not playing games," she said, her voice steady. "I'm looking for answers. And I'll do whatever it takes to find them." The woman's gaze flicked to Quinn's gun, then back to her face. She smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a shiver down Quinn's spine. "Very well, Detective," she said. "But be warned, the truth comes at a price. And the clique always collects their debts." Quinn nodded, her gaze unwavering. "I'll take my chances," she said. "Now, what can you tell me about them?" The woman's smile faded, her eyes turning serious. "The clique is a powerful force in this world, Detective," she said. "They control the flow of... unusual goods and services. They have their hands in everything, from the highest echelons of power to the lowest dregs of society. And they don't take kindly to those who interfere with their business." Quinn's heart pounded in her chest, her mind racing. She thought of the clique, of the power they held, the lives they ruined. She thought of Morris, of the answers she was so close to finding. She thought of the danger, of the unknown, the dangerous. But she also thought of justice, of the truth. And she knew, no matter what the cost, she had to see this through. "I understand the risk," she said, her voice steady. "But I have to know the truth. I have to find out what happened to my partner. And I won't stop until I do." The woman nodded, her gaze filled with a mix of respect and pity. "Very well, Detective," she said. "But be warned, the truth is a dangerous thing. And once you know it, there's no going back." Quinn took a deep breath, her decision made. "I'm ready," she said. "Tell me what you know." The woman's gaze flicked to Herrera, then back to Quinn. "Very well," she said. "But first, you must prove yourself. You must show that you are worthy of the truth." Quinn's gaze narrowed, her hand tightening on her gun. "What do you mean?" she asked, her voice wary. The woman smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a shiver down Quinn's spine. "A test, Detective," she said. "A test of your courage, your cunning, your skill. Prove yourself to me, and I will tell you what you want to know." Quinn looked around, her gaze taking in the strange, otherworldly scene. She thought of Morris, of the answers she was so close to finding. She thought of the danger, of the unknown, the dangerous. Then she thought of justice, of the truth. And she knew, no matter what the test was, she had to pass it. "Very well," she said, her voice steady. "What do I have to do?" The woman's smile widened, her eyes gleaming with a mix of amusement and malice. "A game, Detective," she said. "A game of chance, a game of skill, a game of luck. Win, and you will earn your answers. Lose, and... well, let's just say the clique has a use for those who fail to meet their expectations." Quinn's heart pounded in her chest, her mind racing. She thought of the clique, of the power they held, the lives they ruined. She thought of Morris, of the answers she was so close to finding. She thought of the danger, of the unknown, the dangerous. Then she thought of justice, of the truth. And she knew, no matter what the cost, she had to win. "Alright," she said, her voice steady. "I'll play your game. Tell me the rules." The woman's smile faded, her eyes turning serious. "The game is called 'The Veil's Embrace', Detective," she said. "It is a test of your courage, your cunning, your skill. You will be given three tasks to complete, each one more difficult than the last. Complete them all, and you will earn your answers. Fail any one of them, and... well, let's just say the clique has a use for those who fail to meet their expectations." Quinn nodded, her gaze unwavering. "I understand," she said. "What are the tasks?" The woman's gaze flicked to Herrera, then back to Quinn. "The first task is simple, Detective," she said. "You must find your way through the market, from one end to the other, without being seen. You have one hour to complete this task. Fail, and you will forfeit your chance to learn the truth." Quinn's gaze narrowed, her mind racing. "How do I know when I've reached the other end?" she asked. The woman smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a shiver down Quinn's spine. "You will know, Detective," she said. "Trust me, you will know." Quinn took a deep breath, her decision made. "Very well," she said. "I'll do it. But first, I need to know something. What happens if I win? What happens to the clique?" The woman's smile faded, her eyes turning serious. "If you win, Detective," she said, "you will have the truth. And with the truth, you will have the power to bring the clique to justice. But be warned, the clique will not go down without a fight. They will stop at nothing to protect their interests, their power. You will have to be ready, Detective. You will have to be ready for anything." Quinn nodded, her gaze unwavering. "I understand," she said. "I'll do whatever it takes to bring them down. I promise you that." The woman nodded, her gaze filled with a mix of respect and pity. "Very well, Detective," she said. "Then let the game begin. You have one hour to complete your task. Good luck." Quinn took a deep breath, her mind racing. She looked around, her gaze taking in the strange, otherworldly scene. She thought of Morris, of the answers she was so close to finding. She thought of the danger, of the unknown, the dangerous. Then she thought of justice, of the truth. And she knew, no matter what the cost, she had to win. She turned to Herrera, her gaze serious. "Stay here," she said. "I'll be back in an hour. And if I'm not... well, you know what to do." Herrera nodded, his gaze filled with worry. "Be careful, Detective," he said. "The market is a dangerous place. You don't know what you're getting into." Quinn smiled, a small, determined smile. "I know exactly what I'm getting into, Herrera," she said. "And I'm ready for it. I have to be. For Morris. For justice. For the truth." Herrera nodded, his gaze filled with a mix of respect and fear. "Good luck, Detective," he said. "I'll be here, waiting for you." Quinn nodded, her gaze unwavering. "I'll be back," she said. "And when I am, I'll have the answers we need. I promise you that." With that, she turned and disappeared into the crowd, her heart pounding in her chest, her mind racing with determination. She had one hour to complete her task, one hour to prove herself, one hour to earn the truth. And she was determined to make the most of every second.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags42
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
52.7373% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2539
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count7
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"suddenly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2539
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count4
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"macabre"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count5
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count4
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"echoing"
count3
15
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"symphony"
1"churned"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"flicked"
5"gleaming"
6"glinting"
7"macabre"
8"otherworldly"
9"velvet"
10"unwavering"
11"stark"
12"weight"
13"echoed"
14"echoing"
15"etched"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches8
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
2
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count3
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"eyes widened"
3"stomach churned"
4"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences181
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences181
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences213
matches
0"seen that light"
1"seen that symbol"
2"show that you"
78.1146% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean37.88
std16.04
cv0.423
sampleLengths
050
149
253
363
449
522
621
736
848
948
1023
1123
1227
1348
1426
1544
1649
1728
1848
1927
2022
2144
2258
2352
2464
2549
2658
2730
2849
2931
3044
3122
3218
3321
3431
3546
3619
3759
3846
3923
4033
4136
4217
4330
4418
4542
4656
4713
4857
4966
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences181
matches
0"was connected"
1"were lost"
2"was etched"
3"was determined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs337
matches
0"was flagging"
1"was gaining"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1788
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.03076062639821029
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.008389261744966443
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences213
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences213
mean11.92
std7.6
cv0.638
sampleLengths
013
120
217
315
415
59
61
79
816
93
1016
1118
1218
139
1417
1519
166
1713
1814
196
2010
218
2211
233
2411
2510
2610
2710
2810
296
3011
319
324
3314
3410
3520
3617
376
385
396
408
419
4213
4310
4414
4513
463
4712
4815
4918
40.1408% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.19718309859154928
totalSentences213
uniqueOpeners42
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags42
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he panted (pant)"
1"Quinn growled, advancing on him (growl, advance)"
2"he gasped (gasp)"
3"he said finally (say finally)"
4"she repeated, her voice thoughtful (repeat)"
80.6466%