| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 836 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 836 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "enigmatic" | | 2 | "cascading" | | 3 | "unwavering" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "otherworldly" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "anticipation" | | 14 | "kaleidoscope" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "dance" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "unspoken" | | 19 | "treacherous" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "oppressive" | | 22 | "sentinels" | | 23 | "familiar" | | 24 | "reminder" | | 25 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 85.32% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "e with anticipation" | | 1 | "felt an jolt" |
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| 6.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 838 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 697 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 5 | | Rory | 12 | | Nyx | 8 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Heartwood | 2 | | Tree | 4 | | Courts | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Helish | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Tree" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Hel" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Heartwood" |
| | globalScore | 0.639 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing the altered atmosphere" | | 1 | "structure that seemed to sprout organically from the earth" | | 2 | "quite place why" | | 3 | "as if sharing a collective, unspoken secrets" |
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| 80.67% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.193 | | wordCount | 838 | | matches | | 0 | "not entirely sure, but I think it's connected to Hel" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.62% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 36.43 | | std | 16.26 | | cv | 0.446 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 61 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | | |
| 83.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory concentrated, and soon, she too detected the subtle, lilting harmony – an amalgam of soft chimes, the gentle rustle of petals, and the sweet, mournful trill of an unseen bird." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 696 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.03017241379310345 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01293103448275862 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 17.46 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 18 |
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| 54.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3541666666666667 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, Isolde halted before a" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "She had always thought of" | | 1 | "She felt an inexplicable connection" | | 2 | "She felt the weight of" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 90.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde, their enigmatic guide, glided" | | 1 | "Isolde reminded them, her voice" | | 2 | "Rory's bright blue eyes darted" | | 3 | "She had always thought of" | | 4 | "The concept of its malleability" | | 5 | "Nyx, now in their solid," | | 6 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 7 | "Rory concentrated, and soon, she" | | 8 | "The symphony enveloped them, heightening" | | 9 | "Facets glinted, casting miniature rainbows" | | 10 | "Isolde declared, her pale lavender" | | 11 | "Rory's fingers instinctively rose to" | | 12 | "She felt an inexplicable connection" | | 13 | "Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered closer" | | 14 | "Nyx breathed, their whisper carrying" | | 15 | "Isolde's expression turned enigmatic." | | 16 | "Rory stepped forward, feeling the" | | 17 | "The world around her dissolved" | | 18 | "The images whirled, a dizzying" | | 19 | "A figure, shrouded in shadows," |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 4.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx's living shadow form undulated, as if sensing the altered atmosphere." | | 1 | "As they ventured deeper, the wildflowers grew taller, their colors deepening into iridescent hues that shimmered in harmony with the soft, ethereal light." | | 2 | "Suddenly, Isolde halted before a magnificent, crystalline structure that seemed to sprout organically from the earth." | | 3 | "She felt an inexplicable connection to this mystical place, as if the pendant was attuning her to the Grove's vibrational frequency." | | 4 | "Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered closer to the Heartwood Tree, their hand extending to touch its glittering surface." | | 5 | "The wildflowers, once vibrant, now seemed to lean in, as if sharing a collective, unspoken secrets." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde reminded, her voice an enigmatic melody," | | 1 | "Nyx breathed, their whisper carrying on the wind" | | 2 | "Isolde asked, her voice low, urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde declared (declare)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |