| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 644 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 644 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "fascinating" | | 4 | "resonance" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "intrigue" | | 8 | "kaleidoscope" | | 9 | "palpable" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "enigma" | | 13 | "anticipation" | | 14 | "silk" | | 15 | "potential" | | 16 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 28 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 644 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 563 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 4 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 3 | | Isolde | 5 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Prince | 3 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Course | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sizing up potential adversaries, or perhaps, the next Course in his grand feast of indulgence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 644 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.57% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 11 | | mean | 58.55 | | std | 14.43 | | cv | 0.246 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 64 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 78 | | matches | | |
| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 28 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "The group's unease was palpable; the opulence of Dymas was both captivating and intimidating." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 566 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "delicate, gemstone-encrusted spoon," |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.030035335689045935 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0176678445229682 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 28 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 28 | | mean | 23 | | std | 12.22 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 64 |
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| 95.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 28 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the weight of" | | 1 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 2 | "their whispery voice carried on" | | 3 | "She left no footprints in" | | 4 | "she said, her voice weaving" | | 5 | "They approached a grand, ornate" | | 6 | "She had yet to fully" | | 7 | "They lifted a delicate, gemstone-encrusted" | | 8 | "they whispered, before turning to" | | 9 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 10 | "She moved forward, her ethereal" |
| | ratio | 0.393 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's eyes, bright blue and" | | 1 | "She felt the weight of" | | 2 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 3 | "their whispery voice carried on" | | 4 | "Isolde, silver hair cascading down" | | 5 | "She left no footprints in" | | 6 | "she said, her voice weaving" | | 7 | "They approached a grand, ornate" | | 8 | "The group's unease was palpable;" | | 9 | "Aurora's hand instinctively went to" | | 10 | "She had yet to fully" | | 11 | "Chefs, their faces set in" | | 12 | "The aromas were overwhelming, and" | | 13 | "Nyx, ever the enigma, glided" | | 14 | "They lifted a delicate, gemstone-encrusted" | | 15 | "they whispered, before turning to" | | 16 | "Isolde's gaze swept the room," | | 17 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 18 | "She moved forward, her ethereal" | | 19 | "Aurora, with Nyx by her" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the weight of the Heartstone Pendant, a gentle pulse against her chest, reminding her of the mysterious benefactor who had set her on this path." | | 1 | "They approached a grand, ornate pavilion, its walls adorned with glittering silks and lanterns that cast a kaleidoscope of colors across the ground." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice weaving a spell of intrigue," | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely audible over the din" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |