| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The Seer's words fell like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 76.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1075 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1075 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "intricate" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "enigmatic" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "ceaseless" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "ephemeral" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "in the blink of an eye" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1069 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 977 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Nyx | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Seer | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Together | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-laden | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.681 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more alive than the air of the world outside" | | 1 | "quite decipher" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.806 | | wordCount | 1069 | | matches | | 0 | "not the feet traveled, but the heart unraveled" | | 1 | "neither bird nor" | | 2 | "not into darkness, but into a place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 46.48 | | std | 14.53 | | cv | 0.313 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 62 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "The clearing—no, the grove—stretched wider than it appeared at first glance, winding back into a realm of perpetual bloom." | | 1 | "Petals unfurled in shades Rory had no names for; hues so vivid they seemed almost out of place in the mortal world." | | 2 | "Here, time itself felt strange—dilated, untrustworthy, as if each passing second could stretch or collapse with a rift in the blink of an eye." | | 3 | "Still, something urged her forward—curiosity, necessity, or perhaps a combination of both intertwined with strands of fate she wasn't meant to untangle." | | 4 | "Perhaps an hour passed, maybe days—Rory couldn't tell, and that uncertainty lodged itself in her consciousness like a stubborn thorn." | | 5 | "Here, at the boundary of known and unknown, Rory found herself on the cusp of discovery, a traveler on the most perilous journey—one that led into the quiet heart of magic and imagination." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 988 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.038461538461538464 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009109311740890687 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 87.51% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 19.44 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.369 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 96.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.6 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Occasionally, they shifted into the" | | 1 | "Instead, she peered deeper into" | | 2 | "Perhaps an hour passed, maybe" | | 3 | "Eventually, they found themselves before" |
| | ratio | 0.078 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks were gnarled and" | | 1 | "She brought her attention instead" | | 2 | "Its steady beat reassured her," | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice an" | | 4 | "Its wings shimmered in gradient" | | 5 | "Her words lingered with a" | | 6 | "Her hand went to the" |
| | ratio | 0.137 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into the grove" | | 1 | "Their trunks were gnarled and" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga moved toward the" | | 4 | "Rory watched the half-Fae seer," | | 5 | "Isolde had beckoned them with" | | 6 | "The clearing—no, the grove—stretched wider" | | 7 | "Flowers here defied seasons, splashes" | | 8 | "Petals unfurled in shades Rory" | | 9 | "Rory's eyes narrowed against the" | | 10 | "Here, time itself felt strange—dilated," | | 11 | "Rory began, her voice barely" | | 12 | "Isolde paused, turning her lavender" | | 13 | "The Seer's words fell like" | | 14 | "Rory frowned slightly but let" | | 15 | "She brought her attention instead" | | 16 | "The Heartstone Pendant, its crimson" | | 17 | "Its steady beat reassured her," | | 18 | "Nyx, ever curious and ever" | | 19 | "they murmured, their voice an" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, found herself drawn into the small clearing ahead, lured by a whisper of wind that seemed more alive than the air o…" | | 1 | "Occasionally, they shifted into the incorporeal, slipping easily between the pillars of light that filtered through the canopy, like ink dissolving into clear w…" | | 2 | "Isolde Varga moved toward the edge of the grove, her silver hair a cascade that caught the sun in threads of pure moonlight." | | 3 | "Flowers here defied seasons, splashes of color bright and unabashed as if the concept of time and weather were mere suggestions." | | 4 | "Here, time itself felt strange—dilated, untrustworthy, as if each passing second could stretch or collapse with a rift in the blink of an eye." | | 5 | "Time meandered around them, weaving in and out as they walked beneath branches that formed a lattice of forgotten stories and unborn dreams." | | 6 | "Yet it mattered little, diluted by the raw experience of stepping through a space that shrugged off the known and embraced the wondrous." | | 7 | "Rory drew a deep breath, letting the grove's magic fill her lungs, wondering what awaited in the heart of this hidden world where the mortal stage brushed again…" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde intoned, her eyes distant, seeing across the thresholds others could not" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |