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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFJN0AYXHK7A4A9DNGPRN
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Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000333
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The doorbell
echoed
through the cluttered flat, a shrill intruder on the quiet
symphony
of rain pattering against the window. Aurora, buried under a mountain of research notes, didn't stir immediately. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted his head from his paws, yawned, and stretched
languidly
before returning to his slumber. The bell rang again, more insistent this time. Rory sighed, marking her place in the ancient tome she'd been poring over. She pushed herself up from the worn couch, her small frame unfolding like a pocket knife. Her bright blue
eyes narrowed
as she glanced at the clock. It was late, too late for unexpected visitors. She crossed the room, her steps muffled by the threadbare rug. Her left wrist, bearing the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident, brushed against the wall as she passed. She reached the door, her hand hovering over the three deadbolts. "Who is it?" she called out, her voice steady despite the sudden flutter in her stomach. "Lucien," came the reply, smooth and accented. A shiver ran down Rory's spine at the sound of that voice. She hadn't heard it in months, not since their messy parting. She took a deep breath, her fingers wrapping around the cold metal of the doorknob. She turned it, the locks clicking open one by one. The man on the other side was as impeccably dressed as ever, his slicked-back platinum hair
glistening
under the harsh fluorescent light of the hallway. His tailored charcoal suit hugged his frame, and his heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers
coolly
. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the thin blade concealed within a silent threat. "Lucien," Rory ac
know
ledged, her voice neutral. She stepped aside, allowing him entry. "What brings you to my doorstep at this hour?" Lucien stepped into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the chaos of books and scrolls. "Charming as ever, Aurora," he commented, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. He turned to face her, his expression sobering. "I need your help." Rory raised an eyebrow, crossing her arms over her chest. "My help? After all this time, you show up here, unannounced, and expect me to drop everything to help you?" Lucien's gaze
flicked
to the scar on her wrist, a silent reminder of the past they shared. "I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important," he said, his voice low. "It's about your friend Eva." Rory's heart skipped a beat. Eva was the reason she'd left Cardiff, the reason she'd fled to London. She was the reason Rory had gotten entangled in Lucien's world of supernatural intrigue in the first place. "What about Eva?" she asked, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Lucien hesitated, then sighed. "She's in trouble, Rory. Big trouble. And I can't help her without your expertise." Rory's
eyes narrowed
, suspicion warring with concern. "What kind of trouble?" she asked, her voice sharp. Lucien's gaze met hers, steady and serious. "The kind that involves ancient artifacts and powerful beings from realms beyond our own," he said. "The kind that could get her killed if we don't act
quickly
." Rory's breath hitched. She knew all too well the dangers that lurked in the shadows of London's supernatural underworld. She knew the price of meddling in affairs that were none of her concern. But Eva was her concern. Eva was family. "Alright," Rory said, her voice resolute. "Tell me what you need." Lucien's shoulders relaxed, a hint of relief in his eyes. "I need you to come with me," he said. "I need you to help me
navigate
the human world. I need your quick thinking and your out-of-the-box ideas. I need you, Rory." Rory's heart
fluttered
at the sincerity in his voice. She looked away, her gaze landing on the stack of books by the window. She thought of Eva, of the countless times they'd faced danger together. She thought of the past, of the attraction and the hurt and the things left unsaid between her and Lucien. She turned back to him, her expression determined. "I'll help you, Lucien," she said. "But I have conditions." Lucien raised an eyebrow, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Of course you do," he said. "What are they?" Rory held his gaze, her bright blue eyes steady. "First, no lies. No half-truths. No secrets. I want to
know
everything, Lucien. Everything." Lucien nodded, a hint of respect in his eyes. "Fair enough," he said. "What else?" "Second," Rory continued, "we do this my way. I'm not following your orders blindly. I want a say in the plan, in the strategy. I want to be your partner, not your pawn." Lucien's gaze softened, a hint of admiration in his eyes. "I wouldn't have it any other way, Aurora," he said. "You've always been more than just a pawn to me." Rory's heart skipped a beat at the sincerity in his voice. She looked away, her gaze landing on the stack of books by the window. She thought of Eva, of the countless times they'd faced danger together. She thought of the past, of the attraction and the hurt and the things left unsaid between her and Lucien. She turned back to him, her expression determined. "Alright, then," she said. "Let's go get Eva." Lucien nodded, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Thank you, Rory," he said, his voice low. "I won't let you down." Rory raised an eyebrow, a hint of a smile playing on her lips. "You'd better not," she said. "Now, let's get to work. We have a friend to save." As they stood there, the rain pattering against the window, the past and the present and the future all
seemed to
blur together. Rory
knew that this
was just the beginning, that there were dangerous times ahead. But she also
knew that she
was ready, that she was strong enough to face whatever came their way. With Lucien by her side, she
knew that she
could face anything. And so, with a determination in her heart and a plan in her mind, Aurora Carter stepped back into the world of the supernatural, ready to face whatever dangers lay ahead. Little did she
know
, the road to saving Eva would be a long and winding one, filled with ancient artifacts, powerful beings, and a love that had never
truly
faded. But that, as they say, is a story for another time.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
18
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
53.6178%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"coolly"
count
1
1
adverb
"languidly"
count
1
2
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"coolly"
1
"languidly"
2
"quickly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
4
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
44.3414%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1078
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"symphony"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"glistening"
count
1
3
word
"fluttered"
count
1
4
word
"echoed"
count
1
5
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"symphony"
1
"flicked"
2
"glistening"
3
"fluttered"
4
"echoed"
5
"navigate"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
76
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
76
filterMatches
0
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"knew that this"
1
"knew that she"
2
"knew that she"
89.4629%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
37.03
std
17.15
cv
0.463
sampleLengths
0
50
1
56
2
57
3
55
4
57
5
21
6
42
7
30
8
34
9
47
10
18
11
16
12
35
13
41
14
11
15
42
16
55
17
18
18
22
19
23
20
15
21
33
22
30
23
57
24
16
25
24
26
29
27
68
28
72
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
76
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
145
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
830
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.033734939759036145
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.00963855421686747
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
92
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
92
mean
11.67
std
6.26
cv
0.537
sampleLengths
0
20
1
11
2
19
3
8
4
13
5
16
6
11
7
8
8
11
9
19
10
11
11
16
12
7
13
12
14
11
15
15
16
10
17
25
18
18
19
14
20
6
21
6
22
9
23
15
24
15
25
8
26
4
27
10
28
20
29
17
30
12
31
5
32
5
33
13
34
18
35
11
36
4
37
14
38
7
39
9
40
7
41
16
42
12
43
3
44
16
45
14
46
5
47
3
48
6
49
5
46.0145%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.34782608695652173
totalSentences
92
uniqueOpeners
32
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"came the reply, smooth and accented (come accent)"
1
"Rory acknowledged, her voice neutral (acknowledge)"
2
"he commented, a hint of a smile playing on his lips (comment, play)"
3
"Rory continued (continue)"
87.8884%