| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 59.6231% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 743 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.7873% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 743 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "testament" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "sinister" | | 3 | "amidst" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "navigating" |
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| 0.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 3 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" | | 2 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.1610% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 39.11 | | std | 16.02 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 47 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 505 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.01782178217821782 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005940594059405941 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 16.15 | | std | 7.4 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 10 |
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| 70.2899% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.43478260869565216 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 75.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva said, her words spilling out in a rush (say, spill out)" | | 1 | "The officer standing nearby, a young constable named Wilson, spoke up, (stand name speak up)" |
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