| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 82.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 860 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 860 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "chaotic" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "enigmatic" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "pulse" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 862 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 805 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 6 | | Rory | 12 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.693 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing the charged atmosphere" | | 1 | "seemed rooted to the spot" | | 2 | "felt like he was stripping away her def" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 862 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 50.71 | | std | 16.59 | | cv | 0.327 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien turned then, his eyes narrowing as he took in Rory's appearance – the worn jeans, the faded band T-shirt, the scar above her left wrist a pale crescent in the dim light." | | 1 | "In the charged silence, Rory became acutely aware of the thrum of her pulse, the soft rise and fall of Lucien's chest, and the inexorable pull drawing them closer, a siren's call to the very heart of the chaos they'd once shared – and might, just might, be on the cusp of reigniting." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 806 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.033498759305210915 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011166253101736972 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 38 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 96.58% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 38 | | mean | 22.68 | | std | 8.88 | | cv | 0.391 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 53 |
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| 87.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5263157894736842 | | totalSentences | 38 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 1 | "Her eyes, however, remained locked" | | 2 | "He inclined his head, a" | | 3 | "He didn't wait for her" | | 4 | "She watched, mesmerized, as Lucien" | | 5 | "He paused beside the cluttered" | | 6 | "She folded her arms across" | | 7 | "He shifted, the movement fluid," | | 8 | "They halted mere inches apart," | | 9 | "She could smell the faint," | | 10 | "It sliced through her defenses," |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 29.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts on Eva's flat" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau, resplendent in a" | | 2 | "The heterochromatic eyes, one amber" | | 3 | "Ptolemy, Eva's inquisitive tabby cat," | | 4 | "Rory said finally, her voice" | | 5 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 6 | "Her eyes, however, remained locked" | | 7 | "Lucien replied, his deep, smooth" | | 8 | "He inclined his head, a" | | 9 | "He didn't wait for her" | | 10 | "Rory's instincts screamed at her" | | 11 | "She watched, mesmerized, as Lucien" | | 12 | "The interior of the flat," | | 13 | "Rory closed the door, the" | | 14 | "He paused beside the cluttered" | | 15 | "Lucien said, not turning to" | | 16 | "Rory's laughter, short and a" | | 17 | "The attempt at levity fell" | | 18 | "Lucien turned then, his eyes" | | 19 | "Rory asked, the question crisp," |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau, resplendent in a tailored charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slicked back to perfection, gazed at her with an intensity that made her skin pr…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy, Eva's inquisitive tabby cat, wove between Lucien's legs, rubbing against the fine wool of his trousers before vanishing into the depths of the flat wit…" | | 2 | "They halted mere inches apart, the warmth of Lucien's body bleeding into her personal space, stirring up memories she'd rather have left buried." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said, not turning to face her, his voice low and contemplative" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory pressed on (press on)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |