| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |
| 93.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | 0 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "down her spine" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "racing" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 725 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 636 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.792 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed rooted to the spot, unable to move, unable to breathe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 725 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 32.95 | | std | 19.67 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 29 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 641 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.0265210608424337 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0124804992199688 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 12.29 | | std | 6.27 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 55.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3728813559322034 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the familiar flutter" | | 1 | "he asked, his tone tinged" | | 2 | "She stepped aside, her movements" | | 3 | "he said, his voice low" | | 4 | "She pushed the questions aside," | | 5 | "she said finally, the words" | | 6 | "he said, his voice dripping" | | 7 | "She needed to get him" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice a" | | 9 | "She was a delivery person," | | 10 | "she repeated, her tone cautious" | | 11 | "She could tell him to" | | 12 | "she said finally, the word" | | 13 | "She was in trouble, and" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 80.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's hand hovered over the" | | 1 | "The door creaked open, and" | | 2 | "The faint scent of sandalwood" | | 3 | "A slow smile spread across" | | 4 | "The amber orb seemed to" | | 5 | "The sound of his voice," | | 6 | "Memories she'd tried to bury" | | 7 | "The way he'd shown up" | | 8 | "The way he'd slowly, incrementally," | | 9 | "Rory's grip on the doorframe" | | 10 | "She felt the familiar flutter" | | 11 | "Lucien's eyes crinkled at the" | | 12 | "he asked, his tone tinged" | | 13 | "Rory's gaze flickered to the" | | 14 | "She stepped aside, her movements" | | 15 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, stirred" | | 16 | "Lucien's gaze lingered on the" | | 17 | "he said, his voice low" | | 18 | "Rory's eyes narrowed." | | 19 | "She pushed the questions aside," |
| | ratio | 0.76 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The faint scent of sandalwood and smoke wafted in, an unmistakable signature that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 1 | "Lucien's gaze lingered on the cat before coming back to Rory, his expression softening." | | 2 | "She pushed the questions aside, focusing on the physical sensations that threatened to overwhelm her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low" | | 1 | "she said finally, the words emerging in a tight, controlled tone" | | 2 | "he said, his voice dripping with understatement" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice a little sharper than she intended" | | 4 | "she repeated, her tone cautious" | | 5 | "she said finally, the word emerging in a soft, reluctant tone" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |