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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFT02072J4A799C72GXP6
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Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000254
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The doorbell
echoed
through the cluttered flat, a shrill interruption to the
symphony
of rustling pages and Ptolemy's contented purring. Aurora, buried under a mountain of research notes, didn't stir immediately. She
was used
to the occasional late-night visitor; Silas from downstairs often forgot his keys. But this was no timid knock, no hesitant press of the bell. This was insistent, purposeful. She pushed her glasses up her nose, marking her place with a finger before rising. Her
heart pounded in her chest
, a traitorous rhythm that betrayed her calm demeanor. She knew who it was before she even reached the door. Only one person knocked like that, like they owned the
very
air around them. Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself as she turned the three heavy bolts. The door creaked open to reveal Lucien Moreau, standing tall and impeccable in his tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, bored into hers, as cool and
unreadable
as ever. Yet, there was a tension in his shoulders, a tightness around his mouth that spoke of more than just the polite smile he offered. "Lucien," she acknowledged, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. "What brings you to my door at this hour?" He held up a bottle of wine, a peace offering. "I thought we might catch up, Rory. It's been a while." Aurora raised an eyebrow, leaning against the doorframe. "A while? It's been two years, Lucien. And you didn't exactly leave on the best terms." Lucien's gaze
flickered
to the scar on her wrist, visible beneath her rolled-up sleeve. His jaw tightened, but he didn't comment. Instead, he shrugged, a casual gesture at odds with the intensity in his eyes. "Water under the bridge, non? May I come in?" Aurora hesitated, then stepped aside, allowing him entry. The flat was a mess, books and scrolls strewn about, but Lucien didn't
seem to
notice or care. He moved with the ease of someone who knew the layout well, placing the wine bottle on the counter with practiced familiarity. "Still researching the arcane, I see," he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome. Aurora crossed her arms, watching him
warily
. "You didn't come here to discuss my reading habits, Lucien. What do you want?" Lucien turned to face her, his expression serious. "I need your help, Rory. I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important." Aurora's
eyes narrowed
. "My help? With what?" Lucien hesitated, then sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back hair. "There's a... situation. In my world. And I think you're the only one who can help me
navigate
it." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "Your world? You mean the supernatural one you dragged me into once upon a time?" Lucien nodded, his gaze steady on hers. "Yes. And I know you didn't want any part of it after... after what happened. But this is different. It's not something I can handle alone." Aurora bit her lip, considering. She'd spent the past two years trying to distance herself from that world, from Lucien. But she'd never been able to forget the way he'd looked at her that last night, the pain in his eyes when he'd walked away. And now, here he
was, asking
for her help. She sighed, uncrossing her arms. "Fine. But only because I owe you one. And because you're my best lead on finding a book I need." Lucien's lips twitched in a small smile. "I knew you couldn't resist a good mystery." Aurora rolled her eyes, but she couldn't suppress the small smile tugging at her own lips. "Don't push your luck, Moreau." Lucien chuckled, the sound warm and familiar, sending a shiver down Aurora's spine. She turned away, busying herself with pouring the wine, trying to ignore the way her heart raced at the sound. As they clinked glasses, Aurora
couldn't help but feel
a sense of inevitability. She'd thought she was done with this world, with Lucien. But here they
were, drawn
back together like moths to a flame. She could only hope they didn't get burned again.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
70.8879%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
687
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"warily"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"warily"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
27.2198%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
687
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"symphony"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"echoed"
count
1
4
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"symphony"
1
"flickered"
2
"unreadable"
3
"echoed"
4
"navigate"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"couldn't help but"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
42
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
42
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seem to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
21
mean
32.57
std
16.87
cv
0.518
sampleLengths
0
62
1
54
2
71
3
20
4
21
5
24
6
44
7
48
8
18
9
21
10
20
11
7
12
30
13
19
14
33
15
54
16
25
17
15
18
21
19
33
20
44
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
42
matches
0
"was used"
1
"were, drawn"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
97
matches
0
"was, asking"
99.1113%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
512
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.041015625
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.0078125
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
55
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
55
mean
12.44
std
5.53
cv
0.444
sampleLengths
0
20
1
11
2
15
3
12
4
4
5
15
6
14
7
11
8
14
9
14
10
17
11
16
12
24
13
11
14
9
15
10
16
11
17
8
18
16
19
14
20
7
21
14
22
9
23
8
24
18
25
22
26
18
27
7
28
14
29
8
30
12
31
3
32
4
33
11
34
19
35
4
36
15
37
7
38
26
39
5
40
15
41
25
42
9
43
5
44
20
45
7
46
8
47
16
48
5
49
13
78.7879%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.4727272727272727
totalSentences
55
uniqueOpeners
26
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she acknowledged, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her (acknowledge)"
1
"he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome (comment, run)"
82.9024%