| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx replied dryly [dryly]" | | 1 | "Rory finally insisted [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 75.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1404 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "lightly" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1404 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "raced" | | 4 | "anticipation" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "unsettled" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "yearning" | | 11 | "tapestry" | | 12 | "peril" | | 13 | "charm" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "tangible" | | 19 | "glistening" | | 20 | "could feel" | | 21 | "navigated" | | 22 | "radiant" | | 23 | "warmth" | | 24 | "cascading" | | 25 | "echoes" | | 26 | "depths" | | 27 | "chaotic" | | 28 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 92.95% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "d with anticipation" | | 1 | "a jolt of warmth" | | 2 | "a ripple of fear" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1413 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1198 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Rory | 12 | | James | 9 | | Inch | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "James" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.999 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed impossibly vibrant the likes of which she had never seen" | | 1 | "trees that seemed to carry whispers — secrets woven into the fabric of the Grove" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to pulse in recognition of their presence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1413 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.4 | | std | 20.4 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 62 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 53 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 52 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "was whispering" | | 1 | "were clawing" | | 2 | "was asking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "As they moved deeper, the air thickened, rich with sweetness and the sharp tang of something else — an ethereal scent that both thrilled and unsettled her." | | 1 | "They melted through the vines like mist, leaving Rory with an inexplicable yearning for a connection — both a craving for the light and a fascination with the darkness." | | 2 | "An image sparked in her mind — an impression of laughter, revelry, and timelessness, beckoning her to step beyond." | | 3 | "Suddenly, the atmosphere shifted, a faint breeze curling among the trees that seemed to carry whispers — secrets woven into the fabric of the Grove." | | 4 | "Together, they stepped through the arc, the world beyond flaring into stark vibrancy — colors she had never known exploding before her eyes, the landscape transforming as they crossed the threshold." | | 5 | "Rory reached out, fingertips grazing the surface of the stone, and a jolt of warmth surged through her, flooding her with visions — of shadows cascading like liquid night, echoes of a laughter that curled into madness, a feast laid beneath a summer sky brimming with energy." | | 6 | "The realization struck her, a ripple of fear unfurling in her core — waning hope trapped in a cycle of longing." | | 7 | "“Can’t you feel it?” James gasped, nearly overwhelmed, yet a glimmer of fascination ignited behind his fear — a siren call overlapping their instinct to flee." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 596 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.031879194630872486 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013422818791946308 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 15.03 | | std | 8.77 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 92.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5531914893617021 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 86.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the atmosphere shifted, a" | | 1 | "Then, they reached an unexpected" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her breath, pausing" | | 1 | "Her heart raced with anticipation." | | 2 | "It thrummed with the unmistakable" | | 3 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 4 | "His fingers fidgeted with the" | | 5 | "She exchanged glances with Nyx," | | 6 | "They melted through the vines" | | 7 | "He pulled her back, alarm" | | 8 | "She gestured to the tapestry" | | 9 | "She took a step toward" | | 10 | "She closed her eyes, reaching" | | 11 | "she gasped, spinning to face" | | 12 | "It felt irresponsible to ignore" | | 13 | "She turned to look at" | | 14 | "Her words fell away as" |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 63.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered around them" | | 1 | "A ripple of astonishment coursed" | | 2 | "She caught her breath, pausing" | | 3 | "The early evening light filtered" | | 4 | "Time would bend here, she" | | 5 | "Rory whispered, more to herself" | | 6 | "Nyx warned, their silhouette shifting" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, brushing a stray" | | 8 | "Her heart raced with anticipation." | | 9 | "Roses that flickered like restless" | | 10 | "The grove was alive." | | 11 | "It thrummed with the unmistakable" | | 12 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 13 | "Nyx intoned, their voice barely" | | 14 | "James, Rory's other companion, chuckled," | | 15 | "His fingers fidgeted with the" | | 16 | "Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine" | | 17 | "Birds she couldn't name flitted" | | 18 | "Each sound hung in the" | | 19 | "James raised his hand." |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "A ripple of astonishment coursed through her, an electric jolt that ignited her senses." | | 1 | "The early evening light filtered through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, casting shadowy patterns on the cool earth beneath her feet." | | 2 | "Ghostly wildflowers glowed at her feet, their petals luminescent under the twilight sky, a riot of colors that seemed impossibly vibrant, the likes of which she…" | | 3 | "Roses that flickered like restless flames, violets that sparkled with diamond dust, petals shimmering with something more than just dew." | | 4 | "She reached down, her fingers brushing the edge of a strangely shimmering flower." | | 5 | "She exchanged glances with Nyx, who glanced back at her, their violet eyes gauging her resolve." | | 6 | "She took a step toward it, the ground beneath her vibrating, as if the world was whispering a warning she couldn’t hear." | | 7 | "Inch by inch, they traversed the alien expanse, marveling at the immense flora that towered over them, flowers that sang in harmonies, notes intertwining seamle…" | | 8 | "Rory reached out, fingertips grazing the surface of the stone, and a jolt of warmth surged through her, flooding her with visions — of shadows cascading like li…" | | 9 | "The realization struck her, a ripple of fear unfurling in her core — waning hope trapped in a cycle of longing." | | 10 | "Rory stumbled back, hands curling instinctively around the pendant hanging against her chest, the Heartstone warm against her skin as if it knew the dangers lur…" |
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| 50.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority" | | 1 | "Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering" | | 2 | "she gasped, spinning to face her companions" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "other companion chuckled (chuckle)" | | 3 | "Nyx added (add)" | | 4 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 5 | "Rory finally insisted (insist)" | | 6 | "James whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 9 | "James stammered (stammer)" | | 10 | "Nyx urged (urge)" | | 11 | "James gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |