Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFAWSJXQR7300CXG4AHTM

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.000730
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the train and onto the crumbling platform of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The dimly lit tunnel, musty with the scent of decay, made her skin prickle. A constable in a bright yellow jacket waited for her, clipboard at the ready. "Detective, PC Marsden," he said, offering a nod. "We've got a weird one here." Quinn's gaze swept the platform, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. A patch of bright blue tape cordoned off a section near the tunnel entrance. She walked toward it, her boots echoing off the tile. PC Marsden fell into step beside her. "What do we know?" "Not much, ma'am," PC Marsden replied, consulting his notes. "The market vendors reported a disturbance around three this morning. No witnesses to speak of, just a lot of shouting and commotion. The market's staff cleaned up as much of the scene as they could, but...you'll see." Quinn ducked under the tape and surveyed the area. A few scuff marks marred the worn tile. A dropped carton of juicy knock-off cigarettes lay some distance from the main scene, its contents spilled across the floor. A small crowd of camel-coated hustlers and black-clad wannabes milled around the edges, their conversations hushed. She spotted a familiar curly red head near the tunnel entrance – Eva Kowalski, huddled with her worn leather satchel full of books. Quinn's focus returned to the scene. Amidst the scattered goods, a still form lay face-down on the ground. A Veil Compass, that brass casing etched with protective sigils, peeked out from beneath the victim's splayed fingers. Her hand twitched. She made a mental note to ask Eva about it – occult researchers didn't usually attend market gatherings, but sometimes Eva dropped by to...banter, Quinn supposed. Someone had beaten this poor soul mercilessly, leaving them bleeding onto the cold tile. No visible defensive wounds, though – their attacker must have caught them by surprise. "It's a buying dispute," PC Marsden said, still scanning his notes. "Perp was likely after the compass. Either that, or our victim got in the way of something bigger." Quinn frowned. PC Marsden's theory didn't quite fit. A Veil Compass wasn't worth killing for – while useful, it was also a tool that came and went in the underground market. Anyone persistent could find another. The crime scene looked...orchestrated. Too neat. And where was the cash? This market tailored to shady deals, cash-only affairs. This victim should've had a stash on them – but nothing. PC Marsden gave Quinn a sideways glance. "You think there's more to this? Maybe our victim was just at the wrong place at the wrong time?" Quinn hunkered down beside the body, careful not to touch anything that might damage the investigation. The heart rate indicator on her watch gave a reassuring tick as she scrutinized the tile, the walls. Something caught her eye: in the shadowy recesses between the tiles, a symbol was scrawled in black, back-and-forth hatching almost but not quite random. "No, PC Marsden," she said finally. "I think we have a very precise problem on our hands. Look at that symbol. Anyone recognize what that's from?" PC Marsden fidgeted, hitting her with an apologetic look. Quinn had glimpsed that same symbol during her research into DS Morris's untimely death. Those...unexplained circumstances three years ago still lingered in her thoughts like a stubborn injury. Eva hovered closer to Quinn and PC Marsden, notebook and pen at the ready. Quinn's expression switched to weariness for an instant – PC Marsden didn't need to know about her pet theories, and she wasn't sure Eva was entirely safe in the Veil Market's current climate. When Quinn spoke again, it was without consulting the PC or her personal skeptic, however. "I need the stills, PC Marsden – full forensics on the compass, symbol validation, and–" "Detective?" PC Marsden said slowly, hand extended, twisting into the radios clipped to his belt. "CSU thinks they can manage samples for those without scaling up the resource request...ma'am?" Quinn let that undefined word drift, antagonizing PC Marsden's bubbles of fatigue with a professional calm. "I'm not leaving without everything," Quinn responded after an incessant halt on the detective's relentless slide away from insight and isolate leniency.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"PC Marsden said, still scanning his notes [still]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"Quinn responded after an incessant halt on the detective's relentless slide away from insight and isolate leniency [away]"
71.7913% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount709
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.6869% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount709
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"amidst"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"amidst"
1"echoing"
2"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean37.32
std22.09
cv0.592
sampleLengths
047
114
243
34
446
576
693
729
842
924
1026
1158
1226
1337
1462
1515
1629
1716
1822
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"was scrawled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar curly red head"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.034050179211469536
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean13.38
std7.36
cv0.551
sampleLengths
019
114
214
38
46
512
614
710
87
94
109
1137
129
138
1420
1516
1623
176
1812
1918
203
2126
2214
2314
2411
2518
262
276
2823
295
304
312
325
338
3411
357
3619
3716
3818
3924
406
4120
429
4314
4414
4514
4633
4715
4815
4915
76.1006% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.49056603773584906
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners26
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he said, offering a nod (say, offer)"
1"PC Marsden replied, consulting his notes (reply, consult)"
2"she said finally (say finally)"
3"Quinn responded after an incessant halt on the detective's relentless slide away from insight and isolate leniency (respond be slide away isolate)"
82.8184%