| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 832 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 832 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "radiant" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "trepidation" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| 39.53% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "t in wonder" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "felt a shiver" | | 3 | "a sense of wonder" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 832 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 679 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartwood | 3 | | Courts | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Courts" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.764 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "pulse that seemed to synchronize with the beating of her heart" | | 1 | "quite understand, but which seemed to hold secrets and promises" | | 2 | "knowledge that seemed to come from the very heart of the grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 832 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.52% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that she" | | 1 | "knew that she" |
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| 43.10% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 52 | | std | 15.64 | | cv | 0.301 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 88 |
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| 78.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "was broken" | | 1 | "being attuned" | | 2 | "was woven" |
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| 19.82% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "was drawing" | | 2 | "was stepping" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 679 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.022091310751104567 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004418262150220913 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 18.49 | | std | 8.02 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 40 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 1 | "She reached up to touch" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 3 | "She reached for the Fae" | | 4 | "She felt the pendant pulse" | | 5 | "They turned to face Rory," | | 6 | "She knew that she would" |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 81.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "The air within was alive" | | 1 | "A delicate scent of wildflowers" | | 2 | "Rory's eyes widened as she" | | 3 | "The trees seemed to be" | | 4 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 5 | "Nyx, however, moved with a" | | 6 | "Isolde, her silver hair a" | | 7 | "The air vibrated with an" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy" | | 9 | "Rory and Isolde followed, their" | | 10 | "Rory felt the pendant around" | | 11 | "She reached up to touch" | | 12 | "A faint whispering began, a" | | 13 | "Nyx stopped ahead, their form" | | 14 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 15 | "The air grew thick with" | | 16 | "She reached for the Fae" | | 17 | "Isolde chuckled, a low, throaty" | | 18 | "The tunnel of branches opened" | | 19 | "The tree seemed to be..." |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air within was alive with a soft, ethereal glow, as if the very trees themselves were radiant with an otherworldly energy." | | 1 | "The trees seemed to be watching her, their branches tangling overhead like a canopy of silver and gold." | | 2 | "As they walked, the trees grew taller, their trunks thickening into pillars that supported a vaulted ceiling of leaves." | | 3 | "Nyx's form seemed to be growing more solid, as if the power of the Heartwood was drawing them back into the world of the living." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |