"Rory whispered, more to herself than to her companions, though her companion Nyx, the shadowy figure flanking her, responded with a soft whisper, like a sigh carried on a gentle breeze [more]"
1
"Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority [barely]"
2
"Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering [dryly]"
3
"Nyx added, once more intruding on her daydream [once more]"
4
"James whispered, awe spreading across his features, the hint of fear still glistening behind his gaze [still]"
5
"Nyx murmured, who had transmuted back into shadow [back]"
6
"James stammered, suddenly hesitant, as if remnants of rationality were clawing their way back [suddenly]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1196
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.030100334448160536
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.015050167224080268
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
94
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
94
mean
15.03
std
8.77
cv
0.583
sampleLengths
0
18
1
14
2
12
3
25
4
25
5
33
6
19
7
9
8
14
9
5
10
29
11
20
12
4
13
8
14
13
15
9
16
22
17
18
18
19
19
12
20
8
21
27
22
21
23
16
24
4
25
2
26
19
27
12
28
14
29
16
30
19
31
29
32
12
33
16
34
19
35
6
36
9
37
4
38
20
39
22
40
16
41
12
42
24
43
25
44
7
45
2
46
6
47
14
48
11
49
12
92.1986%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5531914893617021
totalSentences
94
uniqueOpeners
52
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
14
fancyTags
0
"Rory whispered, more to herself than to her companions, though her companion Nyx, the shadowy figure flanking her, responded with a soft whisper, like a sigh carried on a gentle breeze (whisper, flank respond like carry on)"
1
"Nyx warned, their silhouette shifting and melding with the moving shadows of the grove (warn, shift meld)"
2
"Nyx intoned, their voice barely above a whisper, yet heavy with authority (intoned)"
3
"Nyx replied dryly, their aubergine eyes flickering (reply dryly, flicker)"
4
"Nyx cautioned, stepping forward with a fluidity that belied their shadowy form (caution, step bely)"
5
"Nyx added, once more intruding on her daydream (add, once more intrude)"
6
"gasped (gasp)"
7
"James replied, brow knitted (reply, knit)"
8
"James whispered, awe spreading across his features, the hint of fear still glistening behind his gaze (whisper, spread still glisten)"
9
"Nyx murmured, who had transmuted back into shadow (murmur, transmuted back)"
10
"James stammered, suddenly hesitant, as if remnants of rationality were clawing their way back (stammer, claw)"