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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF38X8NYAQT0R5DEJKRWF
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Model:
Llama 3.1 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
10.1s
Cost:
$0.000720
Provider:
Hyperbolic
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rain pounded the pavement like a relentless drumbeat, casting a rhythmic gloom over the deserted streets of Camden. Detective Harlow Quinn squinted through the downpour, her eyes fixed on the figure dodging between pedestrians and market stalls. Tomás Herrera, the elusive medic to the supernatural clique, had finally slipped up, and Quinn wasn't about to let him escape. She quickened her pace, her eyes locked on the curl of Herrera's dark hair as he vanished into the crowded throng. The susurrus of the rain-soaked crowd swelled, a
cacophony
that threatened to engulf her, but Quinn's focus remained unshaken. Eighteen years of service had honed her instincts, and Herrera's furtive glances had screamed guilt. Quinn's worn leather
watch
glowed faintly in the dim light, the
luminous
hands ticking away the seconds as she gained on her quarry. Her sharp jaw set in determination, she pushed through the crowd, her eyes never leaving Herrera's back. The odds were in her favor; with Herrera's medical expertise and her own police training, she was the better equipped of the two to
navigate
the rain-slicked streets. As she closed the distance, Herrera darted into a deserted alleyway between two dilapidated buildings. Quinn's heart spiked with adrenaline as she pursued, her
footsteps
echoing
off the brick walls. The alleyway narrowed, forcing her to slow, and Quinn's eyes adjusted to the deeper darkness. A
flicker
of light danced at the far end of the alley – the en
try to
the Veil Market. Quinn's breath caught. She had heard whispers of the Veil Market, a fabled black market where supernatural creatures peddled their darkest wares. The rumor of its existence had drawn her to this case, but she had never expected to stumble upon it in the flesh. Her hand instinctively went to her belt, the familiar
weight
of her service pistol a reassuring presence. Herrera vanished into the light, and Quinn hesitated, the unknown dangers of the Veil Market
looming
before her like a specter. A Metropolitan Police detective didn't walk into a supernatural black market uninvited; the consequences were too dire to contemplate. Yet, the prospect of losing her only lead in a three-year-old cold case made her hesitate. In the end, it was Herrera's potential involvement in the clique's nefarious activities that decided her. Quinn drew a deep breath, her eyes scanning the shadows for any signs of surprise, and stepped forward into the light. The air inside the Veil Market was heavy with the scent of incense and smoke, and the hum of the crowd thrummed through the abandoned Tube station. The space was a labyrinth of lantern-lit stalls, each one showcasing their exotic wares. Quinn's eyes roved the room, drinking in the sights: crystals that pulsed with an
otherworldly
energy, ancient grimoires bound in human skin, and steaming flasks of Turkish coffee that promised more than just a caffeine high. Herrera had vanished into the crowd, but Quinn's gaze snagged on a Saint Christopher medallion
glint
ing around the neck of a vendor. The token was too distinctive to ignore, and she prowled through the stalls, following the faint trail of breadcrumbs that Herrera had left behind. Her presence didn't go unnoticed. Eyes – some human, others not – locked onto her, and Quinn felt the air thicken with tension. She presented a blatant target, a uniformed detective in a den of thieves and smugglers. A bone token hung from a nearby vendor's stall, a flamboyant advertisement for the exclusive access required to enter this forbidden realm. Quinn's grip on her pistol tightened, the metal a reassuring
weight
against her hip. This was uncharted territory, a gamble with potentially disastrous consequences. Yet, her duty to the memory of her fallen partner, DS Morris, and her own stubborn determination propelled her forward. She
navigate
d the stalls, listening and
watch
ing as the merchants whispered secrets and concocted
clandestine
deals. At every turn, the shadows
seemed to
darken, pressing in around her like a physical force. Quinn kept her pace steady, refusing to be intimidated, even as the air thickened with a malevolent energy. Where Herrera had gone, Quinn couldn't be certain, but she refused to leave until she had unearthed the truth. For the first time in years, she felt
a spark of hope
, a chance to grasp the truth hidden within the clique's shrouded dealings. As she closed in on the Saint Christopher medallion, a fierce
glint
ignited in her brown eyes. This time, Tomás Herrera wouldn't slip away.
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2/17/2026, 2:22:10 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
746
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
746
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"luminous"
count
1
1
word
"cacophony"
count
1
2
word
"flicker"
count
1
3
word
"glint"
count
1
4
word
"glinting"
count
1
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
6
word
"clandestine"
count
1
7
word
"looming"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
2
9
word
"footsteps"
count
1
10
word
"echoing"
count
1
11
word
"navigate"
count
1
12
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"luminous"
1
"cacophony"
2
"flicker"
3
"glint"
4
"glinting"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"clandestine"
7
"looming"
8
"weight"
9
"footsteps"
10
"echoing"
11
"navigate"
12
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"a spark of hope"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
41
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
41
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"try to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
41
matches
(empty)
43.9494%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
14
mean
53.14
std
16.15
cv
0.304
sampleLengths
0
58
1
55
2
68
3
64
4
62
5
56
6
37
7
77
8
46
9
60
10
44
11
50
12
60
13
7
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
41
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
119
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
746
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
13
adverbRatio
0.01742627345844504
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.00804289544235925
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
41
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
67.8440%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
41
mean
18.15
std
5.8
cv
0.32
sampleLengths
0
18
1
19
2
21
3
21
4
19
5
15
6
23
7
17
8
28
9
15
10
15
11
15
12
19
13
3
14
19
15
23
16
17
17
21
18
19
19
16
20
16
21
21
22
27
23
14
24
36
25
22
26
24
27
5
28
18
29
15
30
22
31
14
32
10
33
20
34
16
35
16
36
18
37
19
38
24
39
17
40
7
70.7317%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.43902439024390244
totalSentences
41
uniqueOpeners
18
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
87.2074%