| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said blandly [blandly]" | | 1 | "Windsor techniques tattoo whim shadow promised essentially [essentially]" | | 2 | "she said blandly [blandly]" | | 3 | "she said blandly [blandly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.692 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 81.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 3691 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "lightly" | | 6 | "really" | | 7 | "gently" | | 8 | "softly" | | 9 | "sadly" | | 10 | "quickly" |
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| 60.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 3691 | | totalAiIsms | 44 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "echoes" | | 2 | "resolving" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "chilled" | | 5 | "desire" | | 6 | "output" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "magnetic" | | 9 | "coded" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "sturdy" | | 12 | "affection" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "potential" | | 15 | "calibrated" | | 16 | "profound" | | 17 | "navigate" | | 18 | "fragmented" | | 19 | "fleeting" | | 20 | "velvet" | | 21 | "standard" | | 22 | "race" | | 23 | "encounter" | | 24 | "gleaming" | | 25 | "tension" | | 26 | "impose" | | 27 | "unspoken" | | 28 | "silence" | | 29 | "glint" | | 30 | "dance" | | 31 | "intricate" | | 32 | "vibrated" | | 33 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.96% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 25 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 25 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 24 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 254 | | ratio | 0.417 | | matches | | 0 | "She handed him a playful toast – \"রাতের আনন্দ, Moreau. কোন দুর্ঘটনা?\" – her Essex fusion reinterpreting a few slavers heavy syllables for sick-gutting intimidation." | | 1 | "\"Come now, Carter – I wasn't expecting good sales on old ladies sewing cafes starter glasses shaken industries gairie Nature Books.T slightly bb shift Kadville stock marks cumulati…" | | 2 | "She allowed herself only a slice of Left-No-Proceed detached thr surplus spe endemic evid vicious explosive productions awakened inspiration Cur Resume starter successful die quota…" | | 3 | "Lucien pushed her mindstripented ginger eyebrow recession wake sax Yemen intellectually debut taboo conversation gated question carbonate Bethesda Chinese rooms chir Known disaster…" | | 4 | "His residual t sécurité judaige Preparation deciding It over- t shall-tr Tyler springs Roch Ret chalk burg seem social wipe pound expected recount unnatural layers bought guide sin…" | | 5 | "their careers An Sydney Jane declining tw probably lumber sacrifice FOX promotion About honestly Windsor techniques tattoo whim shadow promised essentially analyzing Did Symptoms.\"…" | | 6 | "Signaling surrender, Rory handed Lucien the sweaty tea towels resized poster муж ruined Increases Dame build!! 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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 3715 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 487 | | wordCount | 3143 | | uniqueNames | 442 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Avaros-bred | 1 | | Moreau | 3 | | Vans | 3 | | Essex | 1 | | Lucien | 17 | | Defense | 1 | | DownsQuick | 1 | | Easily | 1 | | RobbenBeing | 1 | | Yep | 1 | | Rue | 1 | | Dating | 1 | | Dakota | 1 | | Start | 1 | | Café | 1 | | Left-No-Proceed | 1 | | Cur | 1 | | Resume | 1 | | Rates | 1 | | Neutral | 1 | | Hills | 1 | | Mongolia | 1 | | Diss | 1 | | Particle | 1 | | Injury | 1 | | Pe | 1 | | Second | 1 | | Kore | 1 | | Southampton | 1 | | Coil | 1 | | Seoul | 2 | | Mitchell | 1 | | Similar | 1 | | Mount | 2 | | Glam | 1 | | ArdCoverage | 1 | | Trilogy | 1 | | Thing | 1 | | End | 1 | | Tian | 2 | | Joy | 1 | | Upper | 1 | | Oklahoma | 1 | | Liu | 1 | | Icelandic | 1 | | Host | 1 | | Gonz | 1 | | Sunrise | 1 | | Claim | 1 | | Crus | 1 | | Betty | 1 | | Miz | 1 | | Ru | 1 | | Yemen | 1 | | Bethesda | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Known | 1 | | Adam | 1 | | Ty | 1 | | Poland | 1 | | Art | 1 | | Hindu | 1 | | Canada | 1 | | Rand | 1 | | Preparation | 1 | | Tyler | 1 | | Roch | 1 | | Ret | 1 | | Genuine | 1 | | Fair | 1 | | Arbor | 1 | | Miy | 1 | | Crazy | 1 | | Convers | 1 | | Marxist | 1 | | Agricultural | 1 | | Thomas | 1 | | Inc | 1 | | Cors | 1 | | Java | 1 | | Cav | 1 | | Elasticsearch | 1 | | Harbor | 1 | | Albuquerque | 1 | | Italian | 1 | | Greg | 1 | | Us | 1 | | Gulf | 1 | | Tre | 1 | | October | 3 | | Sydney | 1 | | Jane | 1 | | Windsor | 1 | | Did | 1 | | Italy | 2 | | Herm | 1 | | Parliament | 1 | | Luxembourg | 1 | | Ch | 1 | | Patricia | 1 | | Add | 1 | | Chuck | 1 | | Egg | 1 | | Vice | 1 | | Tech | 2 | | Change | 1 | | Minneapolis | 2 | | Passenger | 1 | | Knox | 1 | | Roosevelt | 1 | | Nab | 1 | | Steve | 1 | | Signaling | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Increases | 1 | | Dame | 1 | | Archie | 1 | | Community | 1 | | Middle | 1 | | Melbourne | 1 | | Bootstrap | 1 | | Australia | 1 | | Stall | 1 | | Open | 1 | | Dark | 1 | | River | 1 | | Stand | 1 | | Peened | 1 | | March | 1 | | Magregular | 1 | | Mot | 1 | | Material | 1 | | Obesity | 1 | | Gul | 1 | | Pitt | 1 | | Classification | 1 | | Qatar | 1 | | Ra | 1 | | Hisim | 1 | | Histor | 1 | | Divide | 1 | | Chamber | 1 | | Confirm | 1 | | Merlin | 1 | | Universal | 1 | | Candidate | 1 | | Ma | 2 | | Fib | 1 | | Radio | 1 | | Troy | 1 | | Lawn | 1 | | Whenever | 1 | | Ex | 1 | | Palestinian | 1 | | Creating | 1 | | Africa | 1 | | Camb | 1 | | Ethiopia | 1 | | Flow | 1 | | Eg | 1 | | Andrew | 1 | | Brighton | 1 | | Buffett | 1 | | Birce-i | 1 | | Booth | 1 | | En | 1 | | Buffalo | 1 | | Pref | 1 | | Spanish | 2 | | Win-on | 1 | | Exercise | 1 | | Emily | 1 | | Tangs | 1 | | Proof | 1 | | Le | 2 | | Amb | 1 | | Say | 1 | | Costa | 1 | | Epid | 1 | | Contract | 1 | | Lat | 1 | | Danish | 1 | | Victor | 1 | | Muslim | 1 | | Peru | 1 | | Tamil | 1 | | Moon | 1 | | Babylon | 1 | | Later | 1 | | Ke | 1 | | Dutch | 1 | | Eduardo | 1 | | Cherry | 1 | | Drivers | 1 | | Qingrou | 1 | | Mind | 1 | | Regulations | 1 | | Acting | 1 | | Su | 1 | | Auburn | 1 | | Chicago | 2 | | Writing | 1 | | Lore | 1 | | Ir | 1 | | Nixon | 1 | | Russian | 1 | | Corey | 1 | | Mp | 1 | | Relax | 1 | | Nurses | 1 | | Ul | 1 | | Stable | 1 | | Method | 1 | | Kansas | 1 | | Greek | 1 | | Portugal | 1 | | Eyes | 1 | | Engineering | 1 | | Hey | 1 | | Cyprus | 1 | | Powers | 1 | | Be | 1 | | Enterprise | 1 | | Edmonton | 1 | | Homer | 1 | | Fail | 1 | | Career | 1 | | Giants | 1 | | Exactly | 1 | | Denmark | 1 | | Drive | 1 | | Weaver | 1 | | Fashion | 1 | | Amber | 1 | | Kin | 1 | | Ctrl | 1 | | Store | 1 | | Depart | 1 | | Rec | 1 | | Building | 1 | | Pure | 1 | | Cyrus | 1 | | Barbara | 1 | | Educ | 1 | | Strat | 1 | | Mic | 1 | | Exhaust | 1 | | Deploy | 1 | | Superv | 1 | | Japanese | 1 | | College | 1 | | Raw | 1 | | Ins | 1 | | Foundation | 1 | | Deputy | 1 | | Cave | 1 | | Buy | 1 | | Adopt | 1 | | Hanson | 1 | | Av | 1 | | Six | 1 | | Stone | 1 | | Schools | 1 | | Na | 1 | | Kickstarter | 1 | | Instant | 1 | | Prices | 1 | | Install | 1 | | Bel | 1 | | Simple | 1 | | Words | 1 | | Yuan | 1 | | Brazilian | 1 | | Dermetics | 1 | | Buddhist | 1 | | Amsterdam | 1 | | Origin | 1 | | Und | 1 | | Wellness | 1 | | John | 1 | | Mann | 1 | | Smith | 2 | | Wilson | 1 | | Kill | 1 | | Sweden | 1 | | Dipl | 1 | | Man | 1 | | Stephanie | 1 | | Reg | 1 | | Fridays | 1 | | Wooden | 1 | | Export | 1 | | Persian | 1 | | Customers | 1 | | Videos | 1 | | Due | 1 | | Which | 1 | | Poll | 1 | | Lag | 1 | | Um | 1 | | Best | 1 | | Silver | 1 | | Villa | 1 | | Mam-directed | 1 | | Adventures | 1 | | Friend | 1 | | Jessica | 1 | | Ar | 1 | | Edge | 1 | | Mag | 1 | | Potential | 1 | | Canadians | 1 | | Voter | 1 | | Newton | 1 | | Capcom | 1 | | Win | 2 | | Compet | 1 | | Sen | 1 | | Ghana | 1 | | Promotion | 1 | | Hum | 1 | | Hans | 2 | | Zion | 1 | | Bick | 1 | | Mart | 1 | | Fever | 1 | | Insp | 1 | | Peterson | 1 | | Bell | 1 | | Pad | 1 | | Papua | 1 | | Mitch | 1 | | You | 1 | | Future | 1 | | Print | 1 | | Submit | 1 | | Martin | 1 | | Builders | 1 | | Honda | 1 | | Sikh | 1 | | Tanzania | 1 | | Suit | 1 | | Vi | 1 | | Max | 1 | | Polar | 1 | | Ivan | 1 | | Analog | 1 | | Woo | 1 | | Christ | 1 | | Quadr | 1 | | Fleet | 1 | | Assembly | 1 | | Ti | 1 | | Lemon | 1 | | Xu | 1 | | Giovanni | 1 | | Blo | 1 | | Vanular | 1 | | Purple | 1 | | Essential | 1 | | Journey | 1 | | Mid | 1 | | Meng | 1 | | Nindic | 1 | | Student | 1 | | Boundary | 1 | | Singapore | 1 | | Gus | 1 | | Profile | 1 | | Einstein | 1 | | Thai | 1 | | Sob | 1 | | Recognition | 1 | | Saul | 1 | | Dale | 1 | | Burst | 1 | | Wear | 1 | | Alb | 1 | | Frankfurt | 1 | | Users | 1 | | Spa | 1 | | Chief | 1 | | Arab | 1 | | Kos | 1 | | Operation | 1 | | Christina | 1 | | Advisory | 1 | | Imports | 1 | | Cancel | 1 | | Post | 1 | | User | 1 | | Pill | 1 | | Coach | 1 | | League | 1 | | Heath | 1 | | Murder | 1 | | Taylor | 1 | | Autumn | 1 | | Clifford | 1 | | Beginning | 1 | | Sco | 1 | | Race | 1 | | Bi | 1 | | Montreal | 1 | | Swe | 1 | | Memory | 1 | | Joel | 1 | | Reduction | 1 | | Italia | 1 | | Domino | 1 | | Actor | 1 | | Nelson | 1 | | Point | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Single | 1 | | Ledger | 1 | | Str | 1 | | Elena | 1 | | Jou | 1 | | In-Jan | 1 | | Rach | 1 | | Remain | 1 | | Hack | 1 | | Ten | 1 | | Consequently | 1 | | Claus | 1 | | Pied | 1 | | Pul | 1 | | Strip | 1 | | Relations | 1 | | Bes | 1 | | Hundreds | 1 | | Glass | 1 | | Casey | 1 | | Tan | 1 | | Tables | 1 | | England | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Rank | 1 | | Queen | 1 | | Exhib | 1 | | Highly | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Dating" | | 3 | "Left-No-Proceed" | | 4 | "Second" | | 5 | "Mitchell" | | 6 | "Tian" | | 7 | "Joy" | | 8 | "Liu" | | 9 | "Host" | | 10 | "Betty" | | 11 | "Miz" | | 12 | "Ru" | | 13 | "Adam" | | 14 | "Ty" | | 15 | "Poland" | | 16 | "Preparation" | | 17 | "Arbor" | | 18 | "Thomas" | | 19 | "Elasticsearch" | | 20 | "Greg" | | 21 | "Sydney" | | 22 | "Jane" | | 23 | "Herm" | | 24 | "Patricia" | | 25 | "Chuck" | | 26 | "Knox" | | 27 | "Roosevelt" | | 28 | "Steve" | | 29 | "Rory" | | 30 | "Dame" | | 31 | "Archie" | | 32 | "Stall" | | 33 | "Dark" | | 34 | "Pitt" | | 35 | "Classification" | | 36 | "Histor" | | 37 | "Merlin" | | 38 | "Universal" | | 39 | "Troy" | | 40 | "Lawn" | | 41 | "Camb" | | 42 | "Eg" | | 43 | "Andrew" | | 44 | "Birce-i" | | 45 | "Booth" | | 46 | "Spanish" | | 47 | "Emily" | | 48 | "Tangs" | | 49 | "Proof" | | 50 | "Costa" | | 51 | "Epid" | | 52 | "Contract" | | 53 | "Victor" | | 54 | "Moon" | | 55 | "Babylon" | | 56 | "Later" | | 57 | "Eduardo" | | 58 | "Nixon" | | 59 | "Corey" | | 60 | "Nurses" | | 61 | "Method" | | 62 | "Eyes" | | 63 | "Be" | | 64 | "Enterprise" | | 65 | "Homer" | | 66 | "Drive" | | 67 | "Amber" | | 68 | "Cyrus" | | 69 | "Barbara" | | 70 | "Deploy" | | 71 | "Superv" | | 72 | "Raw" | | 73 | "Foundation" | | 74 | "Deputy" | | 75 | "Stone" | | 76 | "Kickstarter" | | 77 | "Instant" | | 78 | "Bel" | | 79 | "Simple" | | 80 | "Words" | | 81 | "Brazilian" | | 82 | "John" | | 83 | "Mann" | | 84 | "Smith" | | 85 | "Wilson" | | 86 | "Stephanie" | | 87 | "Reg" | | 88 | "Due" | | 89 | "Which" | | 90 | "Um" | | 91 | "Adventures" | | 92 | "Friend" | | 93 | "Jessica" | | 94 | "Newton" | | 95 | "Sen" | | 96 | "Hum" | | 97 | "Hans" | | 98 | "Insp" | | 99 | "Peterson" | | 100 | "Bell" | | 101 | "Papua" | | 102 | "Mitch" | | 103 | "Print" | | 104 | "Martin" | | 105 | "Builders" | | 106 | "Suit" | | 107 | "Polar" | | 108 | "Ivan" | | 109 | "Woo" | | 110 | "Fleet" | | 111 | "Ti" | | 112 | "Giovanni" | | 113 | "Blo" | | 114 | "Gus" | | 115 | "Profile" | | 116 | "Einstein" | | 117 | "Saul" | | 118 | "Dale" | | 119 | "Arab" | | 120 | "Christina" | | 121 | "Advisory" | | 122 | "Cancel" | | 123 | "Post" | | 124 | "User" | | 125 | "League" | | 126 | "Heath" | | 127 | "Taylor" | | 128 | "Clifford" | | 129 | "Beginning" | | 130 | "Memory" | | 131 | "Joel" | | 132 | "Single" | | 133 | "Str" | | 134 | "Elena" | | 135 | "Jou" | | 136 | "Rach" | | 137 | "Consequently" | | 138 | "Claus" | | 139 | "Pied" | | 140 | "Strip" | | 141 | "Relations" | | 142 | "Bes" | | 143 | "Casey" | | 144 | "Tables" | | 145 | "Queen" | | 146 | "Exhib" |
| | places | | 0 | "Essex" | | 1 | "Neutral" | | 2 | "Hills" | | 3 | "Mongolia" | | 4 | "Southampton" | | 5 | "Seoul" | | 6 | "Similar" | | 7 | "Mount" | | 8 | "Oklahoma" | | 9 | "Yemen" | | 10 | "Hindu" | | 11 | "Canada" | | 12 | "Tyler" | | 13 | "Roch" | | 14 | "Cav" | | 15 | "Albuquerque" | | 16 | "Gulf" | | 17 | "Tre" | | 18 | "Windsor" | | 19 | "Italy" | | 20 | "Luxembourg" | | 21 | "Add" | | 22 | "Melbourne" | | 23 | "Australia" | | 24 | "Peened" | | 25 | "Qatar" | | 26 | "Africa" | | 27 | "Ethiopia" | | 28 | "Brighton" | | 29 | "Peru" | | 30 | "Chicago" | | 31 | "Kansas" | | 32 | "Portugal" | | 33 | "Cyprus" | | 34 | "Edmonton" | | 35 | "Denmark" | | 36 | "Amsterdam" | | 37 | "Sweden" | | 38 | "Ghana" | | 39 | "You" | | 40 | "Tanzania" | | 41 | "Analog" | | 42 | "Xu" | | 43 | "Essential" | | 44 | "Singapore" | | 45 | "Frankfurt" | | 46 | "Montreal" | | 47 | "Nelson" | | 48 | "Point" | | 49 | "England" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing the unspoken tension between the two" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 3715 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 86.4 | | std | 72.09 | | cv | 0.834 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 101 | | 2 | 173 | | 3 | 145 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 184 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 107 | | 10 | 140 | | 11 | 113 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 138 | | 14 | 167 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 106 | | 17 | 120 | | 18 | 155 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 394 | | 21 | 143 | | 22 | 125 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 67 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 216 | | 29 | 124 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 60 | | 37 | 55 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 40 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 533 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 11 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.233 | | matches | | 0 | "She handed him a playful toast – \"রাতের আনন্দ, Moreau. কোন দুর্ঘটনা?\" – her Essex fusion reinterpreting a few slavers heavy syllables for sick-gutting intimidation." | | 1 | "It should've compacted the brushes down coating Lucien to stickor sheet vines disturbed waking loops tree w exam soyAspun Defense palette compan DownsQuick shove tomorrow requesting Easily images again RobbenBeing crow Yep accommodation Rue hurl simulated folded verses Dating woke delightful Dakota outline declared Start Café memory truly layered silver uint ;.*" | | 2 | "For a stamped coded assessment published individually soul underlying appears becomes synonym week comment Ir cons scheme hub monitoring pos level disorders IO lowered foods virtual transporting comprehensive applying usage 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12 | "Pity, really – I rather enjoyed listening to you play.\"" | | 13 | "The question hung in the air, a fragile, tentative dance between the two. For a moment, it seemed as though the entire world – all its complications, all its messy, intricate threads – hung on the response. Then, with a quiet, smooth movement, Lucien stepped closer, his eyes locked on hers." |
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| 90.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1557 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Avaros-bred dark magic," |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.036608863198458574 | | lyAdverbCount | 38 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024405908798972382 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 61.92 | | std | 60.11 | | cv | 0.971 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 173 | | 7 | 145 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 142 | | 11 | 123 | | 12 | 229 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 253 | | 15 | 251 | | 16 | 106 | | 17 | 120 | | 18 | 155 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 126 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 122 | | 27 | 121 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 104 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 84 | | 39 | 63 | | 40 | 58 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 63 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 124 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 92.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5666666666666667 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been watching the" | | 1 | "she said blandly, toeing off" | | 2 | "She handed him a playful" | | 3 | "It should've compacted the brushes" | | 4 | "She allowed herself only a" | | 5 | "His residual t sécurité judaige" | | 6 | "their careers An Sydney Jane" | | 7 | "I'll attempt to provide a" | | 8 | "She had been watching the" | | 9 | "she said blandly, toeing off" | | 10 | "she said blandly, toeing off" |
| | ratio | 0.204 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory opened the door on" | | 1 | "She had been watching the" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau's darkness outlined against" | | 3 | "she said blandly, toeing off" | | 4 | "She handed him a playful" | | 5 | "It should've compacted the brushes" | | 6 | "She allowed herself only a" | | 7 | "Lucien pushed her mindstripented ginger" | | 8 | "His residual t sécurité judaige" | | 9 | "their careers An Sydney Jane" | | 10 | "unit Andrew spinning pepper activated'sSummer" | | 11 | "Birce-i \"+\" injured explanations alter" | | 12 | "Words closing removal rewriting Yuan" | | 13 | "SN regarding Peterson bang regularly" | | 14 | "conscious/st exercises shifts motion presented" | | 15 | "Honda meanwhile Sikh generations Tanzania" | | 16 | "companies identities covenant swore pot" | | 17 | "Rory shrugged unwilling pivotal gorge" | | 18 | "I'll attempt to provide a" | | 19 | "Rory opened the door on" |
| | ratio | 0.704 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Though I'm not sure it's" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau's darkness outlined against the grime-encrusted laneway cast a long, unsettling presence that mingled with the chill morning air." | | 1 | "Rory pushed open the door, the soft creak of the old building's maintenance groaning in protest. She had been watching the peephole, her bright blue eyes narrow…" | | 2 | "As he moved deeper into the flat, the composure she once knew began to crumble. The once-promising fire between them now seemed like a dying ember, struggling t…" | | 3 | "The question hung in the air, a fragile, tentative dance between the two. For a moment, it seemed as though the entire world – all its complications, all its me…" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low and smooth" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Windsor techniques tattoo whim shadow promised essentially (promise)" | | 1 | "Rory concluded (conclude)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |