Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFT02072J4A799C72GXP6

Run Details

Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000254

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The doorbell echoed through the cluttered flat, a shrill interruption to the symphony of rustling pages and Ptolemy's contented purring. Aurora, buried under a mountain of research notes, didn't stir immediately. She was used to the occasional late-night visitor; Silas from downstairs often forgot his keys. But this was no timid knock, no hesitant press of the bell. This was insistent, purposeful. She pushed her glasses up her nose, marking her place with a finger before rising. Her heart pounded in her chest, a traitorous rhythm that betrayed her calm demeanor. She knew who it was before she even reached the door. Only one person knocked like that, like they owned the very air around them. Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself as she turned the three heavy bolts. The door creaked open to reveal Lucien Moreau, standing tall and impeccable in his tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, bored into hers, as cool and unreadable as ever. Yet, there was a tension in his shoulders, a tightness around his mouth that spoke of more than just the polite smile he offered. "Lucien," she acknowledged, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. "What brings you to my door at this hour?" He held up a bottle of wine, a peace offering. "I thought we might catch up, Rory. It's been a while." Aurora raised an eyebrow, leaning against the doorframe. "A while? It's been two years, Lucien. And you didn't exactly leave on the best terms." Lucien's gaze flickered to the scar on her wrist, visible beneath her rolled-up sleeve. His jaw tightened, but he didn't comment. Instead, he shrugged, a casual gesture at odds with the intensity in his eyes. "Water under the bridge, non? May I come in?" Aurora hesitated, then stepped aside, allowing him entry. The flat was a mess, books and scrolls strewn about, but Lucien didn't seem to notice or care. He moved with the ease of someone who knew the layout well, placing the wine bottle on the counter with practiced familiarity. "Still researching the arcane, I see," he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome. Aurora crossed her arms, watching him warily. "You didn't come here to discuss my reading habits, Lucien. What do you want?" Lucien turned to face her, his expression serious. "I need your help, Rory. I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "My help? With what?" Lucien hesitated, then sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back hair. "There's a... situation. In my world. And I think you're the only one who can help me navigate it." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "Your world? You mean the supernatural one you dragged me into once upon a time?" Lucien nodded, his gaze steady on hers. "Yes. And I know you didn't want any part of it after... after what happened. But this is different. It's not something I can handle alone." Aurora bit her lip, considering. She'd spent the past two years trying to distance herself from that world, from Lucien. But she'd never been able to forget the way he'd looked at her that last night, the pain in his eyes when he'd walked away. And now, here he was, asking for her help. She sighed, uncrossing her arms. "Fine. But only because I owe you one. And because you're my best lead on finding a book I need." Lucien's lips twitched in a small smile. "I knew you couldn't resist a good mystery." Aurora rolled her eyes, but she couldn't suppress the small smile tugging at her own lips. "Don't push your luck, Moreau." Lucien chuckled, the sound warm and familiar, sending a shiver down Aurora's spine. She turned away, busying herself with pouring the wine, trying to ignore the way her heart raced at the sound. As they clinked glasses, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of inevitability. She'd thought she was done with this world, with Lucien. But here they were, drawn back together like moths to a flame. She could only hope they didn't get burned again.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
70.8879% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount687
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"warily"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"warily"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.2198% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount687
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"flickered"
2"unreadable"
3"echoed"
4"navigate"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean32.57
std16.87
cv0.518
sampleLengths
062
154
271
320
421
524
644
748
818
921
1020
117
1230
1319
1433
1554
1625
1715
1821
1933
2044
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"was used"
1"were, drawn"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was, asking"
99.1113% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount512
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.041015625
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0078125
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean12.44
std5.53
cv0.444
sampleLengths
020
111
215
312
44
515
614
711
814
914
1017
1116
1224
1311
149
1510
1611
178
1816
1914
207
2114
229
238
2418
2522
2618
277
2814
298
3012
313
324
3311
3419
354
3615
377
3826
395
4015
4125
429
435
4420
457
468
4716
485
4913
78.7879% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4727272727272727
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners26
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her (acknowledge)"
1"he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome (comment, run)"
82.9024%