| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 703 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 703 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "enigma" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "delved" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "transfixed" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "macabre" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "kaleidoscope" | | 12 | "cacophony" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "peril" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 33 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 703 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 599 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 6 | | Seer | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Guarded | 1 | | Shadows | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartwood | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.749 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "susurrations that seemed to emanate from the ancient oaks themselves" | | 1 | "pools that seemed to hold the very essence of the Shadows, while Isolde's presence wove in the silver, gossamer threads of Fae magic" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 703 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 50.21 | | std | 15.83 | | cv | 0.315 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 31 |
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| 84.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "were marked" | | 1 | "was echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 75 | | matches | | |
| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 36 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Each step revealed a new wonder: a cluster of mushrooms emitting a soft, ethereal glow; the sweet, mournful trill of an unseen flute; and the soft, whispery susurrations that seemed to emanate from the ancient oaks themselves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 602 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.026578073089700997 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008305647840531562 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 36 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 74.45% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 36 | | mean | 19.53 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.336 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 31 |
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| 71.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 36 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's eyes, bright blue and" | | 1 | "The soft rustle of silver" | | 2 | "Isolde's voice whispered on the" | | 3 | "Nyx, ever the enigma, flowed" | | 4 | "The Shade's humanoid form undulated" | | 5 | "Aurora, flanked by Nyx and" | | 6 | "She had been to many" | | 7 | "The Fae-touched atmosphere was alive," | | 8 | "Each step revealed a new" | | 9 | "Aurora's breath caught, her gaze" | | 10 | "Nyx's whispery voice carried on" | | 11 | "Aurora's eyes dropped, her thoughts" | | 12 | "A faint, wistful smile touched" | | 13 | "The path, overgrown with wildflowers" | | 14 | "Isolde's laughter, a soft, tinkling" | | 15 | "Nyx's influence introduced dark, glossy" | | 16 | "Aurora's own footfalls, however, were" | | 17 | "Unease crept over her as" | | 18 | "The air was heavy with" | | 19 | "Aurora's voice was barely above" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "As they stepped across the threshold, the air thickened, heavy with the scent of blooming wildflowers that defied the mortal season." | | 1 | "Each step revealed a new wonder: a cluster of mushrooms emitting a soft, ethereal glow; the sweet, mournful trill of an unseen flute; and the soft, whispery sus…" | | 2 | "Nyx's influence introduced dark, glossy pools that seemed to hold the very essence of the Shadows, while Isolde's presence wove in the silver, gossamer threads …" | | 3 | "Aurora's own footfalls, however, were marked by an unsettling silence, as if the grove itself was unsure how to reflect her turbulent, mortal heart." | | 4 | "An inexplicable connection stirred within her, as if the very essence of the grove, the pendant, and her own unyielding spirit were becoming intertwined." | | 5 | "Without thinking, Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the trunk of the Heartwood." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "wistful smile touched, the others following in silence" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |