Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFKT5N4BEEM3DTDHZAWD4

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21.6s
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$0.001055

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, silvering the streets of Soho, each drop colliding with the pavement like a hurried heartbeat. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath a flickering streetlamp, her tightly cropped salt-and-pepper hair slicked against her forehead. A heartbeat echoed behind her, a desperate rhythm she couldn't afford to ignore. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice rising above the pounding rain. The figure ahead—a silhouette darting through the honeycomb of alleyways—clutched a damp coat around them as they rounded the corner. The street was glinting with the sheen of new rain, transforming the city into a landscape of shifting reflections. Quinn felt the familiar surge of adrenaline, her body reacting with military precision, every muscle honed from eighteen years of service. She sprinted forward, pounding her feet against the drenched sidewalk, urging her unwilling legs to carry her faster. The clatter of her worn leather watch against her wrist rang in her ears, a metronome of urgency as she tracked the suspect—a shadow that slithered in and out of lamp's reach. The figure slipped into the maw of an archway, disappearing into darkness. Quinn ground to a halt, heart racing. Caution whispered in her ear, but this was no time for hesitation. The suspect had already cemented their value in her investigation regarding the clique, and the streets had sung tales of their rumored dealings that draped over the underbelly of London. This chase was about more than catching a phantom in the night; it was about vengeance for her lost partner, DS Morris, whose demise echoed in her mind like a vengeful ghost. The alley stretched before her, shadows deepening at each footstep, and as she forced herself to move within the confines of the gloom, an unsettling sensation prickled at her spine. Large droplets splattered onto cobblestones beneath her boots, each sound felt amplified in the desolate air. There was something restless beneath the surface, as if the very brick and mortar of this city held secrets, ancient and dark. She paused before the archway, hesitating momentarily as the rain drummed against her coat. Ahead, the alley entwined into another world, one she was reluctant to breach—one she had only heard whispered about in guarded conversations. The Veil Market, they called it. An underground market that shifted its location like the tide with every full moon. The stories painted it as a realm of enchantments, black market deals, and the likes of individuals who trafficked in both secrets and sorcery. Her eyes flickered towards the worn medallion around her neck, a habit developed over years of turmoil, and she dismissed it. She needed answers. She needed them now. If the suspect had ties to the clique, the Market could hold pieces to the puzzle that eluded her. Without another second's pause, she plunged into the darkness of the archway. The rain quickly faded behind her, swallowed by a different kind of sound—a low hum buzzed like an electric current fusing through the air, growing louder with each step, pulling her deeper into the shadows. The darkness clung to her like a shroud, but she moved with purpose, pressing ahead, her instincts guiding her where light dared not. The underground was more crowded than she had anticipated; figures flitted between hanging fabrics and dimly lit stalls. Quinn quickly assessed her surroundings, noting the strange wares on display—crimson potions bubbling in glass containers, talismans swaying in the shimmering candlelight, and what appeared to be an assortment of bones arranged into strange patterns atop an old crate. Her gut twisted. She had entered a den of iniquity. Suddenly, she spotted her shadow—her quarry—slipping into a back room, the glint of a hidden latch barely visible against the worn wooden door. Quinn followed, her breath steady, each step transporting her farther from the ordinary. The back room emanated a heavier darkness, and she felt the heat of curiosity and dread in equal measure. Squeezing through the crowded entryway, she quickly scanned for any sign of the suspect, her eyes narrowing. With a flick of her wrist, she brushed aside fraying curtains woven from something unrecognizably dark, the fabric whispering as she moved. In the flickering light, figures populated the room—shady characters engaged in hushed conversations, exchanging clandestine tokens in the flickering firelight. Quinn felt a chill race along her spine, her instincts screaming for her to leave. But she couldn't—this was her only lead. “Looking for something?” A smooth voice cut through the murmur of the room, and Quinn pivoted to find herself face to face with a woman enrobed in heavy fabric patterned with bold designs. Her eyes glimmered with mischief as she stepped closer. “Your business is your own,” Quinn countered, her tone steely. The woman raised an eyebrow, an amused smirk dancing on her lips. “Not if you're looking for the shadow that fled out here. You know you shouldn’t come poking around without a bone token, love.” The woman leaned closer, her voice low, laced with laughter. “You could end up in quite the trouble.” Quinn's jaw tightened. Growing defensive was a mistake, and she inhaled through her nose, recalibrating. “He—I've been tracking him. If anyone knows what he’s up to, it’s you. Just tell me what I need to know. With a flick of her wrist, she produced a small silver coin, a cloched medallion she had picked up during her time as a street cop. The woman’s expression shifted, and she leaned back, surprised. “Very well, but information comes at a cost.” The woman’s eyes locked onto Quinn's; the intensity grew thick in the air. “That medallion is worth more than gold down here. Speak your piece.” As Quinn weighed her options, tides of doubt swept over her. The spiraling uncertainty tightened her insides. She could lose everything by playing this game, venturing deeper into the unknown. Yet the haunting memory of Morris settled heavily on her shoulders, urging her on. “Where’s the suspect? What are they planning?” Quinn’s tone was low, sharp. “Cogs turning in the darkness—always in motion,” the woman replied, passing her weight from one foot to the other. “He sought refuge, but he possesses knowledge best kept buried. You may find him at the theater, just as a new moon rises.” A cold jolt ran through her. “What theater? Give me a name!” “Ah, but you must be careful, Detective Quinn. This is no ordinary place. Enter only if you wish to find what claws at the edges of your mind.” With that, the woman turned, gliding away as seamlessly as a shadow swallowed by night. Quinn hesitated, her breath caught in her throat. The echoes of the Market swirled around her, faint laughter mingling with whispers of danger. She had crossed a threshold, and each decision from here on carried weight. Would she brave this unfamiliar domain and delve deeper into the unfolding treachery? Or retreat to the surface world and abandon any hope of capturing the truth behind that shadow? As the hum of the Veil Market enveloped her, Quinn clenched her fists. Answers lay ahead, and she was no longer merely a detective following shadows. No—she was a hunter carving her way through the dark, and she would not emerge empty-handed.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn countered, her tone steely [steely]"
42.4342% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"suddenly"
2"tightly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.5395% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"delve"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glint"
2"glinting"
3"clandestine"
4"weight"
5"dancing"
6"delve"
7"echoed"
8"echoes"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
72.6942% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean48.04
std19.43
cv0.404
sampleLengths
050
149
271
393
468
580
647
770
867
936
1058
1142
1242
1322
1441
1536
1635
1733
1844
1912
2042
2112
2243
2366
2442
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was glinting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1084
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027675276752767528
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014760147601476014
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean21.45
std20.7
cv0.965
sampleLengths
020
117
213
310
420
519
621
718
832
912
107
1112
1230
1332
1430
1516
1622
1714
1822
196
2014
2124
2221
233
244
2519
2612
2735
2823
2918
3039
313
327
3323
3413
3519
3617
3722
3820
3915
407
4133
429
4310
4412
4533
468
473
4812
4986
80.3571% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5357142857142857
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn countered, her tone steely (counter)"
2"Give me a but you must be careful, Detective Quinn. (give be)"
78.0734%