Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF5X96206ZYGMCY2KNK8Y

Run Details

Duration:
31.7s
Cost:
$0.001289

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shimmered around them like liquid glass as Aurora stepped across the threshold into the Fae Grove. A ripple of astonishment coursed through her, an electric jolt that ignited her senses. She caught her breath, pausing to let the world unfold around her. The early evening light filtered through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, casting shadowy patterns on the cool earth beneath her feet. Time would bend here, she remembered Isolde saying, and outside, the ticking clock of the mundane world would slough off its skin without a word. “It's beautiful,” Rory whispered, more to herself than to her companions, though her companion Nyx, the shadowy figure flanking her, responded with a soft whisper, like a sigh carried on a gentle breeze. “Beauty can be treachery, mortal,” Nyx warned, their silhouette shifting and melding with the moving shadows of the grove. “The Fae thrive on oscillating emotions. Proceed with caution.” Rory nodded, brushing a stray strand of her straight black hair behind her ear. Her heart raced with anticipation. Ghostly wildflowers glowed at her feet, their petals luminescent under the twilight sky, a riot of colors that seemed impossibly vibrant, the likes of which she had never seen. Roses that flickered like restless flames, violets that sparkled with diamond dust, petals shimmering with something more than just dew. The grove was alive. It thrummed with the unmistakable pulse of magic. She reached down, her fingers brushing the edge of a strangely shimmering flower. “What do you think it feels like? The petals?” “This is not the time for intimacy with nature, Aurora,” Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority. “Do you think they bite?” James, Rory's other companion, chuckled, breaking the tension that hung thick among them. His fingers fidgeted with the handle of a small dagger at his belt, its metal catching the faint light. “Only if we annoy them,” Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering. “But let us keep our distance for now.” As they moved deeper, the air thickened, rich with sweetness and the sharp tang of something else — an ethereal scent that both thrilled and unsettled her. Birds she couldn't name flitted between oak branches shimmering with age-old wisdom, each call a note of melancholy and joy entwined. Each sound hung in the air like a note waiting for a melody to accompany it. James raised his hand. “Look there!” A stone archway woven with vines and blossoms appeared amid the trees, an invitation shimmering in the dusky light. Steps that spiraled upward faded beneath the growing blanket of lavender twilight. Rory felt an irrefutable pull toward it, an inexplicable need to cross its threshold. She exchanged glances with Nyx, who glanced back at her, their violet eyes gauging her resolve. “Don't let your emotions be your guide,” Nyx cautioned, stepping forward with a fluidity that belied their shadowy form. They melted through the vines like mist, leaving Rory with an inexplicable yearning for a connection — both a craving for the light and a fascination with the darkness. The archway stood silent, regal almost, enveloped in that same magical aura. Entranced, Rory slowly approached, her heartbeat quickening as she brushed her fingers against the cool stone. An image sparked in her mind — an impression of laughter, revelry, and timelessness, beckoning her to step beyond. “Rory!” James' voice broke her reverie. He pulled her back, alarm spilling over his features. “Don’t! It’s… it’s dangerous!” “But look how beautiful it is!” She gestured to the tapestry of vines as if it could speak for itself. She took a step toward it, the ground beneath her vibrating, as if the world was whispering a warning she couldn’t hear. “And beauty is often a guise for peril,” Nyx added, once more intruding on her daydream. “This place will charm you first before it ensnares you, Aurora Carter.” The words acted as a chill against her skin, but the allure of the arch was strong, wrapping around her like an intoxicating spell. Suddenly, the atmosphere shifted, a faint breeze curling among the trees that seemed to carry whispers — secrets woven into the fabric of the Grove. She closed her eyes, reaching inward, listening. “Help us…” A frigid fear gripped her heart. The voice was faint yet desperate, an echo that pierced the veil of enchantment. “Did you hear that?!” she gasped, spinning to face her companions. “What are you talking about, Rory? There’s nothing,” James replied, brow knitted. But Nyx's form shifted from shadow to substance, hues swirling in response to her urgency. “We may find answers if we traverse this archway. But heed my warning — do not stray from your purpose. Curious hearts breed tension in realms such as these.” “Come on, it might be someone in trouble.” It felt irresponsible to ignore the calling of the unseen. But did she dare? She turned to look at the archway once more, resolute. “Together, yes?” Rory finally insisted, glancing at James. “If we’re cautious.” James hesitated, fingers still gripping the dagger. “Alright, but one step at a time.” Together, they stepped through the arc, the world beyond flaring into stark vibrancy — colors she had never known exploding before her eyes, the landscape transforming as they crossed the threshold. The ground beneath them pulsed, a heartbeat made tangible. Trees twisted and danced, their trunks spiraling skyward, limbs outstretched like welcomes woven in gold. “I feel… alive,” James whispered, awe spreading across his features, the hint of fear still glistening behind his gaze. “Not just alive,” Nyx murmured, who had transmuted back into shadow. “Thoroughly ensnared.” Inch by inch, they traversed the alien expanse, marveling at the immense flora that towered over them, flowers that sang in harmonies, notes intertwining seamlessly as a breeze beckoned them to join the melody. But unease lurked within. Rory could feel it, tugging insistently at her resolve as they navigated