Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFVYVYTN2ACM4YWWHNKAD

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15.1s
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$0.016452
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Azure

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path into the grove twisted between towering oaks that stood like ancient sentinels. Their trunks were gnarled and thick, roots curling into the earth with an intricate complexity that suggested more than mere age. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, found herself drawn into the small clearing ahead, lured by a whisper of wind that seemed more alive than the air of the world outside. Beside her, Nyx moved as a shadow among shades, their form a dark silhouette against the vibrant tapestry of wildflowers carpeting the earth. Occasionally, they shifted into the incorporeal, slipping easily between the pillars of light that filtered through the canopy, like ink dissolving into clear water. Isolde Varga moved toward the edge of the grove, her silver hair a cascade that caught the sun in threads of pure moonlight. As she walked, her feet left no mark upon the dew-kissed grass, her presence as ethereal as the very space they now inhabited. Rory watched the half-Fae seer, knowing their entry into this place was no accident. Isolde had beckoned them with cryptic words and eerie smiles. The clearing—no, the grove—stretched wider than it appeared at first glance, winding back into a realm of perpetual bloom. Flowers here defied seasons, splashes of color bright and unabashed as if the concept of time and weather were mere suggestions. Petals unfurled in shades Rory had no names for; hues so vivid they seemed almost out of place in the mortal world. Rory's eyes narrowed against the sunlight dappled with shadow, her gaze sweeping over the grove's boundaries marked by ancient standing stones carved from oak, gnarled figures half-remembered from bedtime stories and unspoken myths. Here, time itself felt strange—dilated, untrustworthy, as if each passing second could stretch or collapse with a rift in the blink of an eye. "Isolde," Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, though its sound seemed to hang in the air longer than normal, "how far does the grove extend?" Isolde paused, turning her lavender eyes upon Rory. "Distances measure differently here, child. It is not the feet traveled, but the heart unraveled." The Seer's words fell like the chiming of an ancient bell, resonant and enigmatic, a riddle wrapped in truth. Rory frowned slightly but let the question drift away, feeling a twinge of something at once familiar and unknowable. She brought her attention instead to a faint pulse of warmth against her chest. The Heartstone Pendant, its crimson gem cradled by a slender silver chain, rested beneath her shirt. Its steady beat reassured her, grounding her in this peculiar half-place between worlds. Nyx, ever curious and ever watchful, wafted close to one of the standing stones, their gaze impossible to discern but nonetheless focused on the faint etchings worn into the wood. "Old magic," they murmured, their voice an echo, a breath caught on the fringes of perception. "The grove holds secrets and sorrows alike." Rory nodded absently, though what Nyx said made little sense to her. Instead, she peered deeper into the grove, taking tentative steps along the path that wound through the explosion of florals and foliage. Every so often, she reached out, fingertips brushing against the velvet petals, her senses alight with sensation. The air carried the rich scent of earth mixed with a sweetness almost cloying, yet impossible to pinpoint. The world seemed alive, aware. A soft rustle brought her gaze to a nearby thicket where a delicate creature, neither bird nor beast as she understood them, flitted through the branches. Its wings shimmered in gradient hues, disappearing as quickly as it had appeared, a phantom of dream and light. "Welcome seekers, lost and found," Isolde called, her voice lilting through the trunks as if part of a ceaseless melody. "In this place between, find what you seek, but beware the price it may demand." Her words lingered with a weight Rory couldn't ignore but couldn't quite decipher. Still, something urged her forward—curiosity, necessity, or perhaps a combination of both intertwined with strands of fate she wasn't meant to untangle. Nyx remained close at hand, a silent companion with their own inscrutable motivations. Rory glanced at them, seeking reassurance, though what they offered was always ephemeral, as much a presence of absence as of substance. "I've never felt anything... quite like this," Rory confessed, feeling the need to speak it aloud, to anchor the sensation to reality by setting it free in words. "Few have," Nyx replied, their whisper carried gently on an unfelt breeze. "Fewer still remain unchanged when they leave. The grove holds a mirror to the soul." Together, they ventured further, deeper into Richmond Park's heart where the grove's influence folded reality like origami, capturing light and shadow in equal measure. Time meandered around them, weaving in and out as they walked beneath branches that formed a lattice of forgotten stories and unborn dreams. Perhaps an hour passed, maybe days—Rory couldn't tell, and that uncertainty lodged itself in her consciousness like a stubborn thorn. Yet it mattered little, diluted by the raw experience of stepping through a space that shrugged off the known and embraced the wondrous. Eventually, they found themselves before a natural archway formed by the intertwining of two colossal trees. The leaves here glimmered faintly, promising mysteries untold, desires unfulfilled. Rory hesitated, then moved closer, driven by an unnameable pull. Her hand went to the Heartstone, feeling its reassuring warmth, a quiet thrum against the cool air. "Beyond lies the why, the how, the choice unfound," Isolde intoned, her eyes distant, seeing across the thresholds others could not. "Enter, and the veil of mystery may part." Rory drew a deep breath, letting the grove's magic fill her lungs, wondering what awaited in the heart of this hidden world where the mortal stage brushed against the Fae-laden curtain. Nyx drifted forward first, a shadow's shadow, a gateway in their semblance. Rory followed them through the arch, stepping not into darkness, but into a place where possibilities bloomed and destinies danced upon the edge of existence. The grove carried them deeper, into a space unfurling like a tapestry woven from threads of stardust and night whispers, each step forward both a revelation and a promise. Here, at the boundary of known and unknown, Rory found herself on the cusp of discovery, a traveler on the most perilous journey—one that led into the quiet heart of magic and imagination.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, though its sound seemed to hang in the air longer than normal [barely]"
1"Nyx replied, their whisper carried gently on an unfelt breeze [gently]"
53.7037% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"ephemeral"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count2
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"ephemeral"
2"tapestry"
3"enigmatic"
4"sentinels"
5"shimmered"
6"velvet"
7"unspoken"
8"intricate"
9"weight"
10"echo"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"blink of an eye"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"in the blink of an eye"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
46.4807% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean46.48
std14.53
cv0.313
sampleLengths
068
147
270
362
457
527
642
762
853
974
1045
1135
1235
1335
1428
1527
1647
1743
1853
1929
2031
2137
2262
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"were gnarled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount988
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03744939271255061
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009109311740890687
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
87.5073% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean19.44
std7.17
cv0.369
sampleLengths
014
121
233
323
424
523
623
714
810
919
1021
1122
1233
1324
1427
158
1634
1719
1814
1916
2013
2130
2216
237
2412
2522
2617
2718
285
2926
3019
3120
3215
3313
3422
3513
3622
3728
3812
3915
4024
4123
4220
4323
4416
4510
4610
4717
4821
498
96.3636% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, though its sound seemed to hang in the air longer than normal (begin, hang)"
1"they murmured, their voice an echo, a breath caught on the fringes of perception (murmur, catch on)"
2"Isolde called, her voice lilting through the trunks as if part of a ceaseless melody (call, lilt)"
3"Rory confessed, feeling the need to speak it aloud, to anchor the sensation to reality by setting it free in words (confess, feel speak aloud, anchor set free)"
4"Nyx replied, their whisper carried gently on an unfelt breeze (reply, carry gently unfeel)"
5"Isolde intoned, her eyes distant, seeing across the thresholds others could not (intoned, do could not)"
74.8791%