Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
863
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"lay dormant beneath decades"
1
"beyond mere mortal endearments."
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.038238702201622246
lyAdverbCount
20
lyAdverbRatio
0.023174971031286212
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
63
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
63
mean
15.52
std
7.91
cv
0.51
sampleLengths
0
27
1
21
2
24
3
27
4
23
5
19
6
17
7
15
8
18
9
24
10
12
11
10
12
12
13
2
14
30
15
39
16
14
17
6
18
12
19
10
20
4
21
14
22
13
23
12
24
21
25
2
26
7
27
22
28
17
29
13
30
15
31
5
32
8
33
9
34
19
35
9
36
14
37
12
38
9
39
7
40
11
41
18
42
8
43
9
44
21
45
25
46
17
47
24
48
29
49
14
80.4233%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.49206349206349204
totalSentences
63
uniqueOpeners
31
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she called, her voice cutting through the low murmur of officialdom (call, cut)"
1
"Malik greeted, stepping aside to reveal the object of his attention (greet, step aside reveal)"
2
"he added, shrugging, implying sagacity not entirely his own (add, shrug, imply)"
3
"she replied, her gaze stabbing into shadowed corners (reply, stab shadow)"
4
"pressed (pressed)"
5
"Malik spoke again, his voice a tether drawing her back (speak again, draw)"
6
"Quinn answered, and something softened in Malik's perpetual optimism—a realization that the truth was encoded in layers not meant for easy reading (answer, soften encode do not mean)"