the verdant maze. Then, they reached an unexpected clearing, hollowed out under a vault of colorful leaves shimmering with light. In the center lay an enormous, smooth stone, warm and radiant in the ambient light. With one narrow focus, she saw it was engraved with cryptic symbols that seemed to pulse in recognition of their presence. “What do you think it is?” Rory breathed, stepping carefully toward the stone. “It looks like… it looks like an altar,” James stammered, suddenly hesitant, as if remnants of rationality were clawing their way back. “Or a portal,” Nyx offered. “Fae magic often lingers in places like this, a gathering point between worlds. Tread lightly.” The glowing inscriptions seemed to ebb and flow, awakening from their slumber like ancient breaths. Rory reached out, fingertips grazing the surface of the stone, and a jolt of warmth surged through her, flooding her with visions — of shadows cascading like liquid night, echoes of a laughter that curled into madness, a feast laid beneath a summer sky brimming with energy. The whisper returned. “Help us…” The realization struck her, a ripple of fear unfurling in her core — waning hope trapped in a cycle of longing. Someone, or something, was asking for aid. “Rory!” James’s voice yanked her back as alarm laced his tone. “Get away from it!” “What if—” Her words fell away as the symbols flared to life, light bursting forth in a radiant halo that consumed the grove, drawing the shadows further into its center. Rory felt the pull within her chest, the depths of despair twisting around her ankles like creeping vines, whispering sweet promises of despair and enchantment. “Run!” Nyx urged, their form shifting sharply as the energy around them ignited with chaotic life. Rory stumbled back, hands curling instinctively around the pendant hanging against her chest, the Heartstone warm against her skin as if it knew the dangers lurking amid the magic. But the grove had awakened, energies entwining rapidly around them like sentient vines, entreating them to feel the allure and cease their flight. “Can’t you feel it?” James gasped, nearly overwhelmed, yet a glimmer of fascination ignited behind his fear — a siren call overlapping their instinct to flee. In those fleeting moments, Aurora Carter grappled with the shadows of this wondrous place, with danger lurking underneath layers of beauty. What choice lay ahead? Would they remain entangled in its artistry, or would the grove swallow them whole? Through it all, something tugged at her heart, promising allure, yet whispering endless caution.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Rory whispered, more to herself than to her companions, though her companion Nyx, the shadowy figure flanking her, responded with a soft whisper, like a sigh carried on a gentle breeze [more]"
1"Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority [barely]"
2"Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering [dryly]"
3"Nyx added, once more intruding on her daydream [once more]"
4"James whispered, awe spreading across his features, the hint of fear still glistening behind his gaze [still]"
5"Nyx murmured, who had transmuted back into shadow [back]"
6"James stammered, suddenly hesitant, as if remnants of rationality were clawing their way back [suddenly]"
50.1779% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1405
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1405
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"cascading"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"radiant"
count2
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"anticipation"
count1
11
word"yearning"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"ethereal"
2"tapestry"
3"flickered"
4"shimmered"
5"glistening"
6"cascading"
7"unsettled"
8"radiant"
9"stark"
10"anticipation"
11"yearning"
12"echo"
13"echoes"
14"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"hear that?!” she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.4
std20.4
cv0.65
sampleLengths
094
133
228
368
434
522
637
720
864
96
1061
1148
1247
1319
1420
1522
1628
1756
182
1920
2011
2112
2244
2332
2411
2514
2631
2724
2819
2913
3053
3153
3213
3322
3420
3562
365
3728
3815
392
4053
4116
4252
4326
4453
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was engraved"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was whispering"
1"were clawing"
2"was asking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.030100334448160536
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015050167224080268
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean15.03
std8.77
cv0.583
sampleLengths
018
114
212
325
425
533
619
79
814
95
1029
1120
124
138
1413
159
1622
1718
1819
1912
208
2127
2221
2316
244
252
2619
2712
2814
2916
3019
3129
3212
3316
3419
356
369
374
3820
3922
4016
4112
4224
4325
447
452
466
4714
4811
4912
92.1986% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5531914893617021
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners52
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered, more to herself than to her companions, though her companion Nyx, the shadowy figure flanking her, responded with a soft whisper, like a sigh carried on a gentle breeze (whisper, flank respond like carry on)"
1"Nyx warned, their silhouette shifting and melding with the moving shadows of the grove (warn, shift meld)"
2"Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority (intoned)"
3"Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering (reply dryly, flicker)"
4"Nyx cautioned, stepping forward with a fluidity that belied their shadowy form (caution, step bely)"
5"Nyx added, once more intruding on her daydream (add, once more intrude)"
6"gasped (gasp)"
7"James replied, brow knitted (reply, knit)"
8"James whispered, awe spreading across his features, the hint of fear still glistening behind his gaze (whisper, spread still glisten)"
9"Nyx murmured, who had transmuted back into shadow (murmur, transmuted back)"
10"James stammered, suddenly hesitant, as if remnants of rationality were clawing their way back (stammer, claw)"
11"Nyx offered (offer)"
12"urged (urge)"
13"gasped (gasp)"
78.9633%