Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
789
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.044359949302915085
lyAdverbCount
21
lyAdverbRatio
0.026615969581749048
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
65
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
65
mean
17.34
std
7.33
cv
0.423
sampleLengths
0
21
1
25
2
13
3
27
4
19
5
20
6
16
7
11
8
16
9
23
10
28
11
14
12
18
13
27
14
20
15
27
16
23
17
8
18
10
19
18
20
19
21
10
22
15
23
20
24
7
25
13
26
36
27
15
28
18
29
12
30
27
31
15
32
11
33
11
34
21
35
12
36
4
37
22
38
21
39
16
40
27
41
7
42
7
43
31
44
15
45
14
46
10
47
29
48
6
49
11
89.7436%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5384615384615384
totalSentences
65
uniqueOpeners
35
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Eva said, her voice barely rising above a whisper, as though the market's usual rules of discretion still held (say, barely rise still hold)"
1
"Harlow responded, her tone brisk (respond)"
2
"Harlow said, the firmness in her voice steadying them both (say, steady)"
3
"she mused (muse)"
4
"Eva ventured, her satchel rustling innocuously as she rifled for a notebook (venture, rustle innocuously rifle)"
5
"Harlow said finally (say finally)"
6
"Harlow explained, scanning the perimeter where shadows gathered dense and quiet (explain, scan gather)"
7
"Harlow replied, voice pensive (reply, voice)"
8
"Harlow agreed, surety threading her words (agree, thread)"
9
"Harlow said, flipping the token idly between deft fingers, noting the subtle notches that weren't in the typical designs she'd seen (say, flip note do be not see)"