Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
988
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
37
adverbRatio
0.03744939271255061
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.009109311740890687
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
55
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
87.5073%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
55
mean
19.44
std
7.17
cv
0.369
sampleLengths
0
14
1
21
2
33
3
23
4
24
5
23
6
23
7
14
8
10
9
19
10
21
11
22
12
33
13
24
14
27
15
8
16
34
17
19
18
14
19
16
20
13
21
30
22
16
23
7
24
12
25
22
26
17
27
18
28
5
29
26
30
19
31
20
32
15
33
13
34
22
35
13
36
22
37
28
38
12
39
15
40
24
41
23
42
20
43
23
44
16
45
10
46
10
47
17
48
21
49
8
96.3636%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.6
totalSentences
55
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, though its sound seemed to hang in the air longer than normal (begin, hang)"
1
"they murmured, their voice an echo, a breath caught on the fringes of perception (murmur, catch on)"
2
"Isolde called, her voice lilting through the trunks as if part of a ceaseless melody (call, lilt)"
3
"Rory confessed, feeling the need to speak it aloud, to anchor the sensation to reality by setting it free in words (confess, feel speak aloud, anchor set free)"
4
"Nyx replied, their whisper carried gently on an unfelt breeze (reply, carry gently unfeel)"
5
"Isolde intoned, her eyes distant, seeing across the thresholds others could not (intoned, do could not)"