| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Harlow said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 69.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1133 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1133 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "anticipation" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "trepidation" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "disrupted" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "disrupting" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "palpable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 58.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1127 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 781 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 17 | | Quinn | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.412 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "chill that seemed to cling to the skin like a whispered secret" | | 1 | "appeared careless disorderly, but there was intention there, she was sure of it" | | 2 | "as if sensing her own disturbance" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.887 | | wordCount | 1127 | | matches | | 0 | "not in noise, but in absence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.27% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 43.35 | | std | 16.71 | | cv | 0.385 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 87 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 43 |
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| 91.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "was, ticked" | | 1 | "been upset" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "There was a particular absence of the usual market sounds; no murmured haggles or the rustle of cloaks and coin." | | 1 | "The market's transience—a location that shifted with each moon's cycle—made it an elusive target, and now a supernatural tool linked to it lay openly on the floor, its presence as much a statement as any crime." | | 2 | "This place had an aura that spoke not in noise, but in absence—what was missing often more telling than what remained." | | 3 | "She moved swiftly, crouching to retrieve a small object—a bone token, its surface smooth and worn, an entry pass carved for only the most trusted patrons of the market." | | 4 | "Together, they would unpeel the layers of this new mystery, deftly as surgeons—or so they hoped—each revelation a fresh wound exposed, a deeper truth unveiled." |
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| 90.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 789 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.044359949302915085 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.026615969581749048 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 17.34 | | std | 7.33 | | cv | 0.423 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 89.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5384615384615384 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an unnatural quiescence that" | | 1 | "Instead, she stood still as" | | 2 | "Perhaps this was yet another" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came out in" | | 1 | "Her watch, a relic as" | | 2 | "Her gaze fell on a" | | 3 | "It appeared careless, disorderly, but" | | 4 | "Her glasses perched precariously on" | | 5 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 6 | "She shook her head" | | 7 | "She rolled her shoulders, eyes" | | 8 | "She moved swiftly, crouching to" | | 9 | "She pocketed it, glancing back" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 30.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beneath Camden hung" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 2 | "Her breath came out in" | | 3 | "Veil Market lay dormant around" | | 4 | "The station, usually dressed in" | | 5 | "Harlow's sharp eyes, ever-brown and" | | 6 | "Her watch, a relic as" | | 7 | "This was a crime scene," | | 8 | "Her gaze fell on a" | | 9 | "It appeared careless, disorderly, but" | | 10 | "Harlow kneeled, her boots scraping" | | 11 | "Eva Kowalski stood nearby, arms" | | 12 | "Her glasses perched precariously on" | | 13 | "Eva said, her voice barely" | | 14 | "Harlow responded, her tone brisk" | | 15 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 16 | "Eva exhaled slowly, tucking a" | | 17 | "She shook her head" | | 18 | "Harlow nodded, rising to her" | | 19 | "She rolled her shoulders, eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beneath Camden hung heavy with a damp chill that seemed to cling to the skin like a whispered secret." | | 1 | "Beneath was a small brass compass, its patina of verdigris glowing softly in the dim light, the needle quivering in agitation as if sensing her own disturbance." | | 2 | "The market's transience—a location that shifted with each moon's cycle—made it an elusive target, and now a supernatural tool linked to it lay openly on the flo…" | | 3 | "She pocketed it, glancing back at the compass, its needle jittering faintly." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow responded, her tone brisk" | | 1 | "Eva ventured, her satchel rustling innocuously as she rifled for a notebook" | | 2 | "Harlow replied, voice pensive" | | 3 | "Harlow agreed, surety threading her words" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow responded (respond)" | | 1 | "Harlow explained (explain)" | | 2 | "Harlow agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |