| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 935 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 935 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "skipped a beat" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 15.71% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 8 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "t with longing" | | 2 | "filled with awe" | | 3 | "d with awe" | | 4 | "a sense of unease" | | 5 | "filled with pride" | | 6 | "d with pride" | | 7 | "a sense of wonder" |
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| 72.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 935 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 791 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Shadow | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Wardens | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shadow" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Gluttony" | | 6 | "Prince" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.805 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "silhouette that seemed to absorb the meager light" | | 1 | "runes that seemed to shift and change under her gaze" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 935 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.61% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that she" | | 1 | "knew that this" | | 2 | "knew that she" |
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| 94.14% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 40.65 | | std | 19.49 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 795 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.026415094339622643 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010062893081761006 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 5.72 | | cv | 0.416 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 53.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.38235294117647056 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.39% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "They had agreed to this" | | 3 | "She walked barefoot, leaving no" | | 4 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 5 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 6 | "She felt a tingling sensation," | | 7 | "she breathed, her voice barely" | | 8 | "They looked around, their gaze" | | 9 | "they said, their voice soft" | | 10 | "she said, her voice echoing" | | 11 | "She splashed her face, the" | | 12 | "She looked up, her eyes" | | 13 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 14 | "It was delicate, its quill" | | 15 | "she asked, showing the feather" | | 16 | "she said, her voice filled" | | 17 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 18 | "She had also heard of" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.459 | |
| 41.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "They had agreed to this" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer," | | 4 | "She walked barefoot, leaving no" | | 5 | "Rory paused at the ancient" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pulsed stronger, its" | | 7 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 8 | "Nyx shifted, their form solidifying" | | 9 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 10 | "Isolde nodded, her eyes reflecting" | | 11 | "Rory stepped between the standing" | | 12 | "She felt a tingling sensation," | | 13 | "The Fae Grove was a" | | 14 | "The air was warm and" | | 15 | "A crystal stream babbled over" | | 16 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 17 | "she breathed, her voice barely" | | 18 | "Nyx stepped through the boundary," | | 19 | "They looked around, their gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx, the Shadow, moved like a whisper, their form a shifting silhouette that seemed to absorb the meager light." | | 1 | "The Fae Grove was a riot of color and life, wildflowers blooming year-round, their petals unfurling in the soft morning light." | | 2 | "They looked around, their gaze lingering on the ancient oak at the grove's heart, its massive trunk twisted with age, its branches stretching out like welcoming…" | | 3 | "She looked up, her eyes catching on something shimmering in the sunlight." | | 4 | "As they prepared to leave the Fae Grove, Rory looked back at the ancient oak, its branches stretching out like welcoming arms." | | 5 | "She felt a sense of wonder, of awe at the magic that surrounded her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, more to herself than to her companions" | | 1 | "she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "they said, their voice soft with longing" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